Ok second chapter PLEASE R&R! ok Chritopher Roin takes a long time to type so i'm shortning it to C.R. (aka Christopher Robin)


When C.R. finally woke up he could see his so called friends looking down at him and then Rabbit said

"Well what do you have to say for yourself?"

"ooh... my head ooh...HOW DARE YOU! YOU PEEBRAIN!You nocked my down and ruined my trousers!"C.R. said

"AND NOW MY HEAD HURTS!"

"Well atleast I didn't louse a million dollars!"Rabbit said while helping C.R. up of the ground.

"Wait! I have an Idea!"C.R. said.

"Oh wow C.R. had an Idea someone mark this on the calender!" Rabbit said.

"Ok all we need to do is make a timemachine! This way we can go back in time and stop me from lousing my money I..I..I mean Poohs money!"said C.R.

"Ow is that all?All we need to do is build a timemachine that shoulden't be to hard I mean no one has built a timemachine and we have limited material and none of us are sceintist or any where near a lab but that won't make a difference right C.R.?" Rabbit said with his eyebrows low and his face wrinkeld.

"yeah sure we don't have a lab and we have limited amount of material and no one has built a timemachine before and none of us are sceintist but we have something better than all of that!"

"What our friendship?"

"No...ME!" C.R. said.

Then Rabbit whisperd to his friends (not including C.R.)

"We're all gona dye."


sorry if it's a little short any way let me know if I should continue this story so PLEASE R&R and tell me wether it's good and I should continue or if it's bad and I might consider quiting it. I reviewed myself so I would realy realy like some one to R&R my story.