This is my first Beyblade storie so plz dont be mean.
Chapter 1, Part 1
A new crush & freinds.
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Angel: Hey tala, where ya been?
Tala: No where. Hey Angel get your stuff and Shetan.
Angel: Why bro?
Tala: Because Kai want's 2 see his old freind.
Angel: Kai is crazy!
Tala: So are you Angel.
Angel: I know, I just can't help it, I take after father.
Tala: Ya i'm glad somebody did, and it wasn't me.
Angel: Ya, you got common sense from mama.
Tala: Just get your stuff together.
Angel: Bite my freak'n head off!
Tala: Hey we got a long ride ahead of us.
Angel: Duh, let's go i'm done.
Tala: your only taking , your beyblade,luancher and what your wearing?
Angel: Yes brother.I'll buy new cloths.
Tala: How?
Angel: It's called credit cards.
Tala: Don't blame me when your in debt.
Angel: Ya ya just hurry up, while i get Shetan ready.
5 min. later
Tala: Ready ?
Angel: Ya i guess, Tala?
Tala: Ya sis?
Angel: How do u think Shetan's gonna like the city?
Tala: Same as every horse.
Angel: Brother he's blind.
Tala: Oh ya , sorry I forgot.
2 day's later at Kai's house
Angel: Hey look there's Kai's house and Kai!
Tala: Ya and his freinds.
Tala aprrouched the house by hime self
Kai: Hey tala, did u say 2 angel 4 me?
Angel: Say hi yourself, Kai.
Kai: Angel, dear.
Angel jumps of her horse and lands on Kai
Kai: Gosh your as light a a feather.
Angel: I know , I just can't seem 2 keep any weight.
Kaiya: Kai, who's this?
Kai: Oh , i forgot!
Angel: Forgot what Kai?
Kaiya: That he has a girlfreind.
Angel: Oh, sorry.
Ray helped Angel 2 her feet and there eye's meet in a instant
Ray: Hi i'm Ray-mon Kon
Angel: I'm Snow Angel Blitz, and this is Shetan.
Ray: Hey boy.
Shetan didn't know Ray so he started rearing up luckly Angel jumped on his back and clamed him down
Angel: Easy boy, Easy Shetan.
Tyson: You got a crazy horse.
Tala: He's not as crazy as u.
Tyson: Your crazier than me!
Angel: I'm crazyier than 2 both of you.
Kai: Hey boy.
Shetan Nickered
Angel: He still know's your voice, Kai.
Kai: Ya i'm surprised that you havn't put him down yet.
Angel: I couldn't do that if i wanted 2. It dosen't matter if he gose's mad i still can't , I would kill myself first.
Max: Hey Kai aren't you gonna introduce us?
Kai: No you can do it.
Max: I'm Max.
Tyson: I'm Tyson.
Ray: I'm Ray.
Kaiya: I'm Kaiya, Kai's girlfreind.
Maruim: I'm Maruim.
Hilray: I'm Hilray.
Kenny: I'm Kenny, Call me cheif.
Kai: My turn i'm Kai.
Angel: Duh of course u are. Oh ya i'm Snow Angel Blitz.
Tala: You wan't them 2 call u Snow?
Angel: No I prefer 2 be called Angel or Ace. Expect him , he can call me Snow.
Ray: Who, me?
Angel: Yes boy you.
Ray: Okay Sn-Hey Mariah!
Ray hugged Mariah/ Angel was thinkingg oh boy
Ray: Snow this is Mariah.
Angel: Hi...
Maraih: Hi.
Angel: Yah Cool, Kai can we go inside.
Kai: Ya sure , top floor all yours.
Angel: Thank's Kai.
Mariah: Your letting her take her horse inside?
Kai: Hey I let you and Maruim have your cat & dog. At least her Horse wont mess in my house.
Maraih&Maruim: Sorry Kai.
1 Day later
Mariah: Guy's what's that noise?
All: Dont know.
Mariah: Where's Ray?
Kai: He's been up since dawn with Angel in her room.
Mariah: Why that little...
Tala: Hey dont talk bad about my sis.
Kai: Are we going up there or not?
All: Yes Kai.
Knock, Knock
Angel: Come on in.
Tyson: What is that noise?
Ray: Just are beyblades.
TYson: You've been doing that since dawn.
Angel: Oh sorry, I'm used 2 pratcing from 6 am 2 noon.
Tala: Oh that's where u go.
Angel: Duh Bro!
She waled over 2 tala and waked him in his head
Angel: Dork!
Max: Who's winning?
Angel: Dont know, can't tell.
Ray: I think Snow is because Driger's taking a beating.
Ray's beyblade flew out of the dish and broke into a 1000 tiny peices
Angel: Opps. Sorry Rapidash over did it.
Ray: Oh that's okay.Kenny can u build me a new one?
Kenny: Sorry ain't got any money 4 parts.
Angel: I an build u a new one.
Ray: You can?
Tala: Ya she's one of the best in Syberia.
Kenny: Can i watch
Angel: Ya Kenny, Where's Shetan he was right there?
Tyson: He went outside.
Angel: Girl your better quit staring.
Kai: Kaiya, Angel cool it.
Angel: I got 2 find my horse.
Ray: I'll help Snow!
They all when out side and found Shetan by the street neighing
Angel: Shetan get over here NOW!
Shetan came over in a fast gallop
Ray: Wow he's fast.
Angel: Look i'm going 2 tell ya'll why Kai let's me keep him in the house.
All:Okay.
Angel:He's blind, that's why I watch him carfuly ever since he was a colt. Ya sure he can do thing like other horse's because he trust me.
Ray: That's why he when't crazy the other day.
Angel: Didn't know your voice, don't know your touch.
Tyson: Why'd u need your horse?
Angel: Because i'm going 2 send him 2 get Jon and my BB Parts.
Hilray: Your going 2 kill that poor horse.
Angel: Not really he knows where he's going. Shetan go home and tell Jon 2 get my stuff and come back
Maraih:
How long is it gonna take?
Angel: 1 day at least.
3 Days later
Tyson: 1 Day huh?
Angel: I don't get it .
Kai: If u wan't your can use Fire.
Angel: Thank's Kai, your the best.
Hug's Kai
Kai:Anytime for a freind.
Kaiya: Get off my man.
Kaiya pulles Angel off Kai
Angel: Don't touch me!
Ray: Knock it off Kaiya!
Kaiya: Shut up Ray and go away.
Ray: I think i will. Hey Angel can i go with u?
Angel: Ya sure, I don't care. I just hope Jonathan is okay.
Ray: Okay let's go
Angel: Thanks Kai but i dont think Fire's fast enough
Kai: Oh.
Angel: Hey dose Jin still work at the RT ?
Tyson: Ya my brother still works there
Angel: He owns me a favor.
Tyson: He Dose?
They all atarted walking 2 the RT
Angel: Yes Tyson.
Hiro: Hey Angel.
Angel: I need a favor.
Hiro: Ya what is it?
Angel: 2 of your fast'st horse's.
HIro: Are you crazy?
Angel: HIRO!
Hiro: Just don't kill them.
Angel: We won't.
Hiro: We?
Angel: Me and Ray.
Hiro: Okay
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So what do ya think i'll be getting part 2 up later of chapter 1