Queen Luana: Heey, I'm bored again so I'll write another chapter. One question, this is something I really don't understand, how can you get people to write lots of reviews? There are fanfics who count over a hundred reviews so what am I doing wrong? There has to be something! What do I need to do, write longer chaps and all? Maybe that's it, just because of that an extra long chapter! Muahahaa! Enjoy the next deluxe chapter. Lol.

The Eternal Dragon

The wind blew shrewdly sweeping my hair from side to side. I could tell Ji was pissed. Seriously pissed. A vein was pumping on his forehead and his hands were clenched to fists. But he wasn't the only one. From the corner of my eye I saw sobbing Trunks and Bulma and everytime I heard him breathe in with a shock my anger grew. Kill Ji, just kill that Goddamn son of a bitch and end this!

With a roar Ji raised his hand sending a ki-blast towards me. I deflected it with one hand.

Bellow me, everyone gasped in surprise. Ji's jaw hung loose.

"What? No… No, you aren't powerful enough!" The corner of my mouth curled to a grin.

"I thought since you are so smart when it comes to the history of the Saiyans, you would be aware of the fact that everytime a Saiyan is defeated, his power increases. Therefor, I believe our powers are equal now." He shivered.

"B-But… Even so… You cannot have grown that strong… You…"

"You'd already know as well," I interrupted with loud voice. "That it's a royal Saiyan's duty to protect her people! Therefor, nothing will stop me from protecting my nephew! Not even you, Ji. And…" I chuckled slightly. "Since your wish is to make me love you, why on earth would you kill me?"

Goku blinked then smirked. "Ha, she's right. How come I never thought of that?"

"Don't you understand this is a pointless fight, Ji? You can't win!" I laughed. "Save yourself the trouble, hand over the dragonballs and go home. I might even have mercy on you and forget all of this happened."

Yamcha whooped. "Yeah! Go Luana! We rock!"

"Give up, Ji," I finished with a broad grin. Then all of the sudden I noticed he was… laughing.

Soft, discreet laughter at first, then turning into a loud, maniacal laugh. "O-Oh, y-you foolish little princess!" Ji laughed in tears. "I have thought if that, of course I have! You actually think I'd be that stupid?" I raised an eyebrow, anxiously. I knew Ji well enough by now, he wasn't joking. This could be bad.

Yamcha chuckled. "Looks like the guy lost it." Ji leered at me, chuckling.

"I know how to take you down, Luana," he said faintly, to make sure I was the only one to hear. I indeed was, since the wind blew so harshly up here, dimming every soft sound. Ji shook his head slightly. "I don't even have to touch you to do so." He raised one finger. "One finger is all I need, to make you wish for death to claim you!"

He turned in a flash, almost unable to see with the untrained eye. I saw something flash at the tip of his finger. Only that, nothing else, but I realised.

"YAMCHA!"

Yamcha exploded. Without any sign, he just… blew up. Bulma shrieked and pressed Trunks face against her chest.

"Y-You monster…" I uttered watching the smoke clear at the place where Yamcha had been seconds before. "Beast!"

"Marry me, Luana!" Ji cried. "Or the rest of your friends will be next!"

"You won't lay another finger on them, Ji!" I snapped and turned Super Saiyan. Ji shook his head seriously.

"No, of course I won't touch them, Luana. Just a… snap with the fingers will do." He raised his hand, snapped and a second explosion took place, not too far behind me in the air.

I had not checked the positions of the other Z-senshi, and looked around panicked. I saw everyone, Krillin, Goku, Piccolo, Tien… Who was miss-

"GOHAN!" Goku cried, tears flowing from his eyes. I was confused, sad and horrorstruck of course, but mostly confused. This was an unnatural attack, how could he just kill people with a snap of the fingers?

"Luana, look closely." I looked up from the rough voice coming from below and saw Piccolo. "You did not see it." Goku sank to his knees, crying.

"You ugly monster…" he sobbed and I pittied him. Goku banged the ground hardly with both his fists and in a flash his hair turned blonde. "I'LL KILL YOU!" I was amazed by this new Goku sitting there. What happened to the peaceful, almost pacifistic Goku? Goku shot from the ground towards Ji, who smirked at me.

"That makes three…" He raised one hand again ready to slap his finger.

"Look Luana!" Piccolo cried from the ground. I did not understand, what was I supposed to see?

"The other hand Luana!"

I looked down at his right hand and saw something sparkle at his outstretched finger. In reflex I raised my hand sending a ki-blast right in front of Goku. It exploded in front of his face and he got thrown backwards, screaming.

I understood now, it was just a little trick! Ji wanted me to focus on the snap between his fingers while he aimed a tiny beam at Goku with the other hand! That way I'd see it as some sort if unblockable technique and wouldn't even try to block it! Sly, real sly. I turned to see Ji's grumpy face but he only sniffed.

"No trouble at all. I already took down two, just six more to go, excluding you." I counted the remaining warriors, frowned in confusion then clenched my fists in rage.

"You can't see them as threats!" I cried referring to Bulma and Trunks.

"I don't," Ji said smiling sweetly. "But as I already said, I need to bring you down."

"By taking away the lives of my friends? You're getting lame, Ji, very lame!"

"So?" he said, innocently shrugging. Then he looked around. "And my next victim will be…" Not Trunks, please not Trunks! Ji grinned and disappeared. Panicked I turned around, watching where he had gone. I looked down at Trunks who clutched his mother's shirt in fear.

"No, that's what you expect him to do, look further!"

I raised an eyebrow. Who kept saying that? It wasn't Piccolo anymore… A scream and I saw Krillin rolling over the ground. Fear clutched my breath. "NO!" I shot down, crouched next to him and heard him groan. "Krillin! Are you okay?"

"Luana, stay focused!"

I jumped in front of Goku and blocked another beam. I turned to him. "Goku, you gotta help me out here, I don't know how but I don't think I'll keep up at this rage!" Goku swallowed then nodded.

"I'll do the best I can." When we spotted Ji, be both stormed at him with raised fists.

As if our minds were combined, we fought him, together as one. Two of the few remaining Saiyans. Knowing this time there was too much at stake. Our friend's lives and the dragonballs. When looking down once in a while I could see the other's were desperately waiting to get into the fight, except for Piccolo who was patiently awaiting his turn. Bulma had fled inside with Trunks, to my relief, although I'd rather see her flying home. But I was pretty sure that when she tried, Ji wouldn't allow her to.

"KAMEHAMEHA!"

"GALAC GUN!"

Our beams missed Ji by inches and we shot up to fight him again. We had to attack and defend at the same time, action and reaction. A beam hit me in the back and with a scream I samcked onto the ground.

"Luana! You okay?" Krillin helped me up.

"Yes, I'm fine."

"Luana, please be careful," he begged, tears burning in his eyes.

"Don't worry," I said with a grin. "He can't kill me."

"No." His hand clasped around me shoulder. "You know what I mean," he said softly. I laid my hand on my stomach and nodded.

"Don't worry. Nothing will happen. I give you my word." I smiled and shot up but noticed he had not smiled back. Was he that worried?

Moments later, the fire heated up even more so. Beams were flying around everywhere and Krillin, Tien and Piccolo had to stay focused or else they'd get hit. It was madness.

"Accept it, you fools!" Ji cried. "I can't be beaten!"

"That's one thing we have in common!" I smirked and smacked him in the face, sending two teeth flying from his mouth. Blood dripped from my chin as well and several teeth were on the edge of coming out. The three of us were panting with exhaustion. I whiped away some of the blood with the back of my hand and listened to the wind whistling. We're gonna win, I know we're gonna win, we'll win!

And with that tought I used a ki-blast to hit him squarely in the chest. He let out a loud grump and I knew it was my time to strike. I hit him with all the power I still had in me, Goku was behind me, watching my very move, ready to help when necessary. But he knew that at that moment he did not need to.

"That's for what you did to Trunks!" I said stomping him in the gut. "And that's for Yamcha!" I smacked him in the face. "And for Gohan!" I raised both my hands and send him towards the ground. With a loud gasp of pain he came down onto the white with tiles covered ground. I put all my power in a final Galac Gun. "AND THIS IS FOR CAUSING SO MANY TROUBLE!"

He screamed as the purple light had an impact on him. I felt his ki go way down and knew the battle was over. With a sigh my hair and eyes turned brown and I flew down to land on the ground, finding an enormous hole in the ground, with no remainders of Ji. He had been pulverized.

I smiled happily. At last the fight had been fought and we would be able to bring Vegeta and all the other Z-senshi back. Still panting I sank down on my knees, exhausted and completely drained. "That's it… I did it, Vegeta… I beat him…" Goku, who had turned normal as well landed on the ground.

"Finally we can summon the dragon. We can ask him to teleport him to Namek and there we can bring back all the rest." I nodded in agreement but didn't speak. Inside me I could still feel the tiny weak ki and couldn't help but smile.

"It's not over yet."

I turned to see who had spoken, but nobody seemed to have heard anything at all. I found myself confused once more. It wasn't over? Of course it was, Ji was dead. Wasn't he? I closed my eyes and tried to feel the air and the vicinity, the life…

"Hey Tien, mind going down to Corin and ask him for some senzu-beens?" I heard Goku ask with resonant voice in my ears.

"Sure, be right back!"

"Stop him!"

"TIEN FREEZE!" I cried and Tien halted, one feet still hanging in the air, ready to be placed on the ground. Then a ki-blast exploded right in front of his feet and he was thrown backwards, screaming. For a moment, I screamed too. We were all swept of our feet and colid with the hard ground. There we lied for several minutes until both Goku and Piccolo found the strength to get up again.

I was too drained from the fight with Ji, all my power had been in that final Galac gun, and Krillin and Tien had been too close to the explosion and were harmed badly. They were still alive though. I didn't need to see what had happened, I already realised as soon as I had heard the voice speak. Ji wasn't dead.

Vaguely I saw Goku and Piccolo jumping into the air, Goku going Super Saiyan again. I sat up with a moan and looked at Tien and Krillin who were lying about fifty feet away from me. "G-Guys, you okay?" Groaning Krillin rose as well, painfully rubbing his head.

"I'm-m fine. Bu-ut I t-think Tien's unconsious. How about you?"

"I'm exhausted, I can't fight anymore. Sorry but… I can't help." He forced a smile.

"That's okay. More than okay." I could not return a smile only looked up to see both Goku and Piccolo getting beat the hell out of them. This didn't look good…

My intuition was proven right once more… Five minutes later the two of them were laying on the ground, bleeding badly and without any strength to just stand. Ji landed not too far away from me.

"It won't take much longer, Princess. You will be mine, forever." He crouched in front of me and stroke the hair from my face. "Soon we will be together, King and Queen of Ygar." I spit him in the face and he didn't move an inch, only smiled. He stood up whiping his face and walked over to Tien. He took the two dragonballs from his pocket, our only two dragonballs, and smiled at them. With a snap of his fingers the other five were there as well, lying in front of his feet. All seven dragonball together, all I could do was wait and see. Wait for the eternal dragon to appear.

"Arise dragon!" Ji cried and in a flash the sky turned patchblack. A radiant light came from the seven balls as they flashed and all of the sudden a larg yellow light emerged from them and shot into the air where it got paws and a dragonshaped head. The light faded and there was the great green dragon with glowing red eyes. Although beaten half to death we all watched in amazement.

"You have summoned me, I will now grant you two wishes," the dragon spoke slowly and very low. A chill ran down my spine and I knew my time was almost near. I gave Krillin a pleeding look but knew there was nothing he could do. A tear ran down my face.

Ji turned to me. "The time has come, my princess."

Then I did not care anymore. I didn't care everything was almost turning black as I got up, did not care everyone was looking didn't care this could mean my life, it all didn't matter. I just ran over to Krillin, sank to my knees and kissed him. All power had been drained from my body, yet I sat there, not breaking up our kiss, wishing he would hold me, wishing this would never have happened, wishing I would never have to leave him.

Krillin pushed me off after a while looking at me sadly, tears running from his dark eyes. "Don't make this harder, Luana."

I looked at him, at his eyes and said the words I wished I had told him much earlier: "I love you."

Even more tears flew from his eyes and he pulled me against his chest where I could hear his heart pounding.

Ji's eye twitched. "Puh, it doesn't matter. Say your farewells if you need to!" He turned towards the great eternal dragon. "Dragon, grant my wish! Make princess Luana my wife, princess of Ygar! Make her love me!"

Krillin never would've thought those words would be so hard to hear. As the dragon spoke he pulled me to his chest in a last attempt to keep me with him.

"It shall be done."

Queen Luana: (sobbing) I'll never let go, Krillin! I promise! Uh, wrong movie! Ahem, how'd yah like this one? It was the longest chapter of Bringing back my Brother so far. Please answer my questions!

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