Jak Vr. Ratchet pt. I

DISCLAIMER- I do not own Jak or Ratchet.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: HoLy CrAp!

If you are a fan of either Ratchet and Clank, or Jak and Daxter, I have SUPER BIG NEWS!

2 New games are supposed to hit this fall, and they are...1: JAK X: Combat Racing, and

2: RATCHET: DEADLOCKED!

Anyways, If you have any info on the two, PLZ Email me at and, Thank You Jazz Tiger And Nirvana Renagade Seiga! On With The Story!

CHAPTER 02: The Unveiling, and Strange Thoughts

6:35 P.M. Naughty Ottsel Mission Room

Throughout the entire day, everybody in all of Haven spoke in hushed voices, and were a little anxious.

For that night, the saving of another galexy was to begin. But lets Fast Forward to Just before the ceremony...

The sun was just setting, and Jak was hyped for the upcoming event. Daxter was just being his normal, foolish self, while Torn was actually HAPPY for once.

They wasted more then half of the time getting ready, and the other 45 talking about the mission

KEIRA'S POV

6: 52 P.M. Keira's Home

Keira was tinkering with a little toy doll for over an hour, and had gotten nowhere. She couldn't even keep focused for 10 seconds, you probably couldn't either, if you had those crazy thoughts going through your mind too.

The entire thought just gave her a headache, and then sick to her stomach. She kept feeling certain urges, and feelings towards a certain blonde haired wonder. Oh yeah, and it's not Jak...

Keira had never even thought of being attracted to the same sex as her, or even being attracted to the opposite sex. You know, with all of the work, and inventing she is paid to do. She couldn't exactly put her mind on it, but she had a thought that maybe her urges to love her was normal, since a lot of people are drawn to their same side of gender, or even both...

''Holy crap, It's already 7:03!'' And with those panicing words, she grabbed some blueprints, and threw her backpack on her shoulders, and jumped on her zoomer and flew off.

The NO was completly overflowing with people. They just waited nervously, hoping that Keira would show up.

In a small moment's wait, Keira barged through the door, throwing sorry apolagies at almost everybody in the room until she reached the front of the room. She walked up to a large sand colored tarp, and said: ''Ok peoples, I present to you, The Super-Zoome-'' She stopped in the middle of her tracks.

The others just stared in awe at the sight.

Well, my first Cliffhanger, sorry if it sucks... Anyways, if you want any info on the two games, just email me at keep all of you updated on the wherabouts of the two, I love to keep my people informed!

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