UNCANNY X-MEN MINI-ANSWERED PRAYER
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(Scene opens with Lorna sitting in a booth at Alex's old bar with a beer bottle on the table in front of her, it's half empty so she's really not had that much of it, and she looks disheveled and sad). [Happy hour at -fill in later- bar, but Lorna Dane feels anything but happy, for just a few short months earlier she had witnessed the death of the man she had loved more than life itself]. [Since then, X-factor, their former team had split up, with the team members going their separate ways].
[Being alone had been especially hard on her, with it lately seeming to be to much to bear, so today like many other days since the accident, she had tried to drown her sorrows, but lately it had stopped working]. [Maybe it was the fact that she had found some old photos that had brought on this uneasy feeling, but it could be the possibility that she had been scared to admit, that she had been feeling his presence all around her for sometime now].
(Throughout this time we see her sort of in a daze, occasionally taking a sip from the bottle, maybe eating a peanut or two out of a bowl on the table, or maybe saying no to somebody asking her a question). (Then we see her look or glance at the clock, before somebody behind the bar says), "Last call, hey Lorna, do you want another one," (the guy behind the counter says while wiping off the bar).
"No thanks, I think I'd better be going," (she says smiling while putting her coat on and leaving some money on the table). "Do you want me to call you a cab," (the guy asks while picking up the peanut bowls). "No, I think I'll walk, but thanks anyway," (she say as she finishes putting her coat on and leaves the bar).
[She takes to the street, hoping to clear her head, or at least east this feeling that she has, one of his presence all around her still]. (She pulls her long coat tightly around her with one hand while with the other one she puts on her hat, the hat and coat like she had on after Jamie's funeral when she was looking for Alex).
(Next we see her walking on the sidewalk, passing different people before walking by a couple kissing, we see her pained reaction). [She had thought a walk out in the cool, crisp winter air would do her good, however it hadn't]. [In truth, she begins to regret not calling a cab almost from the moment she set foot outside the bar]. (We see her continuing to walk before she stops abruptly). [Suddenly she spots someone that looks uncannily familiar, her heart skips a beat, could it be....].
(We see her face light up with hope that it's Alex as she puts her hand on his shoulder), "Alex," (the man turns around, it's not Alex). [But alas, this time, like the numerous times before it, is fruitless]. "Yes, can I help you," (the man asks smiling). "Oh, I'm so sorry, I thought you were somebody else," (Lorna says looking apologetically while smiling before moving on down the sidewalk by the other bars and businesses as we see their out front signs).
"What's wrong with me, that's the third time this week that I've done that," (Lorna says looking depressed and like she's going to cry before saying), "It's because he's gone and your last words to him were ones of anger, and now you can't take them back, that's what's wrong," (she says starting to cry, we see tears sliding down her cheeks). [Then it happens...]. (Suddenly she doubles over in pain, clutching her head, she's obviously in a lot of pain), "Aargh, what's happening," (she mutters as we see blood starting to come from her nose). (We pull back in the shot and see her doubled over at the bottom of the shot and we see a bright light above her).
(Then suddenly a mans body drops out of the light and onto her, which knocks her completely to the ground). "Hey, get off me," (she says shoving the body off of her before standing up and having her power flare up as she looks very angry and ready to fight). "Oh, sor.," (The man tries to say before doubling over and heaving his guts out in front of her). "Oh yuck, okay buddy, just who are you and why'd you fall on me," (she says reaching a hand out to the man, who's trying to stand up). "Lor, Lorna," (the mans stammers out while lifting his gaze to meet hers). "Alex," (she says gasping before he staggers towards her).
"No, you're not Alex, he's dead, get away from me, you're not real,""((she says decking him, and he reels from the punch). "Oh, okay, I deserved that," (he says standing back up and wiping away the blood from his busted lip). (We pan back to see her face change from anger to pure shock and recognition that it's him). "A, Alex, it's really you, you're alive," (she stammers out seeming hesitant to touch him). "Yah Lorna, it's me," (Alex says smiling as he starts to cry as well, and takes her hands in his). [After months apart, these two lonely souls join again and become one]. (As we see them kiss passionately, and smile with intermittent), "I love you's," (thrown in there). [And all her tension, anger, sadness, and grief evaporate away in the arms of her one true love]. =END
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+I haven't figured these two out just yet+
(Scene opens with Lorna sitting in a booth at Alex's old bar with a beer bottle on the table in front of her, it's half empty so she's really not had that much of it, and she looks disheveled and sad). [Happy hour at -fill in later- bar, but Lorna Dane feels anything but happy, for just a few short months earlier she had witnessed the death of the man she had loved more than life itself]. [Since then, X-factor, their former team had split up, with the team members going their separate ways].
[Being alone had been especially hard on her, with it lately seeming to be to much to bear, so today like many other days since the accident, she had tried to drown her sorrows, but lately it had stopped working]. [Maybe it was the fact that she had found some old photos that had brought on this uneasy feeling, but it could be the possibility that she had been scared to admit, that she had been feeling his presence all around her for sometime now].
(Throughout this time we see her sort of in a daze, occasionally taking a sip from the bottle, maybe eating a peanut or two out of a bowl on the table, or maybe saying no to somebody asking her a question). (Then we see her look or glance at the clock, before somebody behind the bar says), "Last call, hey Lorna, do you want another one," (the guy behind the counter says while wiping off the bar).
"No thanks, I think I'd better be going," (she says smiling while putting her coat on and leaving some money on the table). "Do you want me to call you a cab," (the guy asks while picking up the peanut bowls). "No, I think I'll walk, but thanks anyway," (she say as she finishes putting her coat on and leaves the bar).
[She takes to the street, hoping to clear her head, or at least east this feeling that she has, one of his presence all around her still]. (She pulls her long coat tightly around her with one hand while with the other one she puts on her hat, the hat and coat like she had on after Jamie's funeral when she was looking for Alex).
(Next we see her walking on the sidewalk, passing different people before walking by a couple kissing, we see her pained reaction). [She had thought a walk out in the cool, crisp winter air would do her good, however it hadn't]. [In truth, she begins to regret not calling a cab almost from the moment she set foot outside the bar]. (We see her continuing to walk before she stops abruptly). [Suddenly she spots someone that looks uncannily familiar, her heart skips a beat, could it be....].
(We see her face light up with hope that it's Alex as she puts her hand on his shoulder), "Alex," (the man turns around, it's not Alex). [But alas, this time, like the numerous times before it, is fruitless]. "Yes, can I help you," (the man asks smiling). "Oh, I'm so sorry, I thought you were somebody else," (Lorna says looking apologetically while smiling before moving on down the sidewalk by the other bars and businesses as we see their out front signs).
"What's wrong with me, that's the third time this week that I've done that," (Lorna says looking depressed and like she's going to cry before saying), "It's because he's gone and your last words to him were ones of anger, and now you can't take them back, that's what's wrong," (she says starting to cry, we see tears sliding down her cheeks). [Then it happens...]. (Suddenly she doubles over in pain, clutching her head, she's obviously in a lot of pain), "Aargh, what's happening," (she mutters as we see blood starting to come from her nose). (We pull back in the shot and see her doubled over at the bottom of the shot and we see a bright light above her).
(Then suddenly a mans body drops out of the light and onto her, which knocks her completely to the ground). "Hey, get off me," (she says shoving the body off of her before standing up and having her power flare up as she looks very angry and ready to fight). "Oh, sor.," (The man tries to say before doubling over and heaving his guts out in front of her). "Oh yuck, okay buddy, just who are you and why'd you fall on me," (she says reaching a hand out to the man, who's trying to stand up). "Lor, Lorna," (the mans stammers out while lifting his gaze to meet hers). "Alex," (she says gasping before he staggers towards her).
"No, you're not Alex, he's dead, get away from me, you're not real,""((she says decking him, and he reels from the punch). "Oh, okay, I deserved that," (he says standing back up and wiping away the blood from his busted lip). (We pan back to see her face change from anger to pure shock and recognition that it's him). "A, Alex, it's really you, you're alive," (she stammers out seeming hesitant to touch him). "Yah Lorna, it's me," (Alex says smiling as he starts to cry as well, and takes her hands in his). [After months apart, these two lonely souls join again and become one]. (As we see them kiss passionately, and smile with intermittent), "I love you's," (thrown in there). [And all her tension, anger, sadness, and grief evaporate away in the arms of her one true love]. =END
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