Disclaimer: this is a derivative work of fiction, as such I make no claim to any of the ideas or characters that belong to the various people who thought of them originally.
Advance notice: each chapter is based around a set event not length.
Feedback: this is my first published fan fiction so it is kind of necessary if you wish to: a) see this continued, and b) see any improvement in my writing
Review response:
jayesh: yes, though the comment about the city being moved should have been a bigger clue than the ribbon device, heres a slight clue as to two others.
Elsewhen
I looked down at my sister Prudence, or Prue as she preferred, as she looked around, trying not to fidget and shake the branch I was standing on, while grinning.
I did, however, have a moment of panic as she looked up, but I had never hidden in a tree before, due to my hay fever and I was wearing dark green clothes, better to hide the dirt, and myself.
Oops, I held the bridge of my nose, as mum's friend, Sam, had taught me, daring myself to sneeze, as Prue finally got bored and ran off as fast as her two year old legs could carry her.
I sighed in relief, and reached into my "medicine" bag for a tissue, when everything changed.
" " Was my first response as my tree, complete with branches suddenly became a lakeside field, and the view of a relatively quiet park, a crowd of people looking as surprised as I was.
I opened my mind, using the disciplines mum had taught as soon as she realised I had any ability as a witch.
I soon shut my senses back down, however, as I was overwhelmed with the surrounding peoples fear, confusion and uncertainty.