Well I am sorry for the lack of updates. I have been battling the flu, my ex, many offerings to be my bed buddy, and I have been fighting back those that insult me. It's not like I'm afraid of them, because I can handle myself. I might have a laptop, but it's hard when you feel like you're dying, to get up type away, and then load them up on No...I am alive and doing much better. I have also been fighting a massive writer's block and other such things. But that's over now, and I'm here giving you the much needed update of "You Stayed", chapter 10! Same as before, R&R, flames okay, but don't be too harsh. I'm sorry it's not my best. Just as a warning, next chappie will be in third/ story format. No real poems next time. It will be based on a poem "Yugi" wrote though, and I'll have that posted at the end of the entry.
Like I said, it's not my best, but I was just trying to get something out there. It'll be better next time, promise!
THANKIES!
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Ytak - Thanks for the compliments! You are really kind to say that to me! I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while, but that's all changed now. I have a lot to write and I have a lot to say. I have things to do, and trust me, your character will make his debute. Well, I'm trying to get into this once again. I kinda got lost, and I think I dropped out. But I'll bring this back! In fact. Cody is in this chapt! Yuppers...no lie! And I hope I bring your character name justice, I really do. After all, the name was your idea. Thanks again, Tak!
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My life was flashing before my eyes
I felt the fear that lived inside
it was growing faster than I could blink
even faster than I could think
nothing else could make me see
the hate that was just in me
I was holding onto my Item
my prize
I was thinking how I could survive
I was standing next to him
the new kid
the boy with the new face
the boy with the old embrace
I could tell from the poems he wrote
the stories he told
that simple sad smile
I think it might take a while
to be free from my pain
and now I must run away
Ganji looks at me
seeing something only he can see
a figure looms over them
I can't tell
is it him?
Something stirs in me
something unlike I have never felt
the three men that stood before us
they looked familiar
and then suddenly someone walked forward
that boy that grin
that hair that way
I know him
yes I do
that Kaiba boy
the man toy
rumours spread fast about him too
that he lost he own money to a freak show
I never saw that face again
since after the last duel we had
I wasn't sure if he remembered the lost
or everything that it had cost
the pain
the sadness
the strain
the madness
kaiba was lost
he didn't know
I knew his pain
but just as lost
I cut myself to escape the shame
all he wanted was the fame
the cash
the money
the senseless fun
he never had a chance
his heart was on the run
"well look here boys
two runts
a cutter
and a slut."
His words cut as deep as any blade I would use
he was once beaten and bruised
"I think I'll play with them
watch them run
and then I'll rape them
one
by
one"
what was this
kaiba a raper?
No this couldn't be
could my ears deceive?
I glanced at Ganji
his face was blank
didn't he hear what his fate?
I pleaded with him
talking to kaiba
asking him why
"simple really
you took my name
my fame
brought me to shame
some king of games
cuts himself
because he lost his voice
the voice in his head
stupid yugi"
then leave Ganji out of this
what did he do
"more than you know
more than he shows
he took my card
the one in charge"
what?
A thief?
No
"he comes.
We have to get out of here."
With a jerk of a wrist
I was pulled out of the huddle and dragged away
far away
out of the stalls
and out of the place
what was that?
What just happened?
I yank his grip
I was tired of the trip
what was he talking about
why would he scream and shout
"I took his card
his blue eyes
in a duel
he lost."
Sore loser to add to the list
but something else was amiss
"We're not safe
we must go
before the time
before he shows."
Again of this figure.
The darkness grows around me,
my heart in pain
I longed for you
my yami
my love
where are you?
where could you be?
my love was taken
far from me.
We walked out the doors
and into sight
something tugs at my heart
tugs at me
telling me
that a dark soul is once again free
but what could this for be?
I wish you were with me
you would know
you would be able to see
I wasn't sure if I should trust
but something told me that I must
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Seto was slapped hard across the face, knocking him to the ground. He covered his lips to stop the bleeding as the lackies around him vanished. Cody stood there, watching the cowering figure of the CEO. A dark laughter came from him and he spoke. "I thought I told you to hurt them, not let them go."
Seto whimpered as his body was surrounded by darkness. "I'M SORRY! PLEASE DON'T SEND ME BACK THERE!"
"Mariku wants to speak with you...I can't disobey orders."
