Jak Vr. Ratchet pt. I
Disclaimer- I do not own either Naughty Dog, nor Insomniac games.
Author's Note- Ok peoples, I would like to put some things in the clear...
1: I am not part of this stupid vengance, or something against Zelphie, nor have I really ever had one.
2: Don't leave bad reviews on my stories, cause you think that I have a thing against Zelphie, or Yaoi, cause a rare few, like Sabulana's are actually pretty good.
And 3: Nobody reviewed the teaser for this story, cause it sucked...
So i'm going to give a REAL chapter to start it off...HERE WE GO!
Chapter 01: The Mission
11:21 P.M., Private Area,Naughty Ottsel
It had been a rough day, and Jak Was really tired. He brushed his teeth, and took some pain relievers before heading over to a short staircase and made his way down, into the hallway below. There where 7 doors. 3 on left, 3 on right, and a Bathroom in the end. Jak walked up to a steel door that displayed a cruedly spray painted picture that said:
Oarnge Lightning's Lair, and showed Daxter flipping Torn off. Jak Sighed and Walked through the door, but before he went in, Sig walked by, and said goodnight to Jak before heading to his room. Jak walked in and(Boring...) Threw his armor into a corner, before jumping on his hard bed and passed out. (GOD, it's about freakin' time!)
10:13 A.M., Naughty Ottsel Mission Room
Everybody Sat at a round table in silence. Torn started to explain what ther next mission was.
TORN'S TALKING
''Ok, Starting tommorow, I will have Jak, Sig, Jinx, and Me make a Delivery To the Selona Galexy.''
''We are going to send a large pack of needed supplies, such as food and Ammunition.''
''We will also be joined by some elite Freedom League Soldiers, and two Medics.''
''How are we going to get to another galexy you ask? Well Keira is going to unveil her new 'Super Zoomer' tonight.''
''The mission will last exactly 2 weeks, before we plant a bomb on a Foreign KG Planet, before making our escape back to Haven.''
The other's just stared, as Torn had Answered all of Their Questions.
''Ok Everyone, The Unveiling's at seven-o-clock sharp!'' Stated Keira before Cramming the rest of a snack cake into her mouth.
So, NOW what do you think? Make The story live, or die? ( I take my reviews seriously!)
So plz Tel me what you think, PLEASE!
The Naughty Ottsel