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Hm, things to point out, lemme think. Ah, first thing is to Shoy of the Fire Nation, this is yaoi/slash/shonen-ai or in other words, 'gayness' so if that's what was so scary I'm giving you fair warning. And if you do look around the Avatar fiction section there is some other Zuko/Sokka, though I think most of them are kinda rushed.
Same thing for Queen of the Leos, who was kind of rude. I said in the beginning of the chapter that it was Zuko/Sokka. And what is wrong with me? My dear, I'm a yaoi fangirl and am loving every minute of it :D
Maybe I should have put a warning up in the first chapter. Well, I will now:
THIS STORY HAS YAOI! IF YOU DON'T LIKE TWO GUYS KISSING LEAVE! LEAVE NOW AND DON'T BOTHER ME WITH YOUR PETTY FLAMES!
Now I'll have to do the same with the first chapter
Bishojo Osaka, Yes its amazing what you can find when you look for it :D Its so fun.
Baby Chibi, yes, no graphic stuff besides some kissing, sadly I didn't think I could fit it in. I'm pretty much winging it right now; it's mostly shonen-ai
And thank you for support from everyone else
You're probably tired of me ranting so I'll just continue
Zuko rubbed his red cheek which stung. For one thing he'd been in many fights and had been injured many times. The scar on his eye had been no fun, and that is one thing he would never forget. And he himself had been burned while training his own fire-bending skills. This would be another thing to remember
Sokka slaps hard; really, really hard. Even with gloves on!
Zuko sighed and he looked to the brunet who still sat in his lap, though Sokka had his back turned to him, practically radiating anger, arms folded and staring at the ice wall. Sokka was mad, but it was too cold to move away from the fire-bender, so he just refused to look at Zuko.
"You didn't have to hit me" Zuko said, his tone clearly annoyed. Sokka snorted, his breath visible in the cold
"Bastard" he growled and Zuko rolled his eyes
"I didn't even do anything" the fire-bender said and Sokka turned a glare on him
"You groped my crotch" he said angrily and Zuko couldn't contain a snort of laughter "You're such a pervert!"
"I'm not the one who came and sat in my lap" Zuko said and Sokka's face blushed a little bit more on top of his anger flush
"Perverted bastard"
Zuko only rolled his eyes, unamused. Wonderful, he'd upgraded from a pervert and a bastard to a perverted bastard. Alright, so he might have gone a tiny bit far with the teasing, but it was kind of funny to see Sokka's face go all red again... at least it was funny before he got slapped, ow...
At least their little make out session had passed some of the time, but now it seemed to drag on again, making both of them feel the hunger and tempting sleep. Sokka's temper also tampered some and he slumped against the fire bender's chest, his head resting on Zuko's shoulder, eyes closing. Zuko narrowed his eyes at the other teen and prodded him in the side of the head lightly
"Wha...?" Sokka said sluggishly as he opened his eyes and turned his head to look at the fire bender
"Hypocrite" Zuko said "What happened to that 'You will die if you sleep' speech?"
"I'm only resting my eyes" Sokka said and folded his arms across his chest and turned his head away to shut his eyes again. Zuko was like a living, breathing furnace and the heat made him tired, even though he knew not to rest, he couldn't help it. It was like a cold night and the only warm spot was near the fire place, and the heat chased away the cold so it would sooth you to sleep. It was hard to pull away from, even though you knew you'd have a sore back from sleeping on the floor. Sokka did not want to move away from the heat, too comfortable.
Zuko sighed and took Sokka by the shoulders, giving him a good shake to wake him up. Sokka was soon awake and yelled so the fire-bender would stop shaking him
"All-right! I'm-up! Stop-shay-king-me!" the water village teen exclaimed and Zuko stopped, smirking again
"Sure about that?"
"Yes, I'm awake" Sokka said and glared at him, irritated, hating when Zuko looked smug. Smug Perverted Bastard.
"Good" Zuko said and let go of the other teen, instead he placed his arms around Sokka's waist, indirectly forcing Sokka to lean back against him again. Sokka blinked for a moment, a small blush crossing his cheeks over his nose, and said nothing more; and he didn't fall asleep again
Aw... cuteness for the end. Ok, so this one is kinda short, but I have already started the next one
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