In my place I mostly have problems with writing in english. I speak a lot of english but not in spanish but I write a lot in spanish but not in english so it's a little or very lazy. Thanks for the reviews. I may be a little sensitive on what someone said about the story but hey, you live and you learn.
"Sora?"
"Yeah, mom?"
"Kairi is calling."
"By phone?"
"Yeah, here."
"Kairi?"
"Sora, I have a problem."
"Like?"
"We need the right things for the baby, like a crib, cloth, diapers, etc. Get what I mean? And I don't have the money for all of that."
"Oh, really? Don't worry. I'm sure that we'll get those before you blow up like a big puffer fish."
"What?"
"I…. Well I mean…. A really sexy puffer fish."
"You owe me."
" On what?"
"To take me to the store."
"….. I well…. I'm busy."
"Get ready to die of boredom! See ya tomorrow!"
"….I'm so screwed."
"Hey, Sora!"
"……."
"Problem?"
"Save me, Riku!"
"Why?"
"Kairi is gonna take me shopping!"
"Gosh! That is terrible! Oh, well, there's nothing I can do."
"Come back here!"
"What can I do?"
"…..Hide me?"
"….No, thank you."
"…. Wait! I got an idea! What if we make a surprise for her?"
"What kinda surprise?"
"A baby shower."
"Baby shower?"
"Yeah.Thosekind of parties where you celebratethat the person is havin ababy andthey sometimes givepresents, she doesn't have to waste money or take us shopping that much."
"It just might work."
"So, let's start now."
"Don't rush yourself to much, Sora. You still have that injury that is trying to heal."
"Good thing I took the right medicine."
"I just came so you would hide me from Namine."
"What's wrong? Can't handle her?"
"I can't walk very well!" Riku said. Then the door opens and Kairi and Namine were at the door with an evil smile in there faces. Sora and Riku got freaked out.
"It is time." Namine said.
"Oh, yeah."
"NO! GET AWAY FROM US!" Riku shouts.
"NO! IT'S TORTURE! TORTURE!" (To me it is)
Dun dun dun
(Store)
"Oh, look at these shirts!"
"And theses jewelry!"
" When is it gonna end?"
"Are we done?"
"We're missing shoes!"
"NOOOOO!"
"NOOOOO!"
"These boys are whining too much…." Kairi looks at Namine.
"Okay, we'll give you a brake."
"Yay!" Sora cheered.
"Video game store! My favorite!" Riku shouted.
"…..boys… we'll never understand them."
"I'd be surprised if a girl went there." Namine said. Then they see a girl going to the game shop. (You can say that that's me)
"Okay, now I've seen everything." Kairi said. She went out of the store and looked around.
"You know, I was thinking that maybe we could check if there's anything for the baby."
"Yeah, let's check that store." Kairi said.
(Back to Sora and Riku)
"I'm gonna check on Kairi."
"Okay. I'll get a pizza."
"Save some for me."
"okay…." Sora walks away. "not." Riku whispered.
"Okay, if I where Kairi, where will I go?" He then looks at a store where they sale cloth for babies. "Maybe there." Sora said. He then entered and looked around and then saw Kairi looking at a little green baby shirt but then she looked at the prize and she almost freaked. "Too expensive?"
"I can't afford all of these." Kairi said.
"….This just gives me an idea. But where's Namine?"
"Looking for Riku."
"…Hey, here are the shoes that you gave me back."
"Oh, I'm sorry, Sora."
"No, it's okay. It may help out."
"oh, why did mom had to give away the cloth that I use to use?"
"I heard that they had a problem with the money."
"Oh, now I remember?"
"Are you buying something?" A lady asked.
"Yes, I am."
"Well I could help you. Do you know if your baby is a boy or a girl?"
"No and I want something that is for both."
"Well you come to the right place. We're having a special today for you two soon-to-be parents."
"Soon-to-be parents? Oh, you got it all wrong. I'm not the father." Sora said.
"Really?"
"I'm just her boyfriend helping her."
"…That's nice." The lady said.
"Yeah but we can come later."
"Why leave, Kairi?"
"Because I have this feeling to have pizza!"
"Now you're speaking my language."
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