OK at the request of a reviewer I'm writing an alternate ending to FS where Chaud gets the girl but realize this starts right after the last chapter only Mayl never kisses Lan but does indeed still focus on him. Also note this is happening 3 hours after the last chapter.
Chapter 10:
Alternate Ending
"You two boys seem to be fine you can go home now," /the doctor smiled with a clipboard in his hands.
The net savers quickly got dressed and Chaud headed toward the elevator to meet his father downstairs, "Hey Lan, you coming?"
"Nah I think I'm gonna stay with my dad," Lan told him as he walked over to his still groggy father.
Chaud pushed the button and the doors opened in font of him. He leaned against the all as the doors began to close but saw a hand reach into the crack and the red doors reopen.
"Hey Chaud, do you mind if I join you?" Mayl asked casually as she entered the elevator.
"It's a free country," Chaud shrugged and did his best to avoid the girl's gaze. They stood in silence for the next minute though it felt like an eternity.
"Listen Chaud about those kisses, they weren't meant for you," the red head said as she walked over to her companion.
"I understand," Chaud replied calmly but turned his head so she wouldn't see his now watering eyes.
"But I'm glad I gave them to you," Mayl smiled making Chaud turn around in confusion and before he knew it, her arms wre wrapped round his neck and they shared a passionate kiss.
The elevator opened and the two left hand in hand then Chaud looked at her and asked, "So what are we going to tell Lan?"
"Let's worriy about that later," she smiled sweetly as the walked toward the exit of the hospital.
Hey hope this satisfies you, even though it was a little awkward. Well please review, you won't believe how annoyed I was that I got 3 reviews on my final chapter.