Disclaimer-I own none of the characters (wish I did Muahaha) the only thing I own is my imagination.

A/N: I would just like to tell people who did not know this that the brothers Grimm were real people and you should do yourselves a favor and read their original stories they are good.

Chapter 1-

He was sitting at the table in a bar the same thing he had been doing every night. He would sit in the very darkest corner so that he could see everyone that came in and study them. Every once in a while he would order drinks, but mostly he would write in a book that he always seemed to carry along with him. This man was none other than the famous Brother Grimm Jacob who had been left alone for a while in a village why his brother went to do a few things with his new friend Angelika. The village was not to far away from the village were they had their last adventure and which had made them very famous. If you walked a little west away from the village you could still come to the enchanted forest. He didn't mind being left alone and for the last few days he had found something to occupy his time.

In the bar there worked a servant girl. He loved to watch her and sketch her in his book. He loved to watch her because like everything else Jacob loved she herself looked like a fairy tale creature. All the men in the bar noticed her and loved her like a sister. And of course growing up in a bar she could take care of herself. Her skin was very white and made even whiter by the darkness of her long black hair with strands that would fall into her eyes every now and then. Her eyes were outlined by black eyelashes and shone the more against her skin. She had bright green eyes and the only other source of bright color on her face was her blood red lips. All the more reason Jacob studied her she seemed unreal .He didn't know much about her except her step mother who owned the bar was very wicked and cruel and that the pale girl was named Eleanor.

Jacob was too busy with his book to see a familiar face walk into the bar with a big grin on his face searching for him. The man spotted Jacob and walked over, pulled up a chair and sat down with a quick. "Hello Jake"

"Will"! Jake said lifting his head with surprise. "When did you get here?'

"An hour ago with Angelika she showed me some parts of the village she used to grow up in and have adventures." "You know," he said in a whisper leaning closer to Jake. 'I think she's beginng to like me more." "So dear brother what would you be doing in a bar like this not drinking?"

"You know Will The world dose not entirely revolve around drinking. And beside I have allot of work to do with my book.'

"Oh working on a new story?" Will said, eyeing the book." And who might that be?' he asked pointing at a sketch of a pretty women scrubbing the floor.

"That?" exclaimed Jack nervously. "Just ……Uh…. A new character for my new story. Yes.

Will leaned back in his chair and looked across the bar. "Well, you're a bore Jack and in the middle of his yawn something caught his eye. He stopped looked at it closely then turned slowly toward Jack with a big I-know-your-secret grin across his face. "So he said." A new character right?'

"Y...yes." stammered Jake looking a little confused.

"Do you mean that character?" asked Will pointing to a girl scrubbing the floor that looked just likes Jakes picture.

"She…..uh... has just been an inspiration to my character. He said trying to sound confident

"Yeah." Said Will still smiling. "Why don't we you know, invite her over to say Hi?"

"No Will!" exclaimed Jack. "She doesn't know me and I don't want her to think I'm a weirdo or something."

"Come on."Said will "My brother got an interest in a girl I at least want to meet her.".

"No!", but before he could stop Will, he was already calling the girl toward them. The girl looked up from her scrubbing and saw two men in a corner one waving at her to come over and another slumped over on the table with his head covered. She put down her sponge and walked over drying her hands on her apron.

"Hello?' she said looking from one to the other. and looking rather confused because of the weird smile on the blonde ones face.

"Ah said Will. 'Now that I see the fair maiden up close she is truly a sight to behold."

Will, could hear Jake moan from under his arms. 'I am said Will taking the girls hand"Am Wilhelm Grimm and this is my brother Jacob. At the mention of his name Jake thought he would make the best of the situation. He stood up abruptly, stuck his chest out and looked the girl straight in the face, He was prepared to say something extremely gentlemanly, but it backed fired. All that came out of him was a small 'Hi.". Then as if those words had killed his spirit he fell down to his chair and smacked his head against the table. Eleanor did not know what to do. She looked at one brother to the other. One who was still smiling at her and the other who now looked like he was crying. She decided to leave."Um nice meeting you." I will go now." And she backed away slowly then quickly and went back to her scrubbing. "Jake." Will said I think she likes you.

Jake looked up and then bashed his head against the table again.

She thinks I am a weird loser." he said.

"No she doesn't, I think this is a time for drinks. "Then she will think I'm a drunken weird loser." Yelled Jake.

"Well if you're not going to drink I am. And with that Will ordered drinks and stayed there late into the night, while Jake sat next to him, feeling gloomy searching around the bar.

A/N please review and if it boaring just tell me.First story I have ever written hope you like it. bye bye