LKLTB
You are the best the first and well really the only person to be honest. You are my favorite review to respond to. A person who tells the truth especially when they did not have to admit they where out done by a guy.
review lord
A Tk did not get lucky, Kari got lucky she played Tk right in to her hands. And what was wrong with My 5th chapter, huh well what is wrong with it, nothing well good that's what I thought.
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Ah thank you
assassin's partner
Just read what will happen after I finish responding to the reviews.
Kalanadiangal4ever
I hope that was not a lye to just make me feel better
Kei Ikari
Tell you what after I write a bit more I'll change this to no I'll keep it the same then I'll type a chapter up and post it at for you so that way you can have that lemon, but I will promise there will be sex in this and the sequel that is if you all want a sequel so far everyone seems to not to want a sequel.
takarifan#1
Puh lease it Tk he won't rape Kari, so get over it
Rock-Angewomon
OK miss person who I will not call 'the Davis bash hater'? (jj not mad at you) You have your wish I will make sure that this chapter is dedicated to Davis bashing, and Tk and Kari having hot passionate $ex. I'm just teasing
Moppy break happens in march or it April, just a extra week off of school.
To all others give me some real comments and I'll respond.
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OK now I shall start the story.
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Well maybe now
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Or now
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OK now I'm serious or else your really going to kill me so here you go
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Two girls walked away laughing at Davis's lame attempt at saying more than hi to them. "What did I do?" Davis asks him self looking over at Matt who has about ten girls gathered around him and one right next to him in almost the amount of required amount of clothes you need on a nude beach. "That's it!" he shouted making a bunch of people turn and stare at the geek shouting 'that's it' blushing Davis runs out of there as fast as he can.
More to come On Davis adventure later.
Kari smiled at Tk and said "Tk I like you, in fact I like you a lot. I want us too..." she stopped embarrassed and turned away from the pillow that she was pretending to be Tk. After making sure she had clothes on, and that Tk had some ice for his nose. "Come on Kari you can do this, he all ready saw you naked, so you have nothing else to lose yet." She says to her trying to convince her self that, though she all ready had to stop her self from thinking about what Tk must of thought when he saw her.
It always made her feel one of two things, mad or sad. The first because he probably thought her of having small breasts. The second was that he probably thought that she was to fat for him. "Tk I hate you" she shouted out loud.
Tk walked out of the bathroom drying his hair with a towel "What did you say Kari?" he asks her
She walks right over to him and slaps him hard on the face "You jerk how dare you call me a flat chested fat chick" She says before stomping off in to the kitchen.
Tk stands there stunned for a minute. "Um ok" he says then walks over and picks up Kari's cell phone.
Pressing five her waited for the familiar voice to pick up.
Matt looked at all the girls and said "hold on a sec," then picked up his phone "Hello?" he asks not sure if it would be lil sis or lil bro.
"Hey Matt Listen it's Tk, there's sort of a problem Me and Kari are sharing a bed and well I saw her naked, then two hours later she hits me and says I called her a flat chested fat chick" Tk says and then Matt can hear something like a pan flying "um I got to I think Kari heard me say it"
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"Come on Kari you know I wasn't really calling you that" he says as Kari chases him around the place trying to strangle the guy who she had been about to offer to make love to just a few minuets before.
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Super short but I'm brain dead just wanted a short update and chance to respond pleave give sme soem reviews and ideas