AH! At last, a new update! Well, my internet was down, so I forced myself to write apoem while I waited. I warn you it's been doing that a lot lately, don't know how it'll affect this. This poem has rain in it, too- I hope I'm not getting too repetitive. ' It's mopre metaphorical, actually. I tried not to make the dark/light idea too obvious and blaring this time, more subtle. I have another poem to follow as an apology for this one not being like the last one...I know at least one reader liked it. The rate of updates last time was just crazy, I got about 12 in one day. 0.o

Reviews:

Queen-of-Azarath: Hola, mi amiga. And yes, here's Nevermore. Thanks a bunch, although I wonder...does she have a curse she sets on people who try to set her on their little sister's? Because my bad luck lately has been unbelievable. > This poem had better upload. And I think Evanescence isn't creepy at all, but seeing my next poem maybe they're just creepy to normal people...

vinnie the geek: Yeah, I agree with you, I scrap most of mine. Usually I vary the rhyming to fit my preferences. Thanks, I love using imagery, it's pretty prevalent in my poems. Just like the weird words and metaphors. (smirk)

kmutt: Thanks...all your reviews really mean a lot to me...everyone's does. I usually use either Raven's or an unnamed outsider's. Usually the second, actually- 1st povs get repetitive, to me.

a dragons wings: That's okay! Yeah, I think you're actually right...my stuff always seems terrible to me. I hope you like this, though. I promise I'll keep going, on this one- it's the reviews like yours that make me feel like I have to update. :) How do you manage to always compliment me on what I worry about most? I was starting to worry about my view of her personality getting monotonous. (huggles)

Dark Kitsune of Ra: You do? Me too! I always love when people tell me what parts they liked best, especially when I feel that way as well. I read your Wolf's Rain poem, btw. I didn't even know it was you at first until I went to see what else the author(laugh)had written because I liked it so much! And you say I'M a good writer!

Hittomi: (speechless) Fast updates? You're JOKING! >D But if you think it is, that's all that matters. Lol. I think you jinxed me...

ttSerenity: WHAT! NOO! >( Just email them...I think the adress is on the main page, maybe. Sorry, I don't know. Whatever you do, DON'T LET IT GET DELETED! I loved that story!

Blaze83: Thanks! Ergh...please...just skip to chp. 4. The others are embarrassing. But if you like it, I'm happy. '

Mizamour: LOLZ! (laughs) I don't know, but why not? You sound like my friend from school, that's something she'd probably say...(blushes) Um, what's a blog? (feels stupid) And thanks!

Stormbringer

Tears of blood, tears of pain
Wash away the midnight wind
Outside of the roof; drumming rain
Lightning leaps, as thunder sings

Soft pitter-patters on the roof above
Behind it all, snakes the sound
A song of intertwined hate and love
Sweet melodies of night and day abound.

Under the warring clouds sleeping
Violet spilling over the pillowcase
Eyes gently closed, silently dreaming
Nightmares for a few paltry hours erased

Close the doors to darkness, weeping
Keep the tears, they're softly sleeping
Whispered trust will melt tonight
Lie asleep, try not to fight

Rain sings echoes of eras long past
The calm in the eye of the storm will never last
Bitter anger, lonesome stormwind
Find the way back home again

Yet when morning sings the world to grey
Thoughts and dreams begin to fray
Darkness weeps, so close the doors
Of heavens' tears forevermore.

I hope you like it, I should have the second up soon!

(RenegadeMustang)