Ok first off I want to thank fischgeist for reviewing my "Winnie the Pooh and the timemachine" story it was really helpfull. So I want to make a few changes like Christopher Robin will not be abbreviated C.R. anymore your right fischeist it does take the reader out of the story. Allso I want to clear somethings up for my readers the reason why Christopher Robin is so mean is that I thought since Christopher Robin is so nice and smart that I'd make fun of him by making him mean and dumb. And allso I'd like to say again to fisgeist that I loved your story about the tick and so did my sister "Goth Aaragorn" it's on my favorite storylist :) SPOON! Ok now on with the story!
Christopher Robin began running back and forth from piglets house to rabbits to poohs , tigers and owls until he had a big pile of items from thier homes.
He began to sort through the pile while rabbit and everyone else exsept Christopher Robin went inside to think of a plan to get rid of Christopher Robin.
Maybe they could runaway and live in the ninetinine acer woods he probable won't be able to find them there.
But before they could say anything else the door burst open and there stood Christopher Robin in the door way.
"I've done it!" said Christopher Robin with a grin on his face.
"What are you finaly potty trained!" Rabbit said with his hands on his hips.
"NO!... I have made a TIMEMACHINE!" he said full of pride.
"Oh to bad." said pooh.
"How could you possible make a time machine! you barly no how to count to ten!" said rabbit chuckling slitely.
"I can count to ten perfectly ... um one ... um um ... uh what comes after one?"
every one started laughing and pooh allmost fell out of his chair from laughing so hard.
"Come on everyone let's see what Christopher Robin's made." said rabbit.
Every one followed Christopher Robin out of the house and into the middle of the lawn.
There stood what looked like a big box with trash and duck tape on it and a door that led into the box.
"Ok are we ready!" Christopher Robin said.
"Oh yeah we're ready aren't we?" Rabbit said sarcastically.
everybody shook thier heads and went into the big box.
"Ok let's see we want to go back fortyfive minutes." Christopher Robin said while pushing some buttons.
Then a few beeps came out of the little machine that Christopher Robin had pushed some of the buttons.
"Hold on every one!" said Christopher Robin.
Then they heard a loud noise like a rocket blasting off into outer space.
They felt dizzy from the shaking and Rabbit wondered "Maybe he did make a time machine?...NO of course not!"
Then the noise stoped and they were no longer dizzy.
Smoke started to come out of the little machine.
"I did it!" Christopher Robin said exsidedly.
He opened the small door and took little steps out of the box until he was out of it completely.
He looked out at the scenery.
It was hard to see anything because there was mist and fog every where wich made it look like they were walking through a cloud.
"Oh my!" Christopher Robin said.
"What is it?" they all asked.
"Um well I seamed to have made a slight miss counculation." he said with a frown on his face.
"What do you mean?" Rabbit said looking at him angerly.
"Well um good news my time machine works and the bad news is that we went back a little more than we wanted to." He said unhappily.
"How much is a little?" asked Rabbit.
"Um about three hundred and five years I think but I could be wrong." Cristopher Robin said timidly.
"YOU DOLT!" they all said.
"Well then where are we?" Piglet said.
Ok that's it hope you liked it please R&R! I'm not going to make another chapter untill I get a review please let me know if you liked it thank you:) sorry if I miss spelled anything. Allso be on the look out for my new story wich I will be starting soon it's called "MPP Silver Valley Season 1" for more information look at my profile.