Annoying people
AN: Right so the third chapter. Not much to say but I have one question. What's a better reader? Someone said there are some errors; can you point them out to me? I've read a book recently explaining some things about paragraphs and the grammar, but there are still things I don't understand so just tell me if there anything wrong.
The disclaimer
Disclaimer: I wish I own a castle…but I don't, I wish I own a horse…but I don't and I wish I own Sonic the hedgehog and all the other characters but sadly…I don't.
Chapter 3
Chewing gum
Amy tucked the chewing gum in her pocket so it won't get lost; she walked up to Sonic's door and knocked. Sonic opened the door and groaned.
"Watcha doin' Sonic?" asked Amy
"Go away!"
"No" Amy put a piece of chewing gum and chewed it.
"Yes, go away"
"No" Amy blew a big bubble. Pop
"Yes"
"No" Amy blew another bubble and the pop was bigger now. Pop!
"Yes"
"No" Amy blew an eve bigger bubble. POP!
"AMY!"
"What?" Amy looked at Sonic innocently. POP
"Stop popping your bubble gum!" yelled Sonic
"It's not bubble gum" Amy silently giggled and blew another bubble. POP
"Or whatever it is, stop popping it!"
"No" Amy giggled again and blew another bubble; she knew Sonic was losing his temper. POP
"AMY!"
POP
"STOP IT!"
POP
"CAN YOU TALK AT ALL!"
"Yep" POP
"AMY STOP POPPING THE...WHATEVER IT IS!"
"No" POP
"Is that all you can say?" Sonic was giving up, Amy was too annoying
"No" POP
"Then say something else!"
"Okay," Amy threw the wrapper of her chewing gum in his hair and ran away giggling "YOU HAVE RUBBISH IN YOUR HAIR!" A loud pop is heard in the direction Amy ran.
"Okay…" Sonic closed the door slowly still trying to figure out what just happened. He sat down on his couch and the wrapping fell onto his eyes.
"ARGH!" Sonic fell off the sofa and onto the ground and the wrapping floated gently down and landed on his eyes again.
AN: Thanks to Gamin' Mog for reviewing chapter two. THANKS!