Gosh I am so sorry about the long delay, I was somewhat discouraged that some thought that this was not a believable character and not true to the essence of Hermione. I am planning to get back into writing more but I would like a little advise on how to make this character more believable... What makes her not believable? Her eating disorder or her thoughts? I am truly confused to what you expect an anorexic young woman to be. I will probably go back and change my mistakes and strengthen the impact of Hermione's parents opinion. I do not have a father figure so I do not know how a father would act in this situation so I suppose I will research. So yes please put your opinion on why she is not believable. My thanks goes out to those of you who have stayed with me this long, I am extremely grateful!
Padfootfan