Hello, this is my first poem and fan fiction that I ever put in. The person I wrote the poem is about Akito. What he feels and who he is like a wolf. Please give me your opinion for this poem.
Trapped With In
I'm a kin to the vampire,
I'm proud,
I'm grace,
I'm superior,
I'm imperial,
I'm all ever knowing.
Here I stand in this room
Full of power at my finger tip,
Those of my fresh and my blood
Knows I am god.
Those I approve as my friend
Will be protected, feed, and watched,
As if they were my own.
I'm superior and imperial.
Fear me, huge me, love,
I'm a friend to you,
Unless you offend me
I will kill you.
This is my power.
That goes without saying
For the fear of my kin;
A cruse that will shake
Even the firmest of the seven hells.
Hope is little and for between
The cruse is real for all to behold.
Now the trap is set
There is no escape.
What do you think? Is it good or bad? Does it seem deep? Please review and let me know how bad it is. Thanks.