So here is the third chapter. Not the best chapter, but it will satisfy. The fourth chapter and my other stories will be worked on Monday and Tuesday and should be up by Wednesday. Maybe...can't guarantee anything. Anyway, I have an idea forming in my head for the rest of the story. I can't tell you though, as it will give away the ending and then you will have no reason to read any more of this. Enjoy!
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He could hear her heels clicking on the wood planks. The echo vibrated through his body. He didn't have to open his eyes, to know she was standing in front of him. He could feel her hot gaze burned a hole into his soul. Slowly he opened one eye and peered at her cautiously. She was pale and shaking. Her eyes had a pained, far off look to them. Geez, what did I do now? Zoro moaned inwardly to himself. It had been so peaceful these past couple months.
Still she just stood there, staring at him. What the hell was her problem? He snorted and opened his other eye. She cleared her throat. The green haired bushido studied her carefully. She lacked her normal confidence. In fact she seemed to have shrunk into herself. She was sickly looking and yet glowing at the same time.
"Zoro…" She spoke barely audible. Her eyes were downcast and she shifted nervously from foot to foot. What had happened to the brave girl, he knew? He raised an eyebrow at her. "We need to talk…about….about the night…we...um…." Her voice trailed off, a lump forming in her throat. Zoro groaned. Why the hell does she want to talk about that? And why now?
"Nami…" Zoro started, but was cut off by a quivering navigator.
"We sometimes have to pay for our action!" She screamed at him, hands clenched tightly at her side. Tears streaming down her side. He winced, she had been too loud. The crew looked questioningly towards them. All except the chef. He had stalked over to them, clouds of anger steaming over his head. He glared at the swordsman.
"How dare you make Nami cry!" Sanji screamed at him "You stupid marimo head! Don't you know how to talk to a lady! Where are your manners? You are nothing but a caveman! Why I outta…" His was cut down by a hit to the head from Nami. He laid twitching on the ground, as Zoro watched Nami stalk off. Tch-ing, the first mate closed his eyes. We sometimes have to pay for our actions. What did she mean by that? Hmph, women.
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Martina- Thank you for the review and I am glad the explanation helped. And yes, it does only take a change of the letter to change the word. But I think the meaning is pretty much the same, since he says it with the same tone no matter what. Witch-Bitch-Wench etc. All pretty much have the same power behind it.
Wolfie- yes ZoNa! And wait till you work 40+ hours a week. That equals extreme grogginess.
Lilosan- blushes Aw, thank you, I am so glad you liked it. I don't know if this will be told exclusively from Nami's point of view. Actually this chapter was more of Zoro's pov. But I think Nami's pov, will be a major part of the story. I hope to actually have a mixture of the crew's pov in this story.
blue Shenron: That you for the compliment. I am glad you liked it, I hope you like this chapter as well.
Yachtzee- I didn't think that my sex scenes were too graphic. But then each person has his/her own view of graphic. And as too making Nami a little ooc. I tried not to,though I don't really care if the characters go ooc. It is all the fun of writing a fanfic. I think of it as putting the characters in a blender and mixing them to my own way. Besides, we don't really know how she would act in a situation like this. And what religion are you? Very intrigued.
Illusion of a Lunatic- I am glad you have decided to keep an eye of this story. Hopefully, you will find the rest of the story to your liking as well.
Mnem13osyne- Thank you thank you. I am putting them up as fast as my museis working.
Everyone: Thank you to those who made me a favourite author. Honestly I just thought I would get a couple of compliments and a lot of flames. But this this..is overwhelming and much welcomed. Hugs for everyone! Though of course now that everyone is in love with my stories, I have a lot to live up too. So don't hate me if some chapters suck. Everyone loses their muse every once in awhile.