Squeeeee!I love this poem!It just came to me,and I wrote it,but I still love it sooooo much.One of my better ones.Notice something?That's right,there's only two words per line except for the last one.I'll bet you'll never guess why!
I have been reading the funkiest story!Lots of senseless violence!Yay!My favorite!So go check it out! 'Over There' by the wonder that is Reamis!
Crash
Angry voices
Pounding feet
Steady screams
Of defeat
Hero vanquished
Villain here
Love always
Never clear
Hopeless future
Forgetful past
It can
Never last
Peaceful smile
Burning frown
In memories
We drown
Head high
Eyes low
Shuffled walk
Taken slow
Broken walls
Built higher
Broken promises
Building fire
Noise echoes
Muffled sound
Will never
Be found
Hopeless is
As hopeless
Lasts until
Death's caress
Sweet lullabies
Of change
But it's
So strange….
Throats -slit-
Wrists -slash-
Body falls -
Crash.
Why are you still here?Go check out 'Over There'.Ah! Crap! Wait! Review first!
And the reason there is only two words per line is the symbolism of two people,and then on the last line,it shows we are always alone at the end with the symbolism of one word.Yay!Depressing!
And please oh please oh pleeeease review!I am sooooo alone!Need--attention--or---Craaaaap! I'm meeeeeeltiiiinggg...
Review! The purple genie commands you!