Hey guys! This is my first fiction so I'm new to this. If you could give me some ideas that would be very helpful. Thanks! Okay I'm gonna stop wasting your time and go on with the fiction! Thanks for the reviews. Here goes the second chapter.
The Next Day
Ulrich and Yumi and the gang meet up for breakfast. Ulrich says "Yumi and me are now a couple." Odd says "way to go Ulrich!" Ulrich blushes a little. Breakfast is over its time for class they grab their things and head off to their next class. Ulrich thinks " I wish me and Yumi had some of the same classes." They both went to their classes thinking about each other. When class was over they went to their next class. Class ended Odd said "yippee its time for lunch its spaghetti and meatballs!" Ulrich couldn't wait to see Yumi. They went to their table like normal and waited for the gang. Once they were all there they started eating and talking. When the bell rang they said " ohhhhh mannn!" they all went to the rest of their classes. At the end of the day Ulrich goes to Yumi and says "why don't you try and convince your parents to let you stay here in a dorm?" Yumi said " ok ill try.
Yumi's House
Yumi walks in and says "I'm home" Her mom comes down and says "hi dear" Yumi asks her if she could get a dorm. "Sure honey." Yumi says under her breath "yes" Yumi packs her things and gets ready to move into a dorm. Yumi thought "I can't wait to live in a dorm closer to Ulrich!"
I am sorry this is kind of short but anyway I hope I did a better job this time please review.