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Kami, I'm torn...I have to post something so you know I'm alive, but this poem just seems senseless to me though I'd probably like it if I hadn't written all those others. Well, I'll leave it up to you if it stays or goes. If you want it to be trashed, feel free to tell me and flame away. (gives all reviewers flamethrowers) I have 63 reviews. 0.0 I'm getting about 5 per chapter, and then some, and not a single flame yet. In fact, everyone seems to like my writing. Question: Am I dreaming? Another question: If not, why is it that poems I hate, people like? (shrugs) My apologies for thinking aloud. Well, I thought I'd be able to get away from the 'eyes' cliche of poetry, but apparently not. Lol. So, with enough disclaimers('), here's the reviews:
A Dragons Wings :You think it suits her? Thanks! Glad to hear my ooc-ness hasn't extended to my poems.
Dark Kitsune of Ra: Lol, who can spell in the morning? Your friend deleted 30 chapters by accident, remember? And thanks, glad you liked it,the rain was symbolical though I actually didn't intend it to be at first. Hmm. People seemed to like the last part...
Mizamour: You haven't ever seen the show? And you like my poems? WOW! Thanks! Trust me, I know the compliment in that one!
Hittomi: You're very welcome:) I was glad to help, anytime. I hope you're not too disappointed over this next one. XP
Queen-of-Azarath: Evil parents...yeah, I'm not supposed to be on right now, either. (cheeky grin) But I am, and you're all happy. AREN'T YOU! (is holding Nevermore on her arm) I think I'll be getting a lot of reviews now...eheheheh...
Oh, and thanks. XD He was a great help.
vinnie the geek:S We, I have six AWESOME reviews to reply to now! (is VERY happy) Thanks so MUCH! Lol, there really aren't many good poems on here, are there? Yep, I quoted poe...I love his writing. And yes, I've read, and memorized some of, The Bells. Beautiful poem, isn't it? I like The Raven best, though. Yeah, fall over in shock. Thanks for the comment about the imagery and-WHAT? YOU LIKE TERRA! BACK, EVIL BEING! (just kidding.) I'm not trying to change too much, I tried a happy poem. How do you think THAT worked out:D Lol. Seeing as I have absolutely no luck at all, I suppose I'd have to have planned it. ' Actually, I never really plan out my poems past the first few lines. I start writing, and it just kind of writes itself. I did notice and like that stanza, though! Lol, ABCAB works, but I usually just go with whatever strikes me. Yes, I've done ABAB before, and also free verse. (hides poems) Darkness if pretty much what I just like writing, period- we started a poetry unit today in english class. I'm finding it hard to lighten up a bit, but I don't want to see the psychologist because people read my poems. 0.oThe last two lines were nice, thankies...I personally liked the second and fourth verse best. Of course, that's probably just me. (looks at enormous reply) (sweatdrop) Uh, I think I'll get on with it before I get murdered by the reviewers...gomen...
Violet Eyes
Crystals indigo in an ivory face
Gaze from under strands of amethyst hair
Above lips of delicate lavendar lace
Precious gems set in a face stunningly fair
Glittering, glinting, silent observers
A void drinking in the taste of the night,
Hunger for solace in the macabre and noir
Seeking refuge from the light
Two precious amethysts, bejeweled veils
That soothe the inner beast
As the ebony night pales
And the darkness within is no longer unleashed.
The sun can rise once more
As the bearer of these twin jewels, so soft in sleep
Seeks refuge again in the enchanter's lore
Where whispered spells and hidden dangers creep
Chaos rages in her tower
She only shields herself with that leather-bound spellbook and sighs
Yet silently watching, forever watching,
Gleam those entrancing violet eyes.
Okay...'Again, if you liked it, say so...if you didn't,flame so. XD
Whether I keep it up or not is entirely up to the readers.
(-RenegadeMustang)