This is a repost the first draft was not completed and was all parts in one so I have broken them up to smaller chapters so it will be easier to read.
Froggy sorry for posting it before it was done but its almost completed so its safe to post now.
Some later Chapters will contain some rather bad subject matter so you will be warned now and then.
Enjoy.
Part 1
Time should have stood still, but it didn't.
We were supposed to come to this godforsaken planet, start negotiations, take our samples and leave.
But no. That was too easy for SG1. We had, of course, walked into an ambush.
I knew something was wrong as soon as I stepped down and looked at the frightened faces of the elders.
No happy children or women were here to greet us like last time and when Daniel tried to ask about them he was stonewalled.
I stepped back and whispered to Teal'c that something was off.
"Indeed".
Carter had picked up on my uneasiness and came next to me. I motioned to her to keep her eyes and ears open. She took the safety off her weapon and started to scan the area.
Daniel was oblivious to what was going on, asking when he could be taken to the caves to take more pictures and when he would be shown the tablets of life.
Carter stopped and looked past the trees. I came up to her and asked what was wrong.
"I could have sworn I saw something, sir, but I'm on edge and maybe that's the reason."
Carter's instincts were as good as mine and I halted our party to investigate.
The elders asked why we stopped, as the village was only a short distance away. They started to look around oddly, and I knew then that this was a set up.
Before I had a chance to pull us back, Carter pointed behind me and yelled to get down.
She started to fire her weapon. I saw one of the elders go down and Daniel scrambling to get to cover.
She cried out my name.
She was the first of us to be hit.
Teal'c was firing and Daniel went to get her to safety.
The other elders went for cover, but the firing never stopped. We were outnumbered and surrounded.
"Jack! She's badly hurt. I can't stop the bleeding."
I needed to do something. I needed to get my team out of there now. We had been set up and it looked like we would not survive this battle.
They were getting closer and I heard the First Prime yell out, "You are surrounded. If you do not want the village women and children to die, you will lay down your weapons immediately."
They stopped and waited. I went over to Daniel and Sam. I tried not to wince at the sight. She had been clipped in the shoulder by a staff blast. Her blood was all over both Daniel and herself. She was unconscious. Before I could ask, Daniel said she was alive.
Teal'c came to us.
Carter needed help and I would not risk the lives of innocents.
I stood up and raised my weapon over my head. Teal'c was already in that position and Daniel rose to his feet, joining us.
