thank you for all the reveiws its been good to know that poeple like my work:
to:Ripper-Roo
Great fic so far! You're off to a great start! But, if I may make a
suggestion, you might need a beta reader. This was a little
confusing, and you messed up a lot in your grammar. I would be glad
to be your beta reader. Just tell me if you want me to be. Anyways,
uipdate soon! I'll be looking forward to it! .
thank you for offering but i'll just get my sis to do it thanks for you suggestions though.
to:Invader-Maz
o! MORE MORE! I lub it! I can't wait for more!It's great! wow i'm
using only ! marks!
thank you i'm glad you like it.
Thank you to all that R&R my fanfiction thank you a bunch
