Hello EVERYONE! This is Toffer! Rei is a little busy right now, so I was more in charge of this chapter. Thanks for all the positive responses, this is turning out way better than I imagined!
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"Ohhhhhh that Dib. He just make me so angry!" growled Zim back at his base. "Already he thinks that he can stop me. But he will fail, because that's what Dib is good at. Failing."
"I can fail REAL good!" Gir then proceeded to tear the wallpaper off of the walls of the house.
"Yes Gir. You fail, too. Now STOP."
"YAY!"
Zim took his elevator down to the computer room of his base.
"The humans are responding just as I predicted. My amazing plan is a success! The children have been deceived by my incredible writing power and already wish to serve ZIM!"
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Dib was sitting at home using his computer. As usual.
"I can't believe those stupid kids fell for Zim's stories! They're terrible! And if the kids in my class are reading his stories, then the rest of the world must be too!"
Dib grimly read all of the new reviews
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"RE-views? Most excellent. The internetties from all over the WORLD are reading my stories. Soon the world will pledge themselves to me! ZIM!"
Zim read review after review. So much positive feedback had been left for him. But then…
"DIB! How dare he slander the great ZIM? My fictions are much better than anything that could come from his big head. Does he think that he can stop me? Me, Zim? The humans have already decided who the like best. And that is ME! Dib can't stop me. Dib will see…"
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"I've got it!" yelled Dib. "I'll write a story of my own! I'll show Zim and the WORLD who the better author is. After I'm done no one will listen to Zim, and his…and his…face. Uh…Gaz, could you get me a soda? I'm going to be up late tonight."
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"Gaz?"
Dib remembered that no one was home, and he was talking to himself. Again.
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" COMPUTER!"
"Yes?"
"I wish to write another fiction. Give me all the information about another brain-washing show that the humans will long to read."
"Okay, information has been retrieved about. . . Inuyasha"
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Woo! There you go. I really like how this is turning out, and I hope you've been enjoying it as much as I have!