Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha characters. however i do own ne of the characters i make up.
so i have no clue wat to write now so...
chapter 3
As the demon came close to cutting her arm off, she fell down in shock. "Now that u are defeted, please die queitly." he said. "no" she whispered"i will not be killed!" then she felt power surge though her veins. she was changing, and it seemed to entertain her follower. her eye sight improved, her nails grew to a raser sharp edge, and her hair turned to a blueish-gray color. but most of all she was deadly.
"i will not be killed!" she yelled again. her hunter smiled at her as her change was completed."no u wont." he said." u will come live with me and learn to use ur new powers."she stopped, and looked at him."why should i trust u? u was just tring to kill me 5 min. ago!" she told him."come or i'll make u come." she started to walk the other way toward a village in the distance. then she was hit in the back and passed out.
when kiki woke up, she was in a really big room with all of the windows locked and covered. her new couters was really to her liking. 'where am i?' she thought trying to remember. as she finally remembered a young girl came in to her new room. " oh ur awake at last. i thought master hit u to hard." the little girl said as she walked towards kiki. "stop!" she yelled at the servent. "don't come near me!" she yelled. "but miss, the master told me to take care of u until he comes back." the young girl pleaded.'fine' she thought out loud.
"master likes u alot, he said u can some day rule over the entire eastlands! he said that u have great power in u. and if u ask me..." ' does this witch ever shut up?' Kiki thought in pain."... and i think he might like like u. u no not just like u, but... hehehe" kiki just rolled her eyes at the strange servent. "why don't u make ur self useful and get me something to eat, and leave me alone while ill eat. okay?" kiki ask as her stomach growled. "okey dokey" she replied.
the servent returned with some good smelling food. "master has returned and he wishes to see u." she told her. "whats ur name?" kiki asked. "it's rin miss. and master is waiting until u eat to see u." rin told her. "thank u rin. i'll eat as fast as possible." she lied. rin then left to tell her master.
when she finished eating she tried to fall back asleep. but as soon as she started to dose off, the door opened. "miss? master wants to see u." rin whispered. "sorry i forgot." kiki lied again. "i'll head down right now." she got out of her bed and started to think about this master. 'who is he?' she thought.then she remembered the demon in the forest. 'his a 'master'? as if. he don't even got enough balls to kill me. wait a min. what did rin say earlier? some thing about me ruling some lands? so now what?' "we r here miss."rin said with a big smile on her face. then she started to open the door.
Kiki saw nothing but a big table with a lot of chairs around it. 'so this is the dinning room?' she thought. "come, sit down." rin told her."master will be here soon." she ust sat down and nodded her head. rin left the room in a hurry, as if she was on fire. "well this is fun."she said out loud. then the door opened and the demon came in. she stared at him with carful eyes. "i hope u like ur new room." he said smiling. "yeah it was just wonderful." she said sarcasticly. "please tell me ur name."it wasn't a statement it was a command. "it's Kiki, and urs?" she said trying not to smile at him. "my name is Lord Sesshoumaru."he said very serciously.
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