Ok, Sorry about my inconsistencies, but really! No reviews! I know my work has slipped, but that only because I don't believe in proof reading!
RetaliationNo light, the one thing beyond all others that stuck out was that there was no light. But the thing that made it stick out was that it wasn't dark. It was the absence of everything. It is perhaps, the most horrible feeling in the world. Nothing seems wrong at first, but then an over whelming feeling of loneliness arises. Complete and utter loneliness. Nothingness, it's the worst feeling in the world.
This is what Lloyd was feeling. This is the state his mind was in. This is the condition that he entered after he was beaten. Lloyd felt very sad. He felt angry as well. But the most of any emotion he was feeling was fear.
Lloyd felt an icy cold, yet very soft object, brush across his face.
Of all the saving graces and pleasant surprises he had ever gotten in his life, how thankful he was for this one. Soon the rest of his world came back into perspective. He felt the changing surface of the sand beneath him, the cool collision of the desert air. Then, he opened his eyes. He saw the stars. The most glorious sight he could fathom.
Then, sound returned to his world. He heard the faint sound of nostalgic chanting mixed with irregular sobs. Sad and yet strangely enticing.
Lloyd turned to face where the noise was coming from. And there he saw Sheena, not but a few feet away, looking down at him with swollen eyes and a grin on her face.
Lloyd tried to get up, but the second he moved, an insurmountable pain short though his body. He fell back to the ground.
At about this point Sheena leaped forward and grabbed Lloyd around the neck, though causing immeasurable pain; it was a welcomed embrace.
"Lloyd! Lloyd!" Sheena cried. Her eyes were red and she was squeezing Lloyd's neck, crying intensely.
"Sheena" Lloyd said quietly "you're hurting me"
"Oh!" she said and dropped him quickly. Then there was a moment where neither of them said anything. They just looked at each other, Lloyd with a faint smile on his face, and Sheena with a tear in her eye. Sadly this moment would not last very long.
That familiar light started shining in Lloyd's eyes again. It was dimmer this time than the times before. But there was a certain unique property of this light. It wasn't shining, it was concentrated, and strangely enough in a triangle pattern.
Slowly, what looked like broken fragments of glass, fell from the sky and on top of each other, stacking up. But even more surprising, the fragments of glass seemed to be forming two bodies. Then, there was a quick flash. And before Lloyd and Sheena was a Boy, with blonde hair, and a sword at his side, standing next to a girl that could only be described as a temple maiden, with a cleric hat.
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