-Great big groan, rubbing her temples- People, people! What does the term 'two guys kissing' mean to you! I've found so many people grossed out by the kissing I'd hate to see your reactions is I wrote a sex scene, I'm not a beginner people, I'm a true blue Yaoi Fangirl with 2 years experience at writing; Geese do I have to post a 'graphic kissing' label on the first chapter? There are more graphic kiss scenes out there, trust me, I know, I've looked (And I've enjoyed reading them). All these newbies to yaoi should know yaoi is the more graphic; shonen-ai is the more fluffy stuff. And in either or you're going to get guys kissing. If you don't want such 'graphic' stuff kick the rating down a notch to K, the rating aren't that hard to understand. I mean geese; I throw my anger at you and can't express how annoyed I am from just writing it
YES THEY WILL BE KISSING AGAIN! ... SOONER OR LATER!
-Grumbles- And if you ask me to read a story, Let me make it clear that I only read yaoi stories now a days.
Sorry if I'm being harsh but I must throw my anger out some how and writing is my way of doing it. I have this story pretty much set in mind so if you don't like it by now go, if you like it please enjoy
Mm, lemme see, what else? –Ponder, ponder-
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In the Avatar Section at Mary-sue fics to cut down the population- AHHHHH! Die! Die! Pleases DIE! It's like a swarm of locus in here! –Whacks one that comes at her with a fly swatter- SAVE THE YAOI!
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And there goes my Mary-sue aggravation again; sorry if it offends any Mary-sue writers, but I'm starting to get annoyed with them all, Poor Avatar is getting pummeled with them, I think even worse that Yu-Gi-Oh ever was –Clears throat- Right, on with the fic
Both Zuko and Sokka were herded by the 5 water benders towards the large glacier they had seen when they had exited the crack in the ice. It didn't seem to have any purpose to them; it looked like just a big chunk of ice, though as they drew closer they didn't seem to be veering to the side of the glacier, but straight for it. Maybe they had an igloo that they camped out in; maybe they had been hunting when they had found the half frozen teens. Neither Sokka nor Zuko knew because the water-benders wouldn't speak, they only pushed them along towards the glacier
What they reached the great sheet of ice is became apparent just how big the glacier was. It had to be 20 stories high and as big as a foot ball field. Both teens were in slight awe of the size of the thing, but maybe they were even more shocked when the water-bender Zuko had attacked moved toward the great wall, placing gloved hands to the surface. The water-bender moved their hands in a wavy pattern against the ice and it melted away, making the mouth of a very long dark cavern. Zuko and Sokka were both shoved forward and they stumbled slightly into the cave, going into the darkness, hearing the sound of ice cracking and water sloshing as two of the water benders stayed behind to seal the entrance again, the stronger water bender leading them forward, two backing them up incase they tried anything stupid, like attacking with a bunch of water around them.
It seemed to Sokka that they'd been walking for hours, but maybe that was because of lack of nourishment and sleep that made it seem so long because soon they came into a well lit opening in the ice and he was surprised to see a large city under the ice, many houses and people bustling about as if they were in any other city. It was like a dome in the place, the top of the dome made of mostly clear ice so light could shine through and some barely viable holes showed sky, obviously for air otherwise all these people would use up all the oxygen in a matter of minutes.
Zuko was also amazed at the city below the ice, and it took something special to render him speechless. He had no idea people could survive so well in these drastic conditions. And there had to be many water benders here to build and maintain a place like this, many powerful water benders.
They were urged along into the city, bypassing the houses and people. The people watched them pass. Some women watched from window in their ice homes, other women watched from the streets. Mothers drew away their children who begged to see the prisoners, steering them away from Zuko and Sokka as if they were diseased. Sokka was slightly hurt by their reactions, they were his own people, the sister tribe of his own people. Zuko was slightly more accustomed to dirty looks from earth-benders and water-benders, hell even his own nation scowled at him.
They both noticed the same thing missing from the city though. All these people were women and young children. There was no site of young or even middle aged men in the crowd.
They were taken to a large ice igloo that was in the middle of the city, and it didn't seem to be any sort of a home where a master water-bender would live, more like a training area or meeting hall, either way there were many people dressed in warm clothes who stopped what they were doing to see who entered the large spaced room.
The water-bender that had lead them there finally reached up to remove their hood, revealing an older woman, dark hair like most of the other people in water tribes and dark skin like Sokka's from being at the poles. She looked at them sternly, judgingly.
"A water-bender with a fire-bender," she said "What kind of treason is this?" There was a pause and then Sokka got mad
"Hey, I'm not a water bender!" he yelled angrily "Don't mix me up in that magic."
"Maybe not," She said approaching them, yet keeping a safe distance "But you do come from a water tribe, even though I've never seen you from any tribe around here." She studied Sokka, his dark skin, his face structure and hair. He was defiantly from a water tribe, from the North Pole, or South Pole, but him being from the South Pole was highly unlikely. Half way around the world would be far traveling, and with a fire-bender. "Traveling with a fire-bender."
"I'm not traveling with him; I've been suck with him for the passed day!" Sokka corrected loudly, beyond irritated along with hungry and exhausted. The woman stared at him a minute, pondering and searching for and signs that might mean he's lying. She suddenly stood up and looked to another woman who held a spear
"Throw the fire-bender in a seal hole, make sure he's tied up," she said and the other woman stood straighter before bowing, replying a 'Yes ma'am!' Zuko's eyes widened
"Seal hole?" he asked and Sokka smirked at him
"Yup, it's where lion seals feed" the water tribe teen said "And they aren't too picky about what they eat" Zuko glared at him, wanting to retort 'Well neither are you' but bit it back, an evil thought playing in his mind. If he was going down, so was Sokka. Zuko gave an offended look
"Oh, so this is how you treat a lover?" The fire-bender accused and Sokka's face was swallowed in a blush
"Lover! What do you mean lover!" Sokka yelled and Zuko smirked.
"Oh come now, you can't deny what happened last night" he said and watched Sokka's face burn in embarrassment
"Nothing happened last night!" Sokka yelled, his voice squeaking in denial. The woman watched them for a minute raising an eyebrow, the corner of her mouth twitching into a smirk. She looked back to the other women
"On second thought" she said, amusement hinting in her voice "Tie them up and throw them both in a igloo, we'll deal with them later" The other women glanced at her, looking doubtful "Both of them" she repeated and the others only nodded, two women coming forward with ropes to tie them tightly, binding their wrists and ankles, then two hefted Sokka up while another two dragged Zuko, not giving him a chance to get on his feet.
Poor Zuko, the water tribe really doesn't like him huh? Which makes sense cause of the stupid war, and before anybody asks, yes, its like Sokka's village, all the men left to go to war with the fire benders. More Zuko/Sokka next chapter, if I get nice reviews. Think happy thoughts!