Here's my second chapter.
Ch 2
Elizabeth was the first to awaken from her unconscious state. She felt rather uncomfortable in her clothes the false hips kept- she thought for a minute. False hips? Since when did she wear false hips? She looked at her clothes and groaned.
" NO!" she cried when she saw a brocade gown.
She looked around and saw the surroundings much as they had been when they had entered the house earlier. But she did not hear cars or the commotion of the average twenty-first century. She heard some sounds and several horses. Then a loud booming noise sounded at the front door. Someone was trying to break down the door. Quickly she dropped to the floor in a mock faint.
The door collapsed to the ground and people rushed in.
" Check the rooms!" someone commanded in a British accent.
She heard footsteps and closed her eyes praying for a miracle.
" My god!" someone gasped.
" Get the general!" they ordered.
" What is going on here!" A man asked.
" General O'Hara! We found two women." A younger man said.
" Very good Captain Roberts." O'Hara said.
He stepped over to them and felt for their pulse.
" Well they are still alive, someone get them out of here and to Fort Carolina." He ordered.
Elizabeth opened her eyes slowly. She acted as though she didn't know where she was.
" Where am I?" She asked.
" Wait one of them has woken up." O'Hara said.
" Are you alright?" He asked her helping her up.
" I-I think so. Where am I?" She asked again.
" Charlestown, South Carolina, miss." He said.
" Do you have a name?" He asked.
" Elizabeth Braden- Oh my God!" She gasped looking over at Catherine.
" Catherine!" She cried rushing over t her friend.
Catherine had received a large gash to her forehead and was still unconscious.
" Let's get you to a safer place and we will administer medical to your friend." O'Hara said placing his arm around her shoulder. Elizabeth nodded as he led her out.
Things were going to be interesting.
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