Whoa, if I new threatening ppl worked to get more reviews, I would have done it sooner!!! :P One thing though, no one seemed to care about the suggestion of some Mir/San!!!! I'm assuming you guys don't want it then?
Miroku: NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
KagomesWish: Sorry, Miroku! I'll give ppl one more chance to answer on this important issue!
Erin: So, ppl! In your review, just put "I Vote YES!" or "I Vote NO!"
KagomesWish: That's right! And I need at least 3 votes total or I'll assume that ppl just don't care about the issue and won't write it! After all, it dose mean lease work for me!
Erin: YA!!!! GENNA SLAVES AWAY HOURS OF HER LIFE JUST TO PUT STUFF UP FOR YOU!!! YES, YOU!!! THE ONE WHO IS ACTUALY READING THE FANFIC!! SHE GETS NO BENIFET WHAT SO EVER!! SHE DOSN'T GET PAID, IT DOSN'T HELP HER GRADES, IT DOSN'T DO ANYTHING BUT INTERTAIN YOU GUYS FOR A FEW STINKING MINUTES OF YOUR WORTHLESS LIVES!!!!!!/severe eye twitch/
Everyone but Erin stares at her:............ um................
KagomesWish:..... Erin.... I REALLY don't mind that much.... and I think you scared every one away/points to empty chairs/
Erin: HEY! WAIT!!! COME BACK!!! I DON'T BITE!!!!!
KagomesWish: /cough/much/cough......
Erin: Hey! How could you accuse me of something like that! I FEEL SO BETRAYED!!! IT WAS YOUR FAULT ANYWAY, MAKING THE NORMAL PEOPLEZ LEAVE!!!! You have the keyboard! I thought you were my friend!/turns away and begins to cry/
KagomesWish:....Erin..... Did you take your crazy pills today?
Erin:/looking shifty eyed/.... YES!......./looks at ground/................................no.....
KagomesWish: AHA! I knew it!....... OMG!!!!! CRAP!!!!!!
Erin: What?
KagomesWish points to billion e-mails that say SUED: I..... I FORGOT THE DISCLAIMERS!!!!!!!
Erin: WHAT!!!!!
KagomesWish: I OWN INUYASHA!!!!!! WHAT ARE YOU PPL TALKING ABOUT!!!!!!!
/lawyers close in/
KagomesWish: OKAY!!!! FINE!!!!!! I DON'T OWN INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL I HAVE IF THIS INUYASHA KEYCHAIN AND SOME BOOKS!!!!!! I DON'T OWN INUYASHA!!!!!!....................yet.................
/Erin beats lawyers asses and the rest flee for their lives/
Erin: And I'm the crazy one?
KagomesWish: HEY!!!!!!
WARNING: Some pervertedness in this chapie!!! Oh, and for most of it, I'm trying a new writing style were you jump from perspective to perspective. It'll go Inu, Kag, San/Mir, Inu, Kag, Nar, Inu, San/Mir, Kag, Inu, San/Mir. Confusing, isn't it? Don't worry tho! It is obvious WHO'S perspective we're in at the beginning of each section!!
Inuyasha dashed behind a tree, so that Kagome wouldn't see him. His face was as red as the juices from a pomegranate (Beta's note: pomegranate is a fruit, and in case you don't know, it don't get much redder than that!) and he was covering his eyes with his hands, thought he did not know if he was doing it to be respectful or that, in some twisted way, Kagome would not 'sit' him in oblivion if she found him with his eyes closed.
Ah, shit!! Inuyasha thought, If Kagome sees me, I'm DEAD!!! DAMN MY FRICKING FEET!!!!! DAMN THAT BLOODY MONK!!!!! I'M GOING TO KILL HIM!!!!! I'M IN HIS PARADISE!!!!!! Accept he would probably prefer Sango........ WAIT A MINUTE!!!! Were IS Sango? Leaving Kagome alone wile she's injured?! What if a demon showed up? Oh, Inuyasha! Are you forgetting? YOU'RE a demon and YOU'RE here!!! Who are you? I'm that little nagging voice inside your head. Ah, shit! Not you again! You show up in so MANY FRICKING FANFICS!!!! Yes, I know, and I quite in enjoy it! DAMN! Now, now! Don't say that. OH YEAH! DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!!!! SEE I SAID IT MORE!! Alright, go ahead. It won't make me go away. SHIT!!! ....... Hey..... waddaminute!!! I'M HAVING AN ARGUMENT WITH MYSELF AGAIN!!!!!! Yes, yes you are! Don't you feel pathetic? Can we get back to the situation at hand? Okay.
Inuyasha listened. Yep, Kagome was still there, he could hear splashing. He had a plan of escape, but it.... 'unfortunately'...... involved turning around. His plan was to wait until Kagomes turned her back and run. Inuyasha let out a large gulp, and slowly turned around...
SHIT!!!!! THAT WAS A DUMB PLAN!!!!!!! Inuyasha thought, quickly whipping back around.
"OSUWARI!!!!!!!!!!!!" ....................
Kagomes was peacefully sitting in the hot spring, while lost in deep thought.
Inuyasha.... she wondered, Are you okay? You've been acting so.... so not you lately. What's wrong? Was it something I did or said? Or is it something different entirely?
Kagomes sighed. It was useless. Inuyasha was about as easy to read as mayonnaise. But still.... She couldn't help but feel that she was somehow involved in Inuyasha's strange behaviour.
Kagomes sank deep into the hot water, wetting her hair so she could wash it. When she arose for air, though........ she saw a certain hanyou peeking from behind a tree.
"So, you think Inuyasha's planning something?" Sango asked after Miroku had finished his explanation of the earlier events, perhaps leaving out the TRUE intentions of his old plan.
"Yes... but I'm not quite sure WHAT it is that he's planning." Miroku responded, "He wasn't acting this way before we put Kikyo at rest b-"
"WHAT!!!!!! YOU TWO PUT KIKYO AT REST!!!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?!!?!?!?"
"What? NO!!!! DAMN!!! BAD MIROKU, BAD!!!! Ugh, I wasn't supposed to tell.... but yes, we did. It was Inuyasha's idea actually, not mine. It came as quite a shock really. He told me he knew he couldn't do it himself, something about a promise he didn't want to break even more. It was strange indeed."
"You don't think he's chosen do you?"
"What do you mean?"
"Well, Inuyasha was always trying to decide, Kikyo or Kagome. Do you think this means he has chosen Kagome? I seems likely."
"I think we're gonna need a bit more information, Sango. Wouldn't you agree?" Miroku asked in a shady voice.
"Why, yes, Miroku. I think we do." Sango responded, a devilish smile creeping across her face.
Kirara just mewed from her lap.
"HEY!! GOW DAMP FENCHY KITCH......blah,blah,blah(insert random muffled Inuyasha yelling here)" Inuyasha furiously shouted from the ground witch he was currently being oh-so pleasantly acquainted too. As he had been yelling like this since his most recent 'sit'.
It was a while until Inuyasha realised the eyrie silence that was hovering, thick in the air.
He raised his head form the dirt and looked to the water.
His eyes widened...
Kagomes was lying face down in the water...
and she wasn't moving...
" OSUWARI!!!!!!" Kagome screamed in her rage.
HOW DARE INUYASHA PEEK ON ME!!!!!!! MIROKU MUST BE RUBBING OFF ON HIM!!!!!
Then why don't you kill him?
WHAT?! Who was that?
Kill him... kill Inuyasha
NO!!! STOP!!!!! WHO ARE YOU!!!!!! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!!!!!!
Try as you may... You can't rid me from your mind... in fact... I quite enjoy watching you struggle...
Kagome shakily stood from the water, her eyes switching from brown... to crimson red. Her hands were twitching uncontrollably, her face was switching from bloodlust to terror, as she continued to stumble through the water, her mind in a constant fight for reign.
Kagome was inching her way towards Inuyasha, who was still lying on the ground from her 'sit'. She was half way across the spring when she gained the upper hand.
Accept the fact you can not defeat me!
NEVER!!!! I WON'T GIVE IN!!!!!! I WON'T KILL INUYASHA!!!!!!!!
You must and WIIL!!!
NO I WON'T!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU DON'T HAVE A CHOICE! I MANIPULATE YOUR BODY, WENCH!!!!
ACCORDING TO WHOM?!?!?!??!!!!!! IT'S MY CHOICE!!!!!! YOU WON'T WIN!!!! I CONTROL MY WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What force was controlling her body began to fail and she took the chance. She feel into the water and, still fighting in her mind, she thrashed in all directions, her head remaining under.
Kagome gasped for breath, and inhaled the water. Kagome could see nothing but pure white. It consumed her eyes until black started to creep from all sides. It began to envelope the white until there was only a small, bright, speck of it, resembling much a star. Kagome had lost consciousness.
Naraku retreated in pain.
His lungs felt as if they were on fire and his chest bled.
Damn Inuyasha's bitch!!! Naraku thought in pain, She will pay! She can't and won't defeat me!!
A twisted smile crept across his face...
I'll have to 'honour' that wench with my presence again... soon.... very soon...
"KAGOME!!!!!!" Inuyasha called as he ran into the water.
He reached her still form and turned her to face him... and his terror increased.
"Kagome? KAGOME!!!" he called again. The girls face was pale and still. Inuyasha perked his ears for any sound of breath other than his own choked.... there was none...
Inuyasha cursed and brought Kagome ashore, covering her with his red haori.(sp?)
He was panicked. He thought she was gone, gone forever...
If he were any other person, Inuyasha knew he would be sobbing and completely helpless...
...but he was not any other person...
... he would try...
... no, he WOULD save her!
Inuyasha brought his hands above her chest and began to try and revive
her. He pressed in time and breathed into her, trying with all his might.
Inuyasha's stomach had a knot in it and his heart was in his throat, beating rapidly with out end. His nose had begun to bleed because of his heart, but he didn't care. All he cared about was Kagome and getting her to breathe.
A wave of relief washed over Inuyasha when Kagome began to choke and cough up water.
Sango, Miroku, Shippo and Kirara were beginning to wonder what was keeping Kagome all this time.
Seeing as Inuyasha was missing too, Miroku had his own ideas.
UNFORTUNATELY, Miroku had EXPRESSED those thoughts and earned himself a nice, large lump on the head as a little 'reminder' from Sango. What would that reminder be, you ask? TO KEEP YOUR BIG MOUTH SHUT!!
"I'm really starting to worry, Miroku! I KNEW I shouldn't have left Kagome alone!" Sango ranted, "I'm so STUPID!!!!! STUPID, STUPID, STUPID!!!!!!!"
"My lady Sango" Miroku chanted, "I do not believe you are stupid. I think of you very highly!"
"I'm sure you think of my BACKSIDE even higher!" said demon slayer retorted.
"W-well.... that's true, but-"
/SMACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!/
Kagomes eyes fluttered.
Why dose my chest feel like it's burning? I-I.... I can't remember a thing...
Suddenly, Kagome realised she was being carried. She looked up to see Inuyasha, his face looking grim.
Inuyasha... What happened? she wanted to ask, but she drifted off to sleep before she had the chance.
Inuyasha ran on as fast as his legs would carry him, cradling Kagome to his chest.
Hold on a little longer, Kagome. he thought, hold on.... I'll get you some help.....maybe Miroku..... he can help you more than I can...
After Kagome had first awoken, she hadn't said a word. All she had done was cough up the water in her lungs, take a few rasping breaths, and then fainted.
Inuyasha wasn't sure if she was alright or not... he just didn't know...
Miroku and Sango were having their usual arguments after Miroku had regained consciousness and proved Sango's earlier point.
Sango was just about to hit him again when Inuyasha bolted into the clearing, holding the sleeping Kagome in his arms. He was out of breath and there were scratches along his face, arms, and legs from the numerous amount of branches that scratched him along the way.
"KAGOME!!!" Sango cried running up to her friend, Miroku and Shippo right behind her. "I-Is she alright?!?!?!!!"
As if on queue, Kagome began to stir and cough. Her eyes fluttered open as she was met with the sight of her friends gazing upon her.
"W-What happened?" the girl groggily asked, raising her hand to her still sore throat.
"Ya, nearly drowned, that's what happened." Inuyasha rudely responded, placing her back down on the ground.
"What?! I can't remember a thing."
"Keh! Figures..."
"Hey! Sit!"
/CRASH!/
"Uh....lady Kagome, Inuyasha was the reason that you are with us now." Miroku said.
"Oh..... uh..... sorry Inuyasha!"
Just my luck.... thought the hanyou
"Kagome, back to the true situation at hand here," Sango intervened, "Are you SURE you can't remember anything?"
"No, I really can't. I must have just slipped and bumped my head or something."
"Hmmmm... seems logical, but are you sure you're alright, Lady Kagome?" probed Miroku.
"Don't worry, Miroku! I'm fine!"
"Who's worrying?" Came Inuyasha's crude reply, who had just removed his face from the dirt, which, by the way, did not taste very good.
"SIT BOY!!!!!"
TAA DAA!!!!!!!! CRAP!!!! That took a while to write!!!!!
Inuyasha: You're the one with the slow fingers!
KagomesWish:..... Kagome......
Kagome: Already on it, SIT BOY!!!!!!!
/CRASH!!!!!!!!/
Inuyasha: THAT'S THE FOURTH FREAKING TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KagomesWish: Huh? Oh, I guess I really DID sit you a lot in this chapter...
Erin: BUT WASN'T IT FUN!?!?!?!?!
KagomesWish: YA!! IT WAS FUN!!!!!!
Inuyasha: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
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Inuyasha:........XP.........
Shippo: CHOCOLATE!!!!!!
Erin and KagomesWish: Chocolate? Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight........ you do that.......
REVIEW RESPONSES!!!!!!!!!!!:
Samieko:
Yes.... I see that..... UPDATE!!!!!
Angel6582:
#1
SORRY!! I really didn't mean to punish you!! You're one on my most loyal readers!!!!!!
#2
WOW!!!!! THAT'S loyalty, eh Erin?
Erin: HELL YA!!!!!
KagomesWish and Erin: YOU ROCK!!!!
KagomesWish: But, sadly, yes. had a glitch and they removed my story!! So I waited a month, and re-posted!!! Et Vola!!!! Tu a l'histoire encore!!!!...... ya...... I kinda speak french too....
Erin: Hey, Je parle en francais une petite peut aussi!!!! DONT EXCLUDE ME!!!
lia200304:
Come on, as if I wouldn't make him pop the question!!!
Inuyasha: NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Erin: heheheheh.....
Destiny:
Yes, some people have been commenting on Inuyasha being sorta soft. But you do have to realise, when he IS being soft, it's usually a thought. I think that contributes to the whole hard exterior, soft interior effect that the Inuyasha character has. PLUS HE'S GONNA WHIP SOME SERIOUS ASS LATER!!!!!!!
Yumi's Twin-Kagome:
..... whoa... did you just INSULT my beta?!?!?!?!!! Little tidbit, MISSY, my BETA JUST SO HAPPENS to be one of my best friends in REAL LIFE!!!!! In my bio, it says insulting HER is the same as insulting ME, and I tend to take things personally!! So, back up, SHUT up, and leave my beta the hell alone, okay?! The hell's Love Trial Prt 1?!?!
Erin:.....wow.......(snaps out of confused daze) YA, AND IN CASE THAT WASN'T ENOUGH FOR YA, IF YOU DON'T STOP INSULTING GENNA (KagomesWish is really Genna, and she said insulting me is insulting her, bla bla bla) I WILL HAVE TO INSULT YOU IN MY NEXT CHAPTER, PUT A VOODOO CURSE ON YOU, AND, IF YOU STILL DON'T APOLIGISE, I WILL HAVE TO EAT YOU.
Cy998877:
Okay...... here's more story!
sniperlady:
lol!!!
Kagome818:
Thanks a lot!!!! Sry, but no one seemed to really CARE last time!
Beccapatty:
Thanks so much!! I take that as a no vote to San/Mir? NEED TWO MORE PPL!!!!!
kittyfuusan:
See, ppl!! This is an example of CONSTRUCTIVE CRITTISISME!!!!! Thank you, look at the response to Destiny's review for your answer!
Purplefr0g:
LMAO!!!!! That's the first time any one ever said that to me and I laughed for like and hour.... then I started writing this chapter! :D!!!!! Ya, Naraku's plan is revealed next chapter!!!!!!!!!
Shadow Baby:
Wow, you LIKED the first chapie?! I wrote the first four 6 months before I posted it!!!!
Sango1on1:
Domo arigato gonzaimasu!!!
WOOOOOHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! 13 REVIEWS!!!!!! ME HAPPY!!!!!! Don't forget to vote on Mir/San!!!!!!!!!!
ATO!!!!!
-KagomesWish
Betaed by:
Erin
A.K.A Black-Massacre
P.S Inuyasha DID NOT get a nose bleed from PERVERTED thoughts, but from extreme WORRY!! You know, when your heart beats too fast your so scared? That kinda thing.