Author note: SORRY once again it took me longer than I thought - -" Stupid math stupid history grrr # anyway here is the story and thank you for the wonderful review I just got them all yesterday or something like that Thank ya all!
Chapter 34 awkward silence
Hao pov (while still unconscious)
There was no ones answer to my desperate yelling and pleas I finally stopped just listening to the desperate calling of me. More and more voices tuned in but I could make not sound. My whole body was frozen. I could only hear.
The voices started to tune out turning into mindless blabber. I stopped listening and just drifted.
The place I was in started to spin.
Hao: Where the hell.
My vision went black and I heard nothing. Saw nothing. Tasted nothing. Sensed nothing. Smelled nothing. I felt everything.
My body it burned. It felt like my flesh was being burned off of my bone. My left arm felt like it had knife coming out of every pore of my arm. There was some noisy babbling that started up in the background of the darkness. It was annoying.
Hao: Uhh
I was adjusting myself on the ground but I could not move. After a few attempts and felt some breathe on my neck and my air the ground lifted itself up and I flipped with my back to the noise. The ground actually flipped me!
I the noise began to settle down once again but the pain was getting more painful! I opened my eyes with great difficulty and I saw I was not on the ground I was flying in the air.
My body was positioned on the spirit of fire's hand with my back to the air and my face into its wrist. I heard some more mindless chatter, There was this girls voice she sounded like she couldn't be any older than 13. She threatened to throw someone off of the spirit of fire. A males voice then came out in a desperate attempt to make the girl not throw the other person be thrown off. These voices so recognizable but what are there names?
Sof: "Be patient Hao-Sama you will remember all there names when you see them."
My SOF put the word it wanted to say inside my brain so it was not heard by the others.
I hesitantly stood up and staggered a bit. I covered my face with my hands so I didn't get dizzy and fall off the giant spirit. I slowly got back to my senses and I took a step towards the noise.
Hao: Yoh what are you doing?
I asked weakly from the pain in my throat that came from my left arm. I realized that everyone was looking at me in awe and fright.
Yoh: Aniki… Thank god.
Yoh slowly let go of the girl that was going to be thrown off the SOF. It was Anna. The girl that was threatening to throw off seemed to be Macchi.
Anna: so he didn't bite the dust….
Macchi: SEE I TOLD YOU I TOLD YOU!
Macchi began to yell at Anna and everyone began to talk in mindless chatter but Luca Opacho and the Hanaugumi (not Macchi she was busy at the moment) As well as Yoh with Brokken.
Luca: Hao-sama are you okay?
Hao: I am dizzy but I will be okay.
Kanna: don't ever scare us like that ever again!
I looked up at Kanna, Mari were near tears. Opacho and Brokken attached themselves to my legs. Luca started lecturing me on how stupid I was taking on that giant thing on my own. While the lecturing I saw Yoh look down embarrassed.
Hao: Yoh.
He looked up slightly startled that I was talking to him. Luca sniffed clearly angry that I ignored him. After a few second he noticed my left arm.
Luca: Hao-sama….
Yoh: I am sorry I am so weak I should have told you about the hospital thing. You always get hurt because of me! WHY! WHY? Am I such a screw up! I couldn't even help you with the Babylon gate…
My brother was breaking down from the amount of stress he was going through and Luca was gawking at my arm.
Hao: ummm.
Yoh dropped to his knees and put his head on top of them. Luca acknowledged me that he would have his word with me later.
Hao: Yoh…. Why are you crying?
I knelt down to his eye level well where his eyes are supposed to be his head was faced down into his knees.
He gave me no reply. I had no idea how to handle this kind of situation I had no real parents of my own that actually cared for me.
I encircled him with my arms. Or how do you say attempted only my right arm moved. I just patted him on the back. Maybe he is sad Hao-sama you should cheer him up?
The element of fire advised me.
Hao: You were brave today… or yesterday whenever the fight was and how long I was not here.
Yoh: You must hurt. Your arm it looks painful.
Hao: No my arm is perfect nothing is wrong with it. I assure you. See?
He looked up just to see me move my left arm around him. He started to smile a little bit.
Yoh: You sure?
Hao: Yea.
Yoh was in the motion of drying his tears. I unwrapped myself from him and stood up and nodded at someone. I don't think he saw who I nodded at so it took him by surprise.
Yoh: Anna.
Anna took my place and encircled herself around him. I turned around and grasped my left arm in bone breaking pain. It was the good thing I was a bit emotionless other wise Yoh would still be crying.
I looked at my arm and the tattooed fire part was growing onto my chest. It was just over my heart. My heart was in pain. Every part of my body that was covered in that black tattoo thing was feeling like it had knifes piecing my flesh and my flesh being burned off.
Hao: Luca better look at this.
My heart went into pain and I felt myself feel a little light headed, upside down and air in my hair. There were also people yelling me from the 'heavens'.
To be continued….
I hope that was long. This chapter I am not too proud of, there is not enough dialog. Anyway this story will be ending soon so you can choose if I should do a sequel or just work souly on my other story.
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Ashen Pheonix: Sorry I didn't mention Opacho once I will try and find the part you were talking about and try and fixation it. Sorry I didn't mention Opacho once I will try and find the part you were talking about and try and fixation it. Yep Luca is the omish dude guy. Sorry for some of the OOC stuff in the chappys it just comes out like that I don't think when I type and over look it when I proof read. LOL and yea not many people can tell if I am a guy or a gal. I am a gal.
And if they were told I was a guy my brother did that - -"Curse him. I am a true! Big! Huge! Fan of shonen-ai and shoujo-ai Manga. For the names things I started out with the English dubbing thing. I thought Zeke was Hao's true Name Then I switched to Hao when I learned his true name cause on the image searches Zeke was old men or something I now read and download the Manga and Hao is a funny bad ass sooo cool Nice choices for the fav anime characters mien are almost the same 1.Hao-sama 2. Anna/Yoh 3. Foust and Ren as well as Opacho
The man and black thing with a small little guy that was Luca and Opacho Yes you understood the fighting scene! really hard to do those X.X needs brain power thank you for the constructive criticism! I love it (just make sure there is a good note somewhere inside of it.)
I hope I didn't kill this chapter it was really hard to update. Nice to meet another shaman king fan! Wooo shaman king! Whoa this is the longest review whoa… grins I love long review then I right long and then it goes longer and longer! Thank you Pheonix-sama! I love long reviews!
