This one came to me upon awakening this morning. I had a little trouble towards the end.. I couldn't think! But then I walked about and finally came up with an ending. I was going to call it 'Tainted Again', but I think "Broken Again." fits better. What do you think?

"Broken Again."

Rough hands grip my aching shoulders.
He'll kill me if I don't follow his orders.
Trembling, I remove my pants and shirt.
He pushes into me, and it hurts.

I'm on the floor now,
Screaming, "Stop it! Let me go! Ow!"
But my begging and pleading does no good.
When he finished, he smirked, then stood.

"You're an ugly crybaby, Ryou." He said.
I lay there sobbing, wishing I were dead.
Then I felt his ice-cold blade against my neck.
My life is such a wreck.

"No, don't! Please!" I beg.
But he cuts my arms and breaks my leg.
Then he hits me in the chest.
I wish I could be laid to rest.

No more pain and suffering.
No more sleepless nights wondering.
I would finally be free.
As all souls born were meant to be.

But at last, it's no use.
There'll never be an end to his abuse.
Finally, he leaves me on the floor,
Cold, broken, and sore.


Sooo, how was it? Does it sound kinda unfinished? Anyway, please review!