Hey guys! To everyone who read the story I just want to say thank you and sorry. I know that the ending of this story turned out really bad so I decided to go back and re-write a better ending. I had to go back a little farther though and alter some of the other parts and I chose to start at this spot because this is the section that changed the most. I hope you decide to read it and tell me if you liked it better or leave me w/e thouhts it provoked. Happy Reading!

A little wile later the boys heard a knock and the door. They went to answer it and saw two fuming girls. It was then that they realized that they were screwed. Nothing is worse than a woman's vengeance. Especially when it is upon a man. Kagome walked over to Inuyasha and said,"Inuyasha, did you like what you saw?" Sango was saying the same thing to Miroku. The boys were surprised that the girls were being this nice. In fact they seemed like they wanted to get closer to the boys.

Then Sango yelled,"Now Kagome." Not noticing what was happening the boys looked at each other. Meanwhile Kagome and Sango had both been hiding glasses of water behind their backs. They threw them on the front of the boys' pants and ran into Inuyasha and Miroku's room laughing. Then the two boys freaked out. It looked like they had peed their pants and they were locked out of their hotel room. They had to plead for the next 10 minutes to get back into their room. Finally Sango and Kagome relented, letting the boys back into the room. Kagome looked at them.

She said,"Never mess with a girl unless you're ready to feel a girl's wrath." They both blew a kiss to the boys, and then walked back into their room.
Kagome and Sango got dressed-up. They were going to go to a club. They exited their room at the same time the boys did. Miroku said in an innocent voice,"Well you ladies look lovely tonight. Would you like us two gentlemen to escort you somewhere."

"Actually no, Miroku, we're picking up Rachelle and going to a club. You guys have a great night." They drove off to Rachelle's, not knowing the two jealous boneheads were following them. Rachelle stepped into the car and they sped off towards Parkers, the dance club. When they got there the music was jamming. They walked up to the bar and ordered pops seeing as they were too young to drink. A trio of guys walked up to them and asked them for a dance. Kagome answered for them," Of course we would." As they got on the dance floor a fast paced song played. The girls were dancing when they boys entered. Inuyasha looked around for the girls and immediately spotted Kagome. She was dancing with some guy. He growled and made his way over to her.
Kagome felt a hand on her arm and noticed it had claws. She thought Oh great now I'm dead! "Kagome would you please explain to me why in the hell you are dancing with some strange guy."

"Why were you guys following us?" Sango and Rachelle tried to sneak out of the place when Miroku greeted them in his usual way. That got him two slaps . The guys left them alone not wanting to get beat up. Inuyasha dragged Kagome out of the club and everyone else followed suit. "Why did you guys do that to us we were having fun?" Kagome screamed.

Inuyasha was really mad now,"Well you two have boyfriends, so you should at least stay loyal to them."

"That was revenge for earlier. We weren't doing anything bad at all! Hope you guys liked that view because it's the last you're gonna be seeing me for a while. Rachelle can I stay with you?"

"Of course." They left to Rachelle's house while Sango went back with the two guys.
"Inuyasha, don't worry Kagome was just a little mad, she'll calm down. Besides, now she can spend some time with her cousin, and we can get going to the theme park."

"Thanks for saying that Sango, but I don't think I'll be having much fun fo a while." Sango and Miroku felt bad for their friend.
Kagome was riding home with Rachelle. She used her power and sensed a powerful serge. "Rachelle do you have miko powers."

"Some weak ones why?"

"Well I need to find the person who has the other part of The Shikon no Tama. I think you may be able to help me find it. Would you be willing to help me and my friends find it? The whole world is in jeopardy until we get the other half." "Kagome, you're my cousin, and I'll stand by your side." Then they went to Rachelle's house.
Rachelle was seated next to Kagome who was focusing her power. The were going to try to summon up Rachelle's power, but could only find a weak pulse. The Rachelle said,"It may be harder to find any actual strength in my aura. My power is mainly focused on healing."

"No wonder you always healed faster than me as a kid." The girls started laughing and then the phone rang.

Rachelle ran over to the phone and casually answered,"Hello. Yes she's here. Here she is." Rachelle handed the phone over to Kagome, not telling her who it was.
"Hello."
"Hi Kagome."
"What do you want?"
"Just listen to me I want to apologize and explain."
"I'm listening."
"Ok so I'm very sorry I yelled at you but what would you have done if you saw me dancing with another girl."
"I'd get mad."
"So now do you understand why I got angry? Do you forgive me Kagome?"
"I can try Inuyasha."
"Will you come back to the hotel"
"Yes I will."

Kagome was happy to be back with her friends. Inuyasha walked up to her and said,"I'm sorry, Kagome, can you forgive me?"

"Of course I can Inuyasha. It was a stupid fight after all."

"So does that mean that we can go to the theme park tomorrow?"

"Yes guys, we can go to the theme park tomorrow."

It had taken Kagome that long to realize that Sango and Miroku were also in the room. Sango walked over and fake madly said,"Bout time you noticed hun!" Then they all went to bed for they wanted to be rested up when they went to the theme park.

The four teens woke bright and early. They wanted to get to the theme park as soon as possible so that they could ride on all the rides. Kagome phoned Rachelle and she came with them to the theme park.

When they entered the park that day they were amazed. There were literally like a million rides throughout the park. It took forever to decide on which one to go on first. Finally they decided to go on Splash Mountain. They heard that the beginning was kinda stupid, but the vertical on the drop was awesome. Of course, never having been there before, they didn't realize how long the lines were. It took forever just to get on the stupid ride. They left that ride kind of disappointed. It wasn't as cool as it was supposed to be. Then they went to find some other rides. They weren't going to let one stupid ride ruin their day.

Another fun thing they found out was how much food cost. Inuyasha spent $50 on himself alone for lunch. Th prices for food were incredibly high and If you've ever been on vacation with a growing boy. you know how much food the can ingest. Kagome joked that she was going to be broke by the end of the trip if she had to keep on feeding Inuyasha. He took that into offense and they had a little dispute. Big surprise there! Eventually they got over it and continued on their way through the amusement park. They had a fabulous time.

Sooner then they had expected, night had fallen over the park and it turned into a spectacular display of lights. It was totally the best light display that any of them had ever seen. Kagome finally spotted Mickey Mouse and poked Inuyasha in the ribs,"Look Inuyasha, it's Mickey."

"Where? Where's Mickey?" Inuyasha shouted excitedly. Kagome pointed over to where she had seen the mouse and Inuyasha immediately ran in that direction. Kagome got the other's attention and they chased after the star struck Inuyasha.

Inuyasha was so excited that he would finally get to meet Micky Mouse. He had seen the mouse on tv and wanted a picture of him. As Inuyasha got closer to Mickey he caught a whiff of an all too familiar smell. He stood rooted to his spot and sniffed the air. The smell was coming from Mickey. Inuyasha looked back and yelled frantically,"You guys stay back! It's a trap!", but he was too late.

A second later the imitation Mickey went up in smoke and there stood the horrible and treacherous Naraku. He advanced towards the group, but none of them were afraid, I mean what could he do with all these people around. Then Naraku lifted his hand into the air and the scenery. including all the people, disappeared. It was then that the teens realized their terrible mistake. Naraku had been planning this from the beginning.

A deep chuckle erupted from Naraku's mouth,"Hello. Nice to see you all again. Kagome I believe that you have something that belongs to me."

"I think that's the other away around Naraku. There's no way your getting this jewel."

"Don't be foolish girl. Your cousin Kikyo also got in my way and I had her removed."

Inuyasha's eyes turned blank and were full of hurt. He screamed,"You killed her! Naraku this is completely unforgivable. You're the worst type of person imaginable."

Kagome then jumped into the conversation,"Naraku, if you think I will let you live after this you're wrong. I will avenge my cousin and I will reclaim what is mine!"

"I think you may be rushing things. Have you forgotten that no one has ever beaten me. Not even you, the mighty Kagome."

"Naraku, all of those times we have fought it has been pretty much one on one. Now my friends and family are standing here next to me. It doesn't matter how strong you are. As long as my friends are here I will be able to defeat you. Love and friendship are able to conquer all. You are no exception. I'm gonna ask you once and only once. Will you not give up?"

"If you think I'd even shake after hearing a declaration of that coming from the mouth of such a pathetic, tiny girl, you are mistaken. If you want this jewel so bad come and get it." Naraku pulled the other half of the jewel from beneath his neck.

Kagome and her group stood their ground. Inuyasha pulled out his sword. Miroku and Sango stood back to back with their weapons pointed at Naraku. Kagome and Rachelle stood in a ready stance. Then Kagome pulled her bow and arrow out of her backpack. She drew the string back and waited to see who would move first.

Inuyasha charged at Naraku, swinging his sword. Naraku saw Inuyasha advance and sent a swarm of weak demons towards him. They were all gone in one swing of Inuyasha's sword. Then Inuyasha continued on his way towards Naraku. He swung with all his might at Naraku. No one knew that Naraku had a barrier, though, and Inuyasha's attack was repelled off of Naraku.

Inuyasha was blown off his feet and Naraku advanced towards the rest of the group. His eyes seemed to be focused on Kagome. She pulled back the string on the bow even harder. She shot the arrow at Naraku. It just barely created a hole in Naraku's barrier. Then as suddenly as the hole appeared, it disappeared. Naraku laughed even harder then and stated,"Do you honestly think that those powerless attacks are going to defeat me? Then you are wrong! Show me your real power or prepare to die! Oh how I have longed for this moment. I've yearned for the sight of freshly shed blood for a time now."

Sango and Miroku began to attack at Naraku. None of their attacks seemed to be working. They had to figure something out soon or they were definitely going to loose. Rachelle ran over to Kagome and helped her up. Kagome thought for a moment and then she had a flash of inspiration. If Rachelle and herself worked together They may be able to muster up enough power to get rid of Naraku's barrier.

Kagome looked at Rachelle and said seriously, yet calmly,"Put your hands on my back and try to transfer your power into my body." Rachelle was confused, but she didn't ask questions. Something had to be done or they were in trouble, but it looked like Kagome had a plan. She placed her hands on Kagome's back and focused her energy on the spot that her hands rested on.

Kagome once again got into shooting stance. She had never felt more powerful in her life. Rachelle had figured out how to transfer her power and the effect was incredible. Kagome pulled back the arrow even farther and concentrated with all her might. She released the arrow and the force pushed both her and Rachelle to the ground. Inuyasha, who saw what was happening, pulled Sango and Miroku out of the way. Everyone watched in amazement as the arrow made it's way towards Naraku.

When the arrow connected with the barrier, a flash of light enveloped the surrounding area. It was too bright to look into and everyone covered their eyes with their hands. When the light had subsided the teens removed their hands and looked at the spot where Naraku stood. Suddenly everyone's face lifted. The barrier had been destroyed.

Naraku glared at Kagome. "You vile woman! How dare you destroy my barrier! You will pay for this dearly!" He raced towards Kagome, but Inuyasha lifted his sword up to defend Kagome. The attack hit Tetsusaiga, but no one was damaged.

Miroku and Sango had already started to attack Naraku again. They were getting in hits, but nothing seemed to really harm him. Inuyasha told them to get out of the way and he looked at Naraku. He raised his sword and yelled,"Backlash wave!" Releasing Tetsusaiga's most powerful attack.

"Is that all you've got you mangy mutt? Well you're going to have to do better than that."

Inuyasha growled and continued his assault on Naraku. The other's also continued to do the same. Kagome thought again of her speech earlier. She had to work with her friends. She yelled,"Everyone, we need to work together. We will not succeed alone. We need each other."

The other's thought about what Kagome had said and realized that it was true. They all ran into a group and faced Naraku in fighting stance.

"Oh look. The kids have bonded together. How cute. Let me tell you something. In my entire existence, not once has the good guy come out on top."

Inuyasha once again released the backlash wave at Naraku. After that Kagome shot an arrow at Naraku, Sango and Miroku threw their weapons, and Rachelle opened up the arms in an open palmed stance and threw her power out at him.

Naraku just stared at the attack coming towards him. He was not afraid. Naraku thought he was all powerful and wouldn't allow himself to be defeated. Then he felt a piercing pain enter his chest and realized he had been wrong. This time the bad guy hadn't come out on top, He had been defeated.

The group stared at Naraku as he was hit by their all powerful attack. When it hit Naraku a light once again covered the area. Only this time it was much brighter. Everyone was thrown off their feet and the world went black

Kagome was the first to awake. She looked up in fear. Where was Naraku? She glanced anxiously around her. She gasped at what she saw next. Sitting across the road from her was the other half of the Shikon No Tama. She couldn't believe it. She picked it up and put the two pieces together. The jewel rose in the air as if suspended by invisible hands and put itself back together.

The full Shikon No Tama landed into her hand. Kagome stared at the terrible, yet amazing jewel. Something of this power was not destined for this world. Sh knew that there was only one way to get rid of the evil thing. She had to make a wish on the jewel. Kagome didn't want to make the decision without the other's consent so she waited for them to awaken.

Within the next hour everyone had awaken. There had never been a happier group of people in all of history. They had saved the world and had lived to tell the tale. They all stood around Kagome and stared at the jewel.

Inuyasha looked at Kagome and said,"Kagome what are you going to wish for?"

"Why do I have to be the one to make the wish?"

Sango said quietly,"Kagome you are the chosen one. You were given the curse of sight and you involuntarily got the responsibility. Remember though, your wish must be made with good intent. The jewel will pick up the slightest sense of hatred."

Kagome nodded and closed her eyes. She thought for a couple of seconds. Then the other heard her barely audible mumbling. Then Kagome threw the jewel into the air. It spun and seemed to disappear into itself. The world was finally free of the jewel. Never to hurt anyone again.

Miorku was bursting with curiosity,"Well Kagome, what did you wish for?"

Everyone looked at her. They all wanted to hear this,"Well, I wished that never again will something as evil as the Shikon No Tama be allowed to roam the Earth."

Then Kagome walked towards the park. It was a long night and she wanted to get back to the hotel for some much needed sleep.

Epilogue

Kagome was once again reunited with the family that she had been longing for since Naraku had plagued her life. Kagome a1d Inuyasha dated for another couple of years and then they were married. They had a boy name Chiharu and a girl named Yukino. After they were married Kagome unmasked herself as Mina surprising all The people who knew her and were mean to her. Thought They didn't need the money Kagome became a vet and Inuyasha became an executive so they felt fulfilled all their days.
Sango and Miroku also got married. They had six children. They had two girls named Midoriko and Tsukino. They had four boys named Hideaki, Soichiro, Bakura, and Himako. Sango became a children's literalist while Miroku became a Dynacologist. I bet we all know why.

Rachelle did get to sing at a future Mina concert. At the concert Rachelle met Soran and the two fell in love. They were later married. They had a girl named Hime, and a boy named Azitaka.
The group stayed close the rest of their lives. They were finally ready to settle down and come home for real this time. They never told their children the story of what they had done. It didn't seem like it was necessary. Though their story was never written in any history book, their contribution is still in effect today. They were the nameless heros and they were proud of their battle. They had saved humanity and was thanks enough for them.

Thanks for reading the revised ending os Stars? Please tell me what ya thought.

ttyl,

Dani