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A Series of Unfortunate Events:
The Fierily Finish
The last book of the series (my version of it)
By Klaus. Baud
For Beatrice--
I feel fire on my friendship,
Now it is gone.
Chapter 1
The three orphans are trapped with Count Olaf on the wooden boat with no place to run. The three orphans are Klaus Baudelaire, Sunny Baudelaire and Violet Baudelaire. The age is 15 for Violet, 13 for Klaus and 1 for Sunny. The oldest sister is the inventing, the middle brother is a researcher and the youngest sister has four teeth and cooking skills. Sadly they are forced by Count Olaf to row toward a VFD Hotel which is 7KM away from here. By Thursday morning with 4KM to go, the children and Olaf spot a big hot air balloon basket which is floated for some time being from the eagles. Suddenly the balloon basket pop and landed three more people on the small boat. The people who had arrived of it are Hector, Isadora and Duncan Quagmire. Now there is a war with Olaf VS the rest of the members. Olaf is being pushed off the boat and swimming back to the boat. The rest of the crew rowed as fast as possible to VFD by Olaf had swim back on then boat and called the eagles to attack them. He boat had moved 50M closer to VFD Hotel. The eagles drive every boat Olaf off the boat, but 10 seconds later the boat is overload once more. Sudden a splash is occurring. Klaus asked everyone "Is the thing that we hear is a emery of VFD?
Stay tunned and find out. I hope the chapter is not too short. Also tell me how many pages you want per chapter? Is the story good ? Please review it. Thank you.