Well, here's another chapter, a little earlier than I expected though, so it might be a little confusing, but I don't have time to check grammar or anything at the moment to my reviewers:
Jaquira: yeah, I'll try to update ASAP!
Carbuncle021: I want a smoothie! And I also love the coloring in the game
Hurky: maybe as you write more, you may get better at describing the scenes, but don't worry about that, you're a great writer any way!
SimpleNClean92: Your welcome, I do this with like all my reviewers
DivineRoseKeeper: Well, when you're hypnotized, you kind of do stuff that's stupid, so yeah
Well, here's chapter four, so enjoy!
Sora was still in a trance, he continued walking. Then, like he just woke up from a nap, he started yawning and stretching. "Ah, well, that was weird, wait, where am I?" Sora asked himself, "Riku, Donald, Goofy?"
"Sora…" he heard someone whisper.
"Kairi?" Sora said.
"Sora…" he heard again.
"Kairi! I'm coming!" Sora yelled as he started following the voice. He looked around, but there was no way out except the door, which was blocked by a stone wall. Sora ran around and tried to find a way out, but nothing. Then, he heard the voice again, "Sora…I'm over here." Sora turned to see Kairi, with her arms out, ready to hug him. Sora smiled and ran for Kairi, his arms stretched out, he was about to embrace her, but he went through her and fell to the ground.
"What's going on here?" Sora asked himself.
"You are in my trap." Someone said.
"Who's there?" Sora asked.
"I will not tell, because it's not fun that way." It said, "Don't worry your precious Kairi is safe and so is your child."
"You release them now!" Sora yelled.
"I will not release Kairi, or Namine for that matter, but since I'm in a good mood today, I'll give you some clues." It started, "In each world there are parts to a keychain, a keychain that when connected to the keyblade, will show you the door to Kingdom Hearts, which will lead you to your wife. Till then, have fun."
Sora was still on the ground, "He's going to pay." Sora got up and saw that the stone wall was gone, he walked out and met Riku, Donald and Goofy on the other side.
"Sora! Are you okay?" Riku asked.
"Like I said before there will be hell to pay." Sora said, walking to the ship.
(On the ship)
Sora, Riku, Sukai, Donald and Goofy walked onto the ship. Sora went into his room while Riku, and Donald took the controls.
"What's up with him?" Donald asked Riku.
"I don't know, there must have been someone in there that made him mad." Riku replied.
"He was just threatened." Sukai said, "He's mad at someone."
"How do you know?" Donald asked.
"Since Sora and I are one in the same, we sometimes feel the same." Sukai said.
"Uh, I just thought of something, where are we going?" Goofy asked.
"We're going to Traverse Town." Sora said, walking up behind them, "We need to pick up something."
(Traverse Town)
The five of them walked through the doors of Traverse Town and went towards the small house in the third district. Sora knocked on the door and waited, the door opened and someone with red hair and green eyes was standing there. Sora summoned his keyblades and tackled him down.
"Okay Axel where's Kairi and Namine!" Sora yelled with his blades near the guy's neck.
"Axel who's Axel? I'm Kihaku! Get off of me!" he yelled.
Sora got off of him and took a good look at him. He did have red hair and green eyes like Axel, but his hair wasn't as long and it was in spikes. He was wearing a green hoodie, black shirt, green pants and black shoes.
"Hey, he looks just like you Sora, hyuck wonder why?" Goofy said.
"Sora? You're Sora? I'm a part of you…Sukai! I didn't know you were with him." Kihaku said, smiling.
"Uh…Sora, this is your soul part." Sukai said. "He's part of you."
"Wait, if Sora separated into three parts, where's his third?" Goofy asked.
"This is all three of us," Kihaku said, "I'm the soul, Sukai is the body, and Sora's the heart, and Yomi is…"
"Gone, we don't have to worry about him anymore." Sora said.
"Well, since you're all here, why don't you come inside?" Kihaku said, making a gesture to come inside.
They walked into the old house and looked around. It looked as though nothing had been touched, the boxes were in the same place, and the table and bed were still there.
"Do you know where Leon, Aeris, and Yuffie went?" Riku asked.
"No, last I heard they were in Hollow Bastion." Kihaku replied.
No one talked for a long time, there was nothing to say, so after a while Donald asked, "Kihaku, you want to come with us?"
"Sure, if that's okay with everybody." Kihaku said.
So, they all left and were heading towards the ship, except for Sora. "Hey, Sora, where are you going?" Riku asked.
"I'm looking for something." Sora said, walking toward the accessory store. Sora walked into the store, and saw Cid sitting behind the counter, reading a book. "Hi Cid," Sora said. Cid jumped and looked at Sora, at first he squinted at him and looked at him for a few seconds, then he realized who it was. "Oh, you again, man you've changed, with the black clothes and stuff." Cid said, going back to his book.
"Thanks…I guess, so do you have any new key chains?" Sora asked.
"Yeah, I got a new one, but it's broken." Cid said, putting the book down and getting the chain for Sora. He went up the ladder to the top shelf and pulled out a small box, there was a crown insignia on the top of it. "Well, here it is, don't lose it."
"How much is it?" Sora asked.
"Usually 50,000 munny, but since you saved our sorry butts, I'll give it to ya free." Cid said, handing Sora the box.
"Thanks," Sora said, taking the box. Sora took the box and looked inside. The key chain looked as though it was part of a silver heart, like a quarter of one. Sora didn't think about it and closed the box. He went outside and met up with everyone, after a little more exploring, they left for Wonderland.
