Baka: WAI! Chapter 2!
Inner Baka: Heh, I'm still surprised you want to actually work.
Baka: Hee hee, this one is gonna be great, ne IB?
IB: I guess.
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Review Response:
Red Rose: ^_^ Maybe he should check for signs of insanity. O.o I wouldn't be surprised if he was unstable. ^_^
WuffieLuver: Hee, Sorry, but I like writing, I don't mean to make you LAZY WRITERS look bad.-.-' hm, maybe it will encourage you guys to SPEED UP..o.o.tee hee, erm, j/k.*ahem* Inner Baka: *screams* get it away! Get it away! O.o
BishieHuggler: *grins* Well, Sasuke doesn't fit the category of "many people" ..*ahem* and thanks! *dies of large head* inflated ego is gonna get to me soon.
Chibi Dragon: As soon as you know what it's rated for? Rated for mature content, *ahem* rape *ahem* semi-descriptive..not overly descriptive though. But only in chapter 2, and it isn't that bad. Really. It isn.t And I'mma gonna add you to my MSN list now, since I have your msn thing WHEEE! Beware!
Kyuubigirl: I update! See? :D It's all shiny and updated! SHINY!
Carrot stix: mmm.carrots.oh, and it will be shounen-ai. But it won't be much, mostly recognizing feelings. ^_^ *prances around* Well, since they are older, they will realize things and stuff blah blah blah. Naruto and Sasuke are a hot couple and I love them and moo I like things *rant rant rant*
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Word list:
Ramen: Japanese noodle dish, in this case, miso ramen, which is noodles in some type of soup base.
Chan: A title given to children, sometimes women, amongst close friends, pets, "pets", and stuffed animals.
Ne: Hey.
Chunin: A ninja rank where they are from. It's a commander class. Meaning they can become leaders in groups, instead of being students or subordinates. Though they do still have to take subordinate slots at times.
Genjutsu: Illusionary techniques. Like make illusions.o.o.lol.hypnosis, and little things like that :D
Ninjutsu: Ninja techniques. These are often special attacks, like fire breath, or sand wall, or water dragon. There are infinite possibilities here.
Ino-pig: Ino is Sakura's childhood friend/rival. They constantly bicker over boys and stuff. The "pig" title was given to her, because of a card game in Japan, where the "Ino" card was a pig.
Naruto's clones? : Naruto has an attack called "Kage bunshin no jutsu". This is just creating clones of yourself, made of real flesh and blood. It's a higher level technique, and very few people know it.
Uzumaki Naruto Rendan: Uzumaki Naruto is his name, rendan mean combo. It's an attack he created; it is a bunch of physical attacks.
Hokage: Leader of the leaf village, and also the best ninja in the village. Currently the fifth Hokage is in place. Though I am not going to get into detail as to hat happened to the third one.
Konohamaru: the third Hokage's grandson. He is named after the village. And every treats him specially. No one sees him as Konohamaru; they see them as "the 3rd's grandson". When he was younger, he met Naruto, and followed him around all over, and had him teach him things. So they are close. He is also a few years younger than Naruto.
People treating Naruto like crap: Naruto has a demon sealed inside of him, one that almost destroyed the village. The adults are the only ones that know that, and were sworn to secrecy. But they still don't like Naruto, and treat him poorly.
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Disclaimer: I own Naruto. And know what else I own? Microsoft! Yeah! It's true! I swear on the grave of the t-rex I also own. *nods*
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After Innocence Chapter 2
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Sasuke stepped into the restaurant and looked around. He spotted Naruto at the usual table, with his arms around two girls.
Naruto looked up at the entrance and saw Sasuke. "Hey! Sasuke! Come sit down!" then he mumbled something to the girls, and they left.
Sasuke went and sat across from Naruto, "How do you manage to make them leave?"
Naruto smiled slyly, "All they want is a little attention, so I talk to them, flirt with them etcetera, and then they are satisfied and will leave when you ask."
Sasuke sighed, "I'd rather them stalk me quietly, than talk to them."
Naruto chuckled, "As cold as always." Then he called to the server for some ramen.
Sasuke ordered too, then smiled at Naruto, "So, what was this mission that you wanted-"
"Sakura-chan!" Naruto shouted and waved.
Sasuke turned around and spotted the pink haired girl. She walked briskly to the table and sat down. She seemed stressed.
Naruto also noticed this and asked, "Ne, Sakura-chan, what's up?"
Sasuke closed his eyes and got ready for an earful of inane chattering. They were getting used to Sakura's rants. She often does when something gets on her nerves.
But, her mouth isn't the only thing that has grown. Her abilities have also improved, and she has become not only the smartest, but the strongest female ninja in Chunin rank. Her abilities lie in Genjutsu, and she has been picking up healing and water Ninjutsu.
"That stupid Ino-pig has gone and done it again! She knew I liked him! But she went and asked him out! I can't believe her!" Sakura ranted.
*Too bad she only worries about boys and her looks.* Sasuke thought.
Two bowls of steaming ramen were set down in front of Naruto and Sasuke. "Hey, miss, would you like anything?" the server asked.
Sakura thought for a moment, "Sure, spicy chicken please!" She smiled.
After Sakura got her ramen, Naruto began his story about his mission.
".and then there were these three rouges, they turned out to be ninjas! They took the woman hostage and then." Naruto continued his story.
*He talks more than Sakura* Sasuke though amused. *But at least he's more interesting.*
".and then this other guy came out of NOWHERE and me and my clones did our good ol' 'Uzumaki Naruto rendan'!" he grinned, "And that was that! Hee hee hee!"
Sasuke smiled, "Sounds fun. Actually, it sounds a million times better than what I have to do."
Sakura nodded. "Yeah. You get all the exciting missions, while we are stuck doing teaching and small missions."
Naruto grinned, and they were finishing their meals, when Naruto overheard a conversation.
".did you hear what happened to the late third Hokage's grandson?" a woman at another table said to her friend.
Naruto's ears perked up. *Konohamaru?* Naruto thought *What happened to him?*
"No, what?" the other woman said.
"I heard that some foreigner harassed him!" the first woman said.
"Harassed as in." the second woman said.
"Beaten and raped." the first one said quietly.
Naruto dropped his chopsticks and bowl, spilling his ramen on the table.
Sasuke looked up at him, "Hm? Naruto? What's up?"
Naruto got up and went to the women, "WHAT DID YOU SAY?!"
The women scoffed and glared at him, slightly fearing the boy. "Foreigner my ass, it was probably you."
Naruto blanched. He felt tears sting his eyes. "I would never." then he ran out of the restaurant.
Sasuke got up and went to the women, "What were you talking about?"
The women smiled up at him.
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Naruto ran towards Konohamaru's house. *Those stupid women how dare they!* he thought angrily. *Though the people of this town do hate me, how dare they say that! I would never do that!*
He ran up the front stairs of Konohamaru's house. It was rather large, but that wasn't surprising, considering who they were related to the late third Hokage. *But now, not only do they hate me, most people fear me.* He banged on the door, *But that doesn't matter, Konohamaru is an old friend. And I still care.*
The door opened and Konohamaru's father stood there, "Naruto?"
Naruto panted. "Konohamaru.where is he?"
The man smirked, "In his room, but you aren't going to be seeing him."
Naruto glared and pushed past the man and ran up the stairs. He burst into Konohamaru's room, only to find him huddled on the bed crying.
The younger boy looked up, his medium brown hair was messed up and his eyes were puffy from crying.
"Konohamaru." Naruto started.
"Go away Naruto!" Konohamaru cried.
The blond boy went and sat on the bed next to Konohamaru. "I heard what happened."
The smaller boy sat up and glared at Naruto. "No one will shut up about it! No one! And no one knows what it's like! But they continue to talk about it! Why don't they just shut up?!"
Naruto frowned, "It must be terrible."
"What would YOU know?" Konohamaru shouted.
Suddenly Konohamaru's dad barged in, he was holding a bat. "Naruto! You stupid punk! Get out of here!"
Naruto sighed and stood up. He didn't feel like fighting with the man. "Anyways, Konohamaru. At least people care enough to acknowledge it and worry. I didn't get fuck all when it happened to me. Come talk to me, if you want."
And with that, Naruto leaped out Konohamaru's window and began walking home.
Konohamaru's father glared after Naruto then slammed the window shut, "Stupid brat. Konohamaru, Don't go fraternizing with that freak."
Konohamaru just stared blankly at the wall and Naruto's last line repeated through his mind, ".when it happened to me." he whispered.
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Baka: *blinks* Oh my god.it's Konohamaru! Naruto's friend! :D Of course, you have to remember that Konohamaru is also 3 year older, so he's about 12 or 13. ^_^ How often is Konohamaru in fanfics? Not too often. ^_^ But he is so kawaii!
Inner Baka: Ne, that was sad too! Stupid foreigners, raping Konoha's little boys.
Baka: Yeah! Hee, betcha wanna know what happens next! *plans like a crazy person* MWA HA HA HA HA HA!
IB: Uhm, ok.
Inner Baka: Heh, I'm still surprised you want to actually work.
Baka: Hee hee, this one is gonna be great, ne IB?
IB: I guess.
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Review Response:
Red Rose: ^_^ Maybe he should check for signs of insanity. O.o I wouldn't be surprised if he was unstable. ^_^
WuffieLuver: Hee, Sorry, but I like writing, I don't mean to make you LAZY WRITERS look bad.-.-' hm, maybe it will encourage you guys to SPEED UP..o.o.tee hee, erm, j/k.*ahem* Inner Baka: *screams* get it away! Get it away! O.o
BishieHuggler: *grins* Well, Sasuke doesn't fit the category of "many people" ..*ahem* and thanks! *dies of large head* inflated ego is gonna get to me soon.
Chibi Dragon: As soon as you know what it's rated for? Rated for mature content, *ahem* rape *ahem* semi-descriptive..not overly descriptive though. But only in chapter 2, and it isn't that bad. Really. It isn.t And I'mma gonna add you to my MSN list now, since I have your msn thing WHEEE! Beware!
Kyuubigirl: I update! See? :D It's all shiny and updated! SHINY!
Carrot stix: mmm.carrots.oh, and it will be shounen-ai. But it won't be much, mostly recognizing feelings. ^_^ *prances around* Well, since they are older, they will realize things and stuff blah blah blah. Naruto and Sasuke are a hot couple and I love them and moo I like things *rant rant rant*
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Word list:
Ramen: Japanese noodle dish, in this case, miso ramen, which is noodles in some type of soup base.
Chan: A title given to children, sometimes women, amongst close friends, pets, "pets", and stuffed animals.
Ne: Hey.
Chunin: A ninja rank where they are from. It's a commander class. Meaning they can become leaders in groups, instead of being students or subordinates. Though they do still have to take subordinate slots at times.
Genjutsu: Illusionary techniques. Like make illusions.o.o.lol.hypnosis, and little things like that :D
Ninjutsu: Ninja techniques. These are often special attacks, like fire breath, or sand wall, or water dragon. There are infinite possibilities here.
Ino-pig: Ino is Sakura's childhood friend/rival. They constantly bicker over boys and stuff. The "pig" title was given to her, because of a card game in Japan, where the "Ino" card was a pig.
Naruto's clones? : Naruto has an attack called "Kage bunshin no jutsu". This is just creating clones of yourself, made of real flesh and blood. It's a higher level technique, and very few people know it.
Uzumaki Naruto Rendan: Uzumaki Naruto is his name, rendan mean combo. It's an attack he created; it is a bunch of physical attacks.
Hokage: Leader of the leaf village, and also the best ninja in the village. Currently the fifth Hokage is in place. Though I am not going to get into detail as to hat happened to the third one.
Konohamaru: the third Hokage's grandson. He is named after the village. And every treats him specially. No one sees him as Konohamaru; they see them as "the 3rd's grandson". When he was younger, he met Naruto, and followed him around all over, and had him teach him things. So they are close. He is also a few years younger than Naruto.
People treating Naruto like crap: Naruto has a demon sealed inside of him, one that almost destroyed the village. The adults are the only ones that know that, and were sworn to secrecy. But they still don't like Naruto, and treat him poorly.
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Disclaimer: I own Naruto. And know what else I own? Microsoft! Yeah! It's true! I swear on the grave of the t-rex I also own. *nods*
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After Innocence Chapter 2
....
Sasuke stepped into the restaurant and looked around. He spotted Naruto at the usual table, with his arms around two girls.
Naruto looked up at the entrance and saw Sasuke. "Hey! Sasuke! Come sit down!" then he mumbled something to the girls, and they left.
Sasuke went and sat across from Naruto, "How do you manage to make them leave?"
Naruto smiled slyly, "All they want is a little attention, so I talk to them, flirt with them etcetera, and then they are satisfied and will leave when you ask."
Sasuke sighed, "I'd rather them stalk me quietly, than talk to them."
Naruto chuckled, "As cold as always." Then he called to the server for some ramen.
Sasuke ordered too, then smiled at Naruto, "So, what was this mission that you wanted-"
"Sakura-chan!" Naruto shouted and waved.
Sasuke turned around and spotted the pink haired girl. She walked briskly to the table and sat down. She seemed stressed.
Naruto also noticed this and asked, "Ne, Sakura-chan, what's up?"
Sasuke closed his eyes and got ready for an earful of inane chattering. They were getting used to Sakura's rants. She often does when something gets on her nerves.
But, her mouth isn't the only thing that has grown. Her abilities have also improved, and she has become not only the smartest, but the strongest female ninja in Chunin rank. Her abilities lie in Genjutsu, and she has been picking up healing and water Ninjutsu.
"That stupid Ino-pig has gone and done it again! She knew I liked him! But she went and asked him out! I can't believe her!" Sakura ranted.
*Too bad she only worries about boys and her looks.* Sasuke thought.
Two bowls of steaming ramen were set down in front of Naruto and Sasuke. "Hey, miss, would you like anything?" the server asked.
Sakura thought for a moment, "Sure, spicy chicken please!" She smiled.
After Sakura got her ramen, Naruto began his story about his mission.
".and then there were these three rouges, they turned out to be ninjas! They took the woman hostage and then." Naruto continued his story.
*He talks more than Sakura* Sasuke though amused. *But at least he's more interesting.*
".and then this other guy came out of NOWHERE and me and my clones did our good ol' 'Uzumaki Naruto rendan'!" he grinned, "And that was that! Hee hee hee!"
Sasuke smiled, "Sounds fun. Actually, it sounds a million times better than what I have to do."
Sakura nodded. "Yeah. You get all the exciting missions, while we are stuck doing teaching and small missions."
Naruto grinned, and they were finishing their meals, when Naruto overheard a conversation.
".did you hear what happened to the late third Hokage's grandson?" a woman at another table said to her friend.
Naruto's ears perked up. *Konohamaru?* Naruto thought *What happened to him?*
"No, what?" the other woman said.
"I heard that some foreigner harassed him!" the first woman said.
"Harassed as in." the second woman said.
"Beaten and raped." the first one said quietly.
Naruto dropped his chopsticks and bowl, spilling his ramen on the table.
Sasuke looked up at him, "Hm? Naruto? What's up?"
Naruto got up and went to the women, "WHAT DID YOU SAY?!"
The women scoffed and glared at him, slightly fearing the boy. "Foreigner my ass, it was probably you."
Naruto blanched. He felt tears sting his eyes. "I would never." then he ran out of the restaurant.
Sasuke got up and went to the women, "What were you talking about?"
The women smiled up at him.
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Naruto ran towards Konohamaru's house. *Those stupid women how dare they!* he thought angrily. *Though the people of this town do hate me, how dare they say that! I would never do that!*
He ran up the front stairs of Konohamaru's house. It was rather large, but that wasn't surprising, considering who they were related to the late third Hokage. *But now, not only do they hate me, most people fear me.* He banged on the door, *But that doesn't matter, Konohamaru is an old friend. And I still care.*
The door opened and Konohamaru's father stood there, "Naruto?"
Naruto panted. "Konohamaru.where is he?"
The man smirked, "In his room, but you aren't going to be seeing him."
Naruto glared and pushed past the man and ran up the stairs. He burst into Konohamaru's room, only to find him huddled on the bed crying.
The younger boy looked up, his medium brown hair was messed up and his eyes were puffy from crying.
"Konohamaru." Naruto started.
"Go away Naruto!" Konohamaru cried.
The blond boy went and sat on the bed next to Konohamaru. "I heard what happened."
The smaller boy sat up and glared at Naruto. "No one will shut up about it! No one! And no one knows what it's like! But they continue to talk about it! Why don't they just shut up?!"
Naruto frowned, "It must be terrible."
"What would YOU know?" Konohamaru shouted.
Suddenly Konohamaru's dad barged in, he was holding a bat. "Naruto! You stupid punk! Get out of here!"
Naruto sighed and stood up. He didn't feel like fighting with the man. "Anyways, Konohamaru. At least people care enough to acknowledge it and worry. I didn't get fuck all when it happened to me. Come talk to me, if you want."
And with that, Naruto leaped out Konohamaru's window and began walking home.
Konohamaru's father glared after Naruto then slammed the window shut, "Stupid brat. Konohamaru, Don't go fraternizing with that freak."
Konohamaru just stared blankly at the wall and Naruto's last line repeated through his mind, ".when it happened to me." he whispered.
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Baka: *blinks* Oh my god.it's Konohamaru! Naruto's friend! :D Of course, you have to remember that Konohamaru is also 3 year older, so he's about 12 or 13. ^_^ How often is Konohamaru in fanfics? Not too often. ^_^ But he is so kawaii!
Inner Baka: Ne, that was sad too! Stupid foreigners, raping Konoha's little boys.
Baka: Yeah! Hee, betcha wanna know what happens next! *plans like a crazy person* MWA HA HA HA HA HA!
IB: Uhm, ok.