here is chapter 2 let me know what you all think, thanks
After school the girls met up and walked to a park near their house. There was nobody there except a man sitting on the bench asleep.
Ignoring him, Isabel went over to the swings and got on; behind her Angela did the same. They began to gain height and holding hands matched the rhythm of the swing to the others. Once they felt they were high enough the counted to three and jumped off, never once losing the grip of the other.
Once on the floor both girls started to laugh. Isabel looked over to the man on the bench, who was now awake and looking at them. Isabel got Angela's attention to the man and both girls saw and heard the man with the odd face speaking to him.
"Go, kill them, no one is around. You'll get away with it; their just little girls kill them."
The half-breed said into the man's ear. Angela was beginning to shake and was standing up to leave.
The man reached into his pocket and took a look at it. Catching a glimpse at it, Angela saw it was a gun and got Isabel to look at it. Both girls grabbed their bags and turned away, the man was getting off of the bench and inching toward them.
"No! Don't listen, mister" Isabel yelled to the man. "The man behind you, don't listen to him." The man turned around to see who the little girl was talking about, but saw nothing. When he turned back around the girls were gone.
When they got home, Angela locked the door behind her and followed Isabel up the stairs into their room. Their parents would be home in an hour, and until then they were going to stay in their room.
"Angela, did you see that scary man talking to him?" Isabel asked after a minute's silence.
"Yeah and when you told him about it, the guy looked and didn't see anything even though he was right there."
"Angie are we safe now?"
"Yes, I think we are, but don't tell mom or dad ok. I don't want to scare them."
"Ok"
Later that night at diner, Angela and Isabel were quiet as could be.
"Ok, what's up? You two have been quiet all day." Eleanor said.
"Nothing, mom, everything's fine." Isabel said.
"Yeah mom everything's fine" Angela chimed in.
"Well ok, when you're done eating dinner you can go watch some TV., but I want you in bed by 11 tonight, just because you don't have school doesn't mean we don't have work." Greg said smiling at his daughters.
"Alright thanks dad." Angela said quietly.
After dinner Angela and Isabel went into the living room and watched a movie. At 10:00, when the movie ended the twins walked upstairs, quietly passing their parents room.
"Angie, how come we see things and no one else does?" Isabel asked once they were inside the room and the door was closed.
"I don't know Iz, but sometimes I wonder too."
"Angie…are we, are we…damned?"
"I'm not sure" Angela said walking over to Isabel's bed and embracing her. "But someday, Izzy, I promise I'll find out. Now go to bed and I'll see you in the morning, ok?"
"Ok, I love you, good night."
"I love you too, good night" the two sisters gave each other a hug and kissed each other on the cheek.
Angela helped get Isabel get situated then walked over to her bed, turned out the light and fell asleep.
At midnight Isabel woke up and seeing Angela asleep got out of bed and lifted her mattress. Once having access she grabbed her notebook and began writing in the days events, not leaving a detail out.
hey well what do you think, i think there will be more then 3 chapters, but you tell me