[(Just for DevilFish) I don't know who he thinks he is, but, he doesn't
understand the meaning of a Fan FICTION, neither does he understand what
I'm building here, and I have a question for him, how can he expect a 13
year old to be the next fucking Hemingway?!]
Key
"words"= talking
'words'=thinking
(words)=authors notes/my thoughts
*words*=actions (e.g. *cough*, *gasp*, *huff*, *puff*)
*= look at the bottom
[December 27, Time of the Third Hokage (2nd term 5:41 PM]
Naruto just made his way through to the top of the Hokage memorial. Ino came behind him only a few seconds later. Hinata watched them from a safe distance. She couldn't be too careful.
Her back pressed against a wall, Hinata peeked around a corner as Naruto sat on the edge, dangling his feet. Ino did the same. They began to talk, but they never looked at each other, save the glances Ino shot at Naruto every few minutes.
Naruto put his hands behind him and spread them farther apart to get lower to the ground. His forefinger accidentally touched Ino's wrist. Naruto quickly pulled his hand back, like it was infected. Ino smiled and finally gave a long look into Naruto's eyes. It seemed an eternity to Hinata. Finally, Ino made a move. Not to withdraw, but she advanced on Naruto bringing her face closer to his.
Hinata knew what would happen, and tore her eyes away. She should go and slap him off the cliff, but her body didn't let her.
Instead, she shuffled away home where she knew she'd be ridiculed. But she didn't care. She didn't care about anything right now. The problem however, was that Hinata didn't see it to the ending.
Ino was just about to make contact with Naruto when suddenly, he grabbed his chest and pain surged throughout his entire solar plexus. His breathing became shorter and uncontrolled. Naruto began to roll into a ball and almost fell of the mountain side.
"N-Naruto! What's wrong with you?! You shouldn't have left that hospital." Ino pulled him back up to the main summit.
"It's nothing." Naruto gasped. "Just a simple pain in my chest cavity. Nothing much." The sarcasm in his voice didn't seem very funny to Ino at all.
Naruto straitened himself up and slowly sat. His mind, now clear, was ready to work. "So, as I said...."
Hinata pulled a flower out of the ground and stared at it as if it contained the secret and meaning of life. She just stared and stared and stared.
Her eyes looked away and she decided to go climb a tree. Once she was up there, she began to pluck each petal one, by, one, saying those infamous words, "He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not...."
As the number of petals began to wither away. "He loves me," one left. "He.... loves me.... not."
Her hopes and dreams plummeted into the depths of despair. An anger for Naruto rose within her and grew. Thoughts of torture and evil flowed through her mind. She suddenly wished that she had the power to make him burn in hell.
Naruto broke into a run toward the Hyuga Mansion, followed closely by Lee and Ino. They came around a corner and there lay the main gate. Naruto didn't even bother to knock, and leapt over the cement wall.
Neji and Hiashi stood arms crossed backed by a large group of other Genin. Naruto un-shouldered his pack and tossed it to Neji. "Everything we need is in there." Naruto said as Neji rummaged in it.
"Good." Replied Neji and gave Naruto thumbs up. "Everything's set up."
Hinata unlocked the main gate to her house, closed it behind her, and jumped. Naruto stood before her with his fingers interlaced behind his head.
"Hi there Hinata-chan!" he piped.
She was just about to call him 'Naruto-kun', when she remembered what he did. "Naruto how could you?!"
Naruto cocked his head sideways, in a puzzling gesture. "Hm? What are you talking about?"
Hinata drew her hand back and swung it across Naruto face, knocking him off balance. "I saw what you did! Don't try to deny it!"
He reeled backwards and fell onto one knee and smiled. His words slipped by his lips like a ghost. "Happy birthday...." (This fanfic will end here unless I get enough good reviews because it hard
to keep to fics going at the same rate.)
Key
"words"= talking
'words'=thinking
(words)=authors notes/my thoughts
*words*=actions (e.g. *cough*, *gasp*, *huff*, *puff*)
*= look at the bottom
[December 27, Time of the Third Hokage (2nd term 5:41 PM]
Naruto just made his way through to the top of the Hokage memorial. Ino came behind him only a few seconds later. Hinata watched them from a safe distance. She couldn't be too careful.
Her back pressed against a wall, Hinata peeked around a corner as Naruto sat on the edge, dangling his feet. Ino did the same. They began to talk, but they never looked at each other, save the glances Ino shot at Naruto every few minutes.
Naruto put his hands behind him and spread them farther apart to get lower to the ground. His forefinger accidentally touched Ino's wrist. Naruto quickly pulled his hand back, like it was infected. Ino smiled and finally gave a long look into Naruto's eyes. It seemed an eternity to Hinata. Finally, Ino made a move. Not to withdraw, but she advanced on Naruto bringing her face closer to his.
Hinata knew what would happen, and tore her eyes away. She should go and slap him off the cliff, but her body didn't let her.
Instead, she shuffled away home where she knew she'd be ridiculed. But she didn't care. She didn't care about anything right now. The problem however, was that Hinata didn't see it to the ending.
Ino was just about to make contact with Naruto when suddenly, he grabbed his chest and pain surged throughout his entire solar plexus. His breathing became shorter and uncontrolled. Naruto began to roll into a ball and almost fell of the mountain side.
"N-Naruto! What's wrong with you?! You shouldn't have left that hospital." Ino pulled him back up to the main summit.
"It's nothing." Naruto gasped. "Just a simple pain in my chest cavity. Nothing much." The sarcasm in his voice didn't seem very funny to Ino at all.
Naruto straitened himself up and slowly sat. His mind, now clear, was ready to work. "So, as I said...."
Hinata pulled a flower out of the ground and stared at it as if it contained the secret and meaning of life. She just stared and stared and stared.
Her eyes looked away and she decided to go climb a tree. Once she was up there, she began to pluck each petal one, by, one, saying those infamous words, "He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not...."
As the number of petals began to wither away. "He loves me," one left. "He.... loves me.... not."
Her hopes and dreams plummeted into the depths of despair. An anger for Naruto rose within her and grew. Thoughts of torture and evil flowed through her mind. She suddenly wished that she had the power to make him burn in hell.
Naruto broke into a run toward the Hyuga Mansion, followed closely by Lee and Ino. They came around a corner and there lay the main gate. Naruto didn't even bother to knock, and leapt over the cement wall.
Neji and Hiashi stood arms crossed backed by a large group of other Genin. Naruto un-shouldered his pack and tossed it to Neji. "Everything we need is in there." Naruto said as Neji rummaged in it.
"Good." Replied Neji and gave Naruto thumbs up. "Everything's set up."
Hinata unlocked the main gate to her house, closed it behind her, and jumped. Naruto stood before her with his fingers interlaced behind his head.
"Hi there Hinata-chan!" he piped.
She was just about to call him 'Naruto-kun', when she remembered what he did. "Naruto how could you?!"
Naruto cocked his head sideways, in a puzzling gesture. "Hm? What are you talking about?"
Hinata drew her hand back and swung it across Naruto face, knocking him off balance. "I saw what you did! Don't try to deny it!"
He reeled backwards and fell onto one knee and smiled. His words slipped by his lips like a ghost. "Happy birthday...." (This fanfic will end here unless I get enough good reviews because it hard
to keep to fics going at the same rate.)