Jak Vr. Ratchet
DISCLAIMER- I still do not own either Jak or Ratchet.
AUTHER'S NOTE-
OMG! I am so sorry for not updating for so long! It's just that I have been neck-deep in tests, and having to study for my Music Final Exam...Why bother, I know i'm going to fail!
Anyway, I promise that this chapter is the turning point in the story! This is why it is rated M, the first 2 chappies were boring because they were introducing you to the actual story, SO THIS IS THE ACTUAL M-RATED, BLOODY STORY OF JAK VR. RATCHET! LETS GET THE BLOOD FLYING!
CHAPTER 03: The Horrer
Mission Room, Naughty Ottsel, 6:15 P.M.
''Ok peoples, I present to you, The Super Zoome-'' She stopped in the middle of her tracks.
The Others Just stared in awe at the sight, For before them, was a sick and twisted vision.
(Don't Read Any Further If You Have A Weak Stomach!)
In the front of the mission room layed 3 completly mutilated bodies.
The dead bodies of 2 freedom league soldiers, and 3/4 of Jinx's.
One of the soldiers head was ripped off of their shoulders, the other had a huge hole in their stomach, and had their bloody insides spilling out like a waterfall. And Jinx, He was the worst. Half of his face was torn off, his left leg gone, same for his right arm. His Torso Was ripped up; And what was left of all of them, was drenched in blood.
Keira fell to her knees and began weeping. The others all started to cry too. Jak was about to start crying, but moments before he did, he saw something suspicious. Grasped tightly in Jinx's left hand, was a bloody Holo-Disc.
Torn, having no emotions, pryed the disc out of the blood covered hand, and closley examined it. It was a plain silver CD, and said in big letters written in blood, KG.
Jak glanced at Torn, who had a small frown ripped across his face.
2 Hours Later...
Torn, Jak, Sig, Tess, Ashelin, and Keira sat in a booth in the bar room.
''Well, the S-Z is ruined...'' Sadly stated Keira.
''No worries, I'll have J&D Gather some new parts.'' Said Torn in his normal, gruff voice.
Meanwhile...
Jak and Dax sat on a rooftop in the Haven Slums. The moon lingered high above them, making the scene even more dramatic. Jak gripped the small disc in his gloved hand, wanting to expose it's wherabouts. Daxter looked angrily at the disc, mumbling curse words under his breath. (Mother fucking piece of shit, Fucking bullshit,God damn it!)
''Tomarrow, we find out whats in this CD...'' Mumbled Jak.
Well, I was rushed in this one, only had 15 min. to write...(wrote in laptop in 6th Period...)
If I get 3 more reviews, the next chapter's gonna kick some ass!
Also, email me if you have any questions about Ratchet: Deadlocked, or Jak X. I'll be more then happy to give some info!
The Naughty Ottsel