Title: The New Order
Author:
Mistress Nika
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Before his
sixth year, Harry is rescued from the Dursleys by someone he does not
expect. He is then swept into a world of magic where Light and Dark
are not always Good and Evil. The Crimson Order, led by the
mysterious Mage Queen, have taken it upon themselves to teach Harry
to not only be powerful, but to be the leader the wizarding world
needs.
Warnings: OOCness (though I hope it's explained),
OC's (only supporting the HP cast), slash, passing twincest, bad
language, Powerful!Harry, DarkButNotEvil!Harry, possible hints of sex
and dirty jokes
Couples: Ron/Hermoine, minor Fred/George,
Sirius/Remus
Possible Couples: Harry/Percy, Harry/Severus,
Harry/Draco, Harry/Lucius, Hermoine/Luna (I'm leaning toward
Harry/Percy and later Harry/Lucius. Speak now or forever hold your
peace.)
Questions/Points from last chapter:
noway...you
CAN NOT make PERCY Harry's first lover! Who says Percy is his
first lover? Harry couldn't have been involved with someone before?
Who says he's his lover at all? Just because they may have a
romantic relationship doesn't mean they're gonna be shagging like
bunnies! Gawd! Fangirls! 'throws up her hands in disgust' A
pairing does not always equal sex!
Laughs Aspirant. Sounds like asprin. Do people need them alot around them? (I'm assuming they are the lowest level students/people) 'laughs as well' I didn't realize that, but it is kinda funny sounding come to think of it. Yeah, it's explained this chapter. There are usually a fair number of them around. And you assume correct, not counting the Entrants.
What is a "whisper" (Did I spell that right?) Yep, you spelled it right. Are there all sorts of other magical races from other fantasy games/books? Yep! They're not really from certain games/books. They're just from general mythology. As well as a few that I've completely made up and would be more like aliens.
I believe a Harry/Percy pairing would fit well here. If your intending on making Harry Politically powerful it would be an excellent match. Yes, he will be very politically powerful, both in the wizarding world as well as the Veil. Thanks for your support!
PLEASE BRING SIRIUS BACK! I mean come on its already called the veil. sounds a little familiar doesnt it? O.O I assure you, it's intentional. Our beloved Padfoot IS coming back.
PLS have Gred and Forge find out! Who do you think taught him how? 'winks' At least the Dursleys are happy now! They hate magic, now they think magic don't exist! Yep, I actually pity the Dursleys. They're magic phobic with a super famous magical nephew. Now they can have the happy little magicless life they always dreamed of.
I've never read a HP fic with a drow in it... Really? Wow. Come to think of it, neither have I. O.o you are now declared 'Ultimate Cool!' 'grins and dances' I like the way you're making everything fit together. A lot of stories I read have a good plot base, but that's about it. You should see my notes. 'sweatdrop'Last Chapter:
After receiving a nod from Harry, Percy all but raced out of the room.
The unknown woman turned penetrating blue eyes on Harry and motioned him over.
He crossed the room and stood before her warily.
"I am called Raven." she said, her voice low. "I am an Apprentice of the Dark Arts. I will take you to your room."
Percy ran full tilt down halls and through gathering rooms, not stopping to apologize as he knocked over a man carrying a stack of books and frightened a group of studying students as he plowed through the middle of them. Pulling out his wand, he transfigured his garish muggle suit into more respectable wizard's robes. A young child in his path shrieked as she saw the wizard charging toward her with his wand out. Percy skipped to the side just as the child's mother pulled her into her arms muttering about crazed wizards.
Stowing his wand quickly away in his sleeve, he skidded to a halt outside a set of large, black and very imposing double doors. Two large men in red armor and black capes stood to each side of the doors. Panting heavily, Percy ran a hand through his hair and straightened his robes.
One of the guards snickered discreetly. "Go on in." he said with a barely hidden smile of amusement.
Percy nodded and crept to the door as if expecting it to come alive and attack him at any moment. Putting his hand on the handle, he pushed it open slowly, peeking around the edge and into the darkness beyond. He couldn't see anything.
"Are you sure they're--?" he started, but the burly guard put a hand on his back and pushed, sending him hurtling inside and the door slammed quickly shut behind him echoing eerily in the seemingly empty room he now stood in.
Outside the guard looked at his comrade and laughed. "I love the newbies."
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Harry studied the woman before him carefully. Raven watched him with eerily calm crystalline blue eyes, unnerving him greatly and making him shift nervously. Her long black hair fell loose about her form reaching to her waist like an ebony silken veil. Her nose was small and hawkish, though not at all unpleasant, lending a sharp sort of beauty to an overall regal and imposing countenance. Harry realized that at a mere 5'6" he was nearly taller than her.
"Follow me." she commanded and turned to lead him from the room.
As she turned, her hair shifted and Harry thought he caught a glimpse of a pointed ear before it fell back into place.
As she strode quickly from the room, her cloak whipping around her in a flourish that would have made Snape proud, the crowd gathered outside the doors parted quickly. Harry hurried to catch up with her rapidly retreating form.
Down one torch lit hall and up another, Harry noticed that the walls were made of a carved tan stone and were entirely windowless as if they were in a series of cave tunnels. People lingered here and there, some watching them with interest.
A fair few wore standard wizarding style robes and cloaks. A couple were clad in tunics and leather breeches. Some wore muggle style clothing and yet still others wore clothes like he had never seen before.
The wide variety of races present was a bit startling. A witch with a pointed hat passed by talking animatedly with a man with a feline tail and ears perched atop his head that swiveled Harry's way as they passed and then back to the woman beside him. What might have been a grinning vampire spoke with an attractive young woman covered from head to toe in bronze scales. The woman quickly turned outraged, her scales flushing a deep red as she slapped the vampire and stormed off in a huff. A group of laughing children with golden eyes and prominent fangs growled and tackled each other playfully as they ran by chased by an irate goblin.
"What is this place?" Harry breathed to himself, not really expecting the reply that came.
"These are the caves of Merakyn," Raven responded in her cool voice without slowing her pace. "They are the lowest level of the city of Talara. Most of the younger inhabitants live and train here, as well as most of the Order. The caves are the stronghold; the safest place in the entire city and stretch for several miles in each direction beyond the bounds of the above city. Mage Queen's chambers are in these caves, as well as her throne room. Another throne room exists above ground, but it's rarely used. Above the caves are three underground levels used for varying purposes. On the surface sits Talara Palace which is restricted to those authorized by Lady Tala or Mage Queen. It's used for diplomatic meetings and housing foreign dignitaries. There are several exits from the underground system that do not involve the palace and are used for general travel. Talara is ruled by Lady Tala, despite Mage Queen's presence. Mage Queen usually resides at the Palace of Eternal Night, but is currently present in order to tend to some business."
Pausing to open a nondescript door which Harry quickly realized led to a small bedroom, Raven motioned him inside and followed, shutting the door behind her. The room was sparsely furnished. A single bed was pressed against the wall, a night stand beside it and a plain wooden trunk shoved in the corner at it's foot. A simple desk and chair sat against the left wall.
Raven seated herself in the chair and Harry hesitantly sat on the edge of the bed. Hedwig left Harry's shoulder to perch on the headboard. Raven's eyes continued to bore into him, causing him to shift yet again, as she continued speaking.
"Normally, I would not bother myself with you. However, Mage Queen has asked me personally to explain some of our world."
She paused and Harry had the feeling she was looking for a response of some kind, so he nodded hesitantly. This seemed to appease her and she continued.
"Our world, called the Veil, is a world entirely separate from your Earth. There are an infinite number of such worlds, all with their own races and cultures. The Veil, however, is different. It is an artificial world created and maintained solely by the force of Mage Queen's power. No other has ever managed such a feat, so you understand why we respect her above all others and call her as we do. Mage Queen is ageless and all powerful within her realm. No one knows exactly what Mage Queen is or where she comes from. Most assume she is one of the old gods of another long forgotten world. One day long ago she became angry with the predijuces and hatred present in most worlds and so founded her own. Into the Veil, she brought the persecuted, the hated, the feared and the misunderstood of other races. She gave them a place to belong and be free. Still, despite her power, she is but one person. Therefore, she founded the Crimson Order to help her in her task.
"The name of the Order is rumored to have come from the fact that, no matter our differences, our blood ties us together. Of course, no one knows the true origins for certain. The Crimson Order is a group of warriors who fight for peace on any world that asks for our aid with the unifying goal of peaceful coexistence for all races. We also maintain the balance between worlds. Should one invade another without just cause, we would immediately step in. The Order regularly rescues those who are persecuted unjustly, even to the point of moving entire species here. Because of that, a world that once had no intelligent life now flourishes with towns, villages and cities, all under the benevolent rule of Mage Queen. Her presence keeps the peace between races who, under normal circumstances, would be violent enemies. Vampires and Werewolves, to use an example from your world. Here they coexist peacefully, for the most part. The occasional skirmish is, after all, unavoidable.
"The Crimson Order has allies on many different worlds, even those where the Order is not generally known. Your world is one of these. Your world remains ignorant of our existence while we continue to work in secret, helping those who need it. There are many witches and wizards here, as well as other races from your world. They are bound to keep our secret under penalty of death. We do not tolerate traitors."
Harry gulped at the hard look in her icy eyes. Obviously one of the worst things you could be here was a traitor.
"There are several things you should know, before interacting with the general populace. First, we have a very strict caste system. This is to ensure one does not injure themselves or others by dabbling in forces beyond their control.
"Entrants are those seeking entrance into the Order. They have formally made the request, but have not yet been accepted. They are normally young children from this world or adults from other worlds who were not originally invited to join.
"Aspirants are those who've just begun their training. They are given a guide if they are not Veilborn to teach them our ways and are taught in a group the basics that every Order member should know; a bit like schoolchildren.
"Apprentices are those who've finished basic training and chosen a magical path. If their path is a popular one, they are taught in a small group by a master of that art. If it is not a popular one or is particularly difficult to master, they are taught one on one by their Master. A sub-caste of the Apprentice is the Initiates. They have completed their training and are in the month long phase in which they undergo testing to determine if they are ready to become a Master.
"Primani are those who have finished all training required to become a true member of the Crimson Order and have mastered at least one Art. You could call them the general soldiers of the Order, I suppose. They are the ones who regularly venture into battle.
"The Sworn are those who have taken the Oath, swearing loyalty to Mage Queen above all others. This is entirely voluntary and is for life. They could be seen as the warrior priests and priestess of the Veil.
"Whispers are an elite group of Primani who undergo very special training. They are broken into two separate sects; the Sleepers and the Anashin. Sleepers are spies who infiltrate other worlds and report back. Anashin are the spies who's duties extend to assassination. They are dangerous beyond most others and are able to blend in anywhere. The truth of who among the Whispers are Sleepers and who are Anashin is carefully guarded, known only to other Whispers. Because of this, Whispers in general are given great respect as you never know if you're talking to a spy or an assassin.
"The last are the Crimson Guard, powerful warriors who protect Mage Queen. They are usually masters of several different Arts and are extremely dangerous. However, the chance of encountering one is relatively small as they have their own private quarters near Mage Queen and will join her when she leaves. They rarely show themselves among the general population, staying by her side at all times.
"The inhabitants of the Veil not involved with the Order are mostly exempt from this caste system. However, each large city is ruled by a Lord or Lady appointed by Mage Queen. Talara is ruled by Lady Tala. It is the oldest and most fortified city and the headquarters of the Crimson Order. The largest and most prosperous city is Valera ruled by Lord Kyros, High Priest of the Veil. He is Mage Queen's closest advisor and friend. The capital city and home of Mage Queen is Samaria. Though the city itself is small, with only High Mages and the Sworn as it's residents, at the center is the Palace of Eternal Night. Samaria rests in a valley where the sun never reaches, bordered by high mountains whose peaks are surrounded in dark clouds. It is the focal point of all power in the Veil.
"Do you understand everything I have told you so far?"
Harry nodded. He may need a few refresher courses on the fine points later on, but he got the general idea.
"Good. Now I will tell you about the common types of magic taught here. Once you have begun classes, your teacher will explain more clearly, so I will only give a brief overview.
"There are ten basic types of magic. Elemental Magic is the control and manipulation of the elements. Mental and Soul Magic are self explanatory. Transformational Magic is the art of changing one thing into another. Support Magic is classified as a form of magic unable to be used to attack an enemy. Weapons Magic is the concentration of magical energy into a weapon used in combat. Summoning Magic is the ability to summon sentient creatures to do your bidding. Born Magic are abilities a person is born with and require no in depth training to master. Arcane Magic are abilities achieved through intensive study and committing to memory various spells, formulae and rituals. Preternatural Magic is very dangerous and rare, usually demanding a price from the user. The last and most powerful form of magic is Divine Magic.
"Of course, each race has specific abilities that others do not and are not classified into one of these forms. Wizards in particular, such as yourself.
"Do you have any questions?"
Harry blinked. Questions? Of course he had questions. Where to start?
"Why am I here exactly?" he asked.
"That's not for me to say." Raven replied stoically. "If the situation were normal, I would say you were recognized to have abilities surpassing the majority of your race or were in a political position that could be useful to the Order. However, as you are a mere boy and yet you rate the personal attention of the most powerful people of our world, that idea is invalid. I am assuming my Mistress, Lady Tala, will explain this soon. She is not one to procrastinate."
"Your Mistress?"
"I am Apprentice to Lady Tala. She is teaching me the ways of Dark Magic. Is there anything else?"
"Um, yeah. Do I have a choice in all this? How long are you gonna keep me here? Can I see my friends? Why's Percy here? What exactly are you, cause you don't seem...human? Can I use magic now? Will the Ministry find out and expel me if I do? Can I return to Hogwarts? Will you guys help defeat Voldemort? If this place is called the Veil, do you know anything about Sirius? Can Remus come here? I bet he'd like it. You guys have werewolves, right? What about the Order of the Phoenix? Can they find me here?"
As Harry paused to breath, Raven found it her turn to blink in surprise. After taking a moment to digest the rapid-fire questions, she actually crooked a small smile.
"Yes, you have a choice. Mage Queen is all about freedom, if you'll remember. She would never force you to remain. If you choose to stay and undergo training, there is no telling how long you'll be here until you know what areas of magic you will study. You may see your friends at anytime, provided you keep our secret from them. I don't know who 'Percy' is, so I can't help you there. Exactly, I am a Dark Elf from the world of Kanaau. Yes, you may use magic here without being discovered by your government. I'm afraid I don't know what 'Hogwarts' is either, but I'm sure you'll be able to return there eventually. I also don't know who 'Voldemort' is, but after training I doubt you will need our help to defeat him, unless he is a mage. If you're looking for a specific person who came here, you'll have to ask Mage Queen. She's the only one who could help you. If 'Remus' is a Werewolf, he will most likely be welcome here. Of course, you'll have to ask my Mistress. I've never heard of the 'Order of the Phoenix', but if they are an order from your world, they will not be able to find you here."
Harry blinked yet again before a large grin broke out over his face. This definitely looked promising.
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Percy crept slowly through the darkness, unknowing of where he was going until a glint of silver near the far wall stopped him. A light suddenly snapped on above him making him jump in surprise and illuminating him while leaving most of the darkness intact.
In the dim light, he could now make out the vague shapes of two figures in shadow.
One was standing to the side of the other with a high ponytail and narrowed violet eyes that gleamed with malice. Her right hand rested on the sword at her hip, the other lost in the folds of her black cloak. On her forehead rested a simple black metal band.
The other was sitting on a large black throne. All he could see of that one was long jet black hair that flowed down onto the floor and the light glinting off a black crown that wrapped around her head at the hairline with a large silver disc in the middle. Clear jewels on silver threads trailed from the crown down her hair past her shoulders. Liquid silver eyes slowly rose and rested on him.
Immediately realizing who this person was, Percy dropped to one knee and bowed his head low.
"Mage Queen!" he gasped.
He couldn't believe it. If the stories were true, he was kneeling before a living goddess!
A silken voice drifted through the darkness, little more than a whisper but ringing clearly nonetheless.
"I have chosen you as the boy's guide." the voice said neutrally. "Teach him and protect him, for he is a precious treasure and the only hope your world has left. Do not fail me."
Percy's eyes went wide. Obviously Harry was special, but for Mage Queen to speak of him like that had to mean he was important to more than just the Wizarding World. After all, there were hundreds of other worlds allied with Mage Queen and she had never bothered with their internal politics.
"Majesty," he said in his most humble voice, "I am honored you would choose me for this task. I promise I won't fail you."
"Heads up!" Tala's voice snapped.
Percy raised his head just in time to catch the object she sent hurtling toward him. Turning it over in his hand, he found it to be a small mirror with black glass on a silver chain.
Daring to look up in confusion, he found Mage Queen watching him in what could have been veiled amusement while Tala glared as always.
"Give it to the boy." Tala commanded. "Make sure he wears it."
Percy nodded and tucked the pendant into a pocket of his cloak. "Yes, my lady."
Mage Queen spoke again in her strangely soft voice that somehow radiated otherworldly power.
"Go. I will send for you both when he is ready."
Not daring to question her, he rose to his feet and bowed from the waist before turning and walking out the door.
In the darkness, violet eyes turned to meet quicksilver. A small smile bloomed on the dark warrior's face as she looked at her queen and the anger bled from her face.
"Lagran's right." Tala said, a smirk in her voice. "He's a kiss ass. A weak one at that."
Mage Queen chuckled, her laugh a dark cadence. "Tala, be good." she scolded her right hand in amusement. Looking toward the far door with a faraway expression, she murmured, "He has potential."
A/N - I just know I lost over half of you with the explaination. 'sweatdrop'
1.
Mage Queen is NOT a goddess! They just think she is since she
created the world they live on and is so mysterious. (Goddess in my
mind equals Mary Sue. No one in this story is truely all powerful.)
She is, however, an immortal being. I'm not telling you what.
'grins'
2. If you notice the fact that certain words such as
werewolf and wizard are capitilized when others speak, but not when
Harry does; it is not a typo. It's because the People of the Veil
think of them as proper nouns, while Harry does not...yet.
3.
Tala's not a bitch, I swear!
4. Yes, Percy is incredibly OOC, but
it will be explained. Next chapter I hope. Just give him the
benefit of the doubt for now.
