OMG! I have REVIEWS!
Well, I wasn't going to update but I changed my mind after checking how many reviews I got, and such flattering ones, too!
Note this. Flattery works. Lol.
I got a review from...INSTANT COFFEE! 00 Next thing you know I'll have Inughost saying he likes my poems. And I'm actually going to be in a story? 00 You guys are GREAT!
I saw The Beast Within, and I couldn't resist writing this one. I know the rhyming scheme is terrible, and I promise to have a better one out soon, but for now with enough ado...enjoy!
THE BEAST WITHIN
He dwells in the deep dark corridors of my soul
The beast will never let me go
His demeanor is as black as coal
Of this only I can truly know.
The beast within
Hidden from others
They never know of his sin
His trail always he covers.
The beast within me they call pain
Grinning a ghastly wolfgrin at my loss
Beast of night and blood untamed
He traps me in his dreadful game.
He wants to swallow me whole
Possess me mind, body, and soul
Laugh at me from some hidden hell hole
Taking Satan's dreadful toll.
The beast resides within me
Fight, I shall forever try
I wish, I scream and pray, just let me be!
What possesses him to drive me into this madness?
Fading away, I whisper goodbye...
(From Raven's view too, if you look at it with the beast as her demon side...)
Review replies:
SpiritSisters: My lord...I'm going to be IN your story? WOW! Make sure to tell your friend I'm a huge fan of Inu/Kikyo, not just Inu/Kag!
Dark Kitsune of Ra: Thanks so much for your compliments! And I'll have some more stuff up soon, I'll promise you that!
Kohikari: It's an original username! Amazing! Anyway...blushes You're so kind!Good rhythm? Funny, that's the part I didn't like...and don't worry, you weren't rambling! I'm twice as bad as you'll ever be on that one!
Wicked-lady-4ever: A poetry-hater likes my poems? I'm so happy!
Animeobsessed3191: Heh...do you like Inuyasha? My fave. And Wolf's Rain! Lol. Dark and mysterious? I do try...
Queen-of-Azarath: Amazing? Wow, I'm so flattered! You're joking! Yeah, I love writing about Raven, and if you do too I'd LOVE to read yours! The Raven? It's my favorite poem of all time. I swear, though, that I wasn't thinking at all about it when I wrote this one. GREAT, fabulous, fantastic, magnificant, mysterious, and just plain awesome, all of them? As good as FAMOUS poems! 00 You're joking! I'll have to write some more, then. This one's more just the raw thing, I've had an extreme dry spell. My muse has a bad sense of humor, but I hope you like this one too even though I hate the rhyming.
ttSerenity: I know, I really should post more. I actually have thirty notebooks, I lost track. Most of it's fanfiction, but I'm plugging away at my fantasy novel! Maybe I'll do a little crossover, if I get enough curious readers!
Coolgirl123: Really? That's what good poems do to me, too, I didn't think it was THAT good! I hope you think this one has a lot of emotion in it, too!
Instant Coffee: I've always wanted to tell you just how much I love you username! ROFL! You're my idol on here, I can't write humor worth spit! Poe's poems? People say that a lot, I've noticed...I think I'll start making that my disclaimer. XD I know, I don't usually rhyme because it's hard for me to write something as powerful as I like. Evermore? It's just a word I use, part of my weirdness. (laughs)
So that's how? hugs Thanks SO MUCH! I'm great at CSS but html is like sanskrit to me. You think I rock? 00 You're kidding!
(-RenegadeMustang)