Well, I first MUST give some great thanks to my reviewers. I was beginning to hate this story and felt not so great about my writing abilities, then I got a few reviews that totally amped me up and I felt so good and now I am gonna write like nobody's business! Hahaha!
OOH OOH! I got an iPod finally! London clap Yay me!
Last week was my Bar Mitzvah! Yaaay! It went PERFECTLY! It was so cool I GOT THREE GRAND! 3,000 smackaroonis! Woohoo! Then I blew half of it on my iPod and a new computer heehee. a really GOOD computer though... Anyways, after many looong weeks of waiting, HERE is chapter 5, of: The Perfect Storm.
Disclaimer: Yadda yadda I don't own anything blah blah blah
Chapter Rating: Strong PG-13 / T
"I can give you, a new life...Yes, I want you to die..."
-"Let's do it."
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Heheheh...
Good-Bye. My computer said.
"What?" Suddenly a Pop-up appeared.
"Damn popups..." I said, about to close it. "Wait." I looked closer.
CONGRATULATIONS!
YOU ARE OUR NEW WINNER!
YOOOOU WIN!
CLICK HERE TO GET-
...a new life...
"What?" I said again. Taking a risk, I clicked. My computer died. I saw a smaaalll square in the middle of the screen. It looked like a movie. I saw two people fighting with swords and shields, and wizards... Is this Rainstorm's 'new life'? A movie? The movie square started getting bigger. And bigger. And... bigger. As big as half of my screen. As big as my screen. As- Oh my god. It's going outside of my computer. It's as big as my wall now... My door opened.
"Hey Zack, what's uh- What the hell?"
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PHOOSH
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Blink. Blink.
"Ugghhh..." I sat up and rubbed my head. "What happened?" I looked around. I was in a large green meadow. Empty. One, two, three, four trees. No one else here... except...CODY! Cody was laying on the ground on his stomach next to me, seemingly unconsciousness. I leaned over and shook him.
"Cody. Cody!"
"Huh? Wha-?" He rolled over. "Zack?" I smiled.
"Yeah."
"Where are we?"
"Ah- I have no clue."
"How did we get here? And- wait, ARGH! What the HELL is going on?"
"Um. Cody, I need to tell you about something..." I blushed. This was my fault. I explained everything to him. About Rainstorm and what he promised, and how he wanted me to die, everything... He was silent all the way through, but when I finished...
"Zack?"
"Yeah?"
"DO YOU EXPECT ME TO BELIEVE THAT FUCKING STORY! WHERE THE HELL ARE WE!"
"Cody! I'm telling the truth!"
"Hah! Yeah right!"
"I am!"
"Shut up."
"CODY! IT'S THE TRUTH!"
SMACK
"OW!"
"SHUT UP!"
I grabbed his hand. "Stop." I muttered. His hand started turning purple because I was holding his wrist too hard.
"S-stop." He managed. I let go. "Are you for real?"
"Yes."
"Fine. I believe you."
FLASH
"OH MY G-D!"
"WHAT THE HELL?"
All of a sudden the entire grassland behind us was aflame!
"RUN!" We started sprinting in the other direction. "Ohmygoshohmygosh!"
"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?"
"I DON'T KNOW! JUST KEEP RUNNING!"
Somehow the fire was 'chasing' after us.
Cody looked at me. "AND YOU ASKED FOR THIS?"
"WHEN I ACCEPTED A NEW LIFE LIKE A LIFE I WANTED, I didn't EXPECT THIS!"
"YEAH WELL YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE A STUPID THING LIKE THAT AND ACCEPT A
'NEW LIFE' FROM SOME BASTARD IN AN EMAIL!"
"JUST SHUT UP AND RUN FASTER!"
"DON'T TELL ME TO SHUT UP!"
"WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS!"
JUMP
Suddenly a small... woman I think, jumped down from... where? She was clothed in all blue silk robes which bore an odd insignia. Around her neck was a sparkling blue sapphire. My brother and I stopped in her appearance. She slowly turned around to look at us. She was beautiful, I noticed. Typical me. But she was. She had long, flowing blonde hair which fit well with her sky blue robes. When she spoke, she spoke with a voice of an angel.
"Keep running. I will hold off the Fire and meet up with you."
Even though she spoke with a gentle voice, it commanded obedience. Cody and I immediately began running again. I looked back at the woman. The fire had stopped in front of her and became a humongous wall of fire, at least 500 feet high. I grabbed Cody's shoulder.
"Zack! We gotta go!"
"Cody. Look." I pointed to the woman and the fire. The woman raised her arms high and faintly I heard say something that COULDN'T have been english.
"Histemi...lasciare maintenant!"
"Zack. What did she say?"
"I don't, know..."
The fire kept getting taller, but the woman was not daunted.
"NOSHEH! BOYACH ARKOV ASHUTOH!" She yelled. From out of nowhere, a HUGE wave of water rose behind the woman and completely flushed out the fire. I started to run towards it, thinking the woman must be drowning.
"ZACK!" Cody yelled. He ran after me. Being a little faster, he caught up to me and dove at my ankles, bringing me down.
"CODY! LET GO!"
"NO! YOU'RE GONNA KILL YOURSELF!"
"WHAT IF SHE'S DROWNING?"
"SHE'S NOT!"
"HOW DO YOU KNOW?"
"Because. Look." I looked where the woman was standing. The water slowly began disappearing, leaving the woman in the middle completely soaked, but seemingly okay. She walked over to us. Again, typical me thought she looked rather attractive drenched like that. I shook the thoughts out of my head.
"Are you okay?" I asked.
"Of course." She said, with a soft voice.
"Thank goodness." I muttered.
"Who are you?" Cody blurted. The woman chuckled.
"I am Kyra."
"I'm Zack." "And I'm Cody."
"I know."
"You do?"
"Yes."
"How?"
"Legends have talked about this day for over five thousand years."
"Five...thousand...years?" Cody asked, breathless, "Us?"
"Yes!"
Cody and I looked at her like she was crazy. Where were we?
"What do you want us to do?"
"Well, we first must get you into some more noble clothing!"
There it is! I hope you liked it. I do. Kinda. Well please review! And for those of you, like me, who are missing Maddie, just be patient! Haha.
Some shoutouts: (sorry they're short Im kinda rushed right now)
swimmergirl0001121: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking my story!
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ArandomKid: Not sure I 100 get your reviereallyw, but I'm glad you're reading it and liking it enough to review!
LuckieCharmz: yeah I considered making it an original story, but this way it would be easier for ppl to read it, and I already have the characters' personalities and stuff, but I'm so happy that you like it so much!