Well guys this is a country song my friend sang at the talent show but I was surprised everyone liked it even the goths and punks like me and I thought I could write a story about it to so here it goes...it's also 3or more chapters

She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

Repeat Chorus

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Repeat Chorus

Yumi...a girl I loved we thought she would never change until that day.

Flashback

We were in highschool now...I was now 17,Yumi was 18,Odd was 17,Jeremie was 17,and Aelita was 17 turning 18 really soon...

I waited for Yumi like I did everyday...but today instead of wearing a black turle neck and pants she was wearing a black long school dress that was 8 inches above her ankles and a black sweater.The gang and I wore our usual clothes wondering what was going on.Her hair was 2 inches longer and more beautiful then ever.Ohh yeah Yumi and I've been going out for a year and a half.

"Hey Ulrich..."Yumi said grabbing my left arm and looking at me.

This all happened when her parents died and she moved with this old man...who hated people..he was her uncle.

"Hey Yumi"I said looking down at her.

She wore that same dress yesterday the day after she moved in with him.

When I looked down at her she had make-up on...now I was really suspicous.She still smiled so I felt good knowing she was alright.

Her mother held her back a year because she thought she needed it but...Yumi was the second smartest person I knew.

Yumi and I walked to class together and so did the others.We went to the same classes because we could arange them ourselves this year.Even though Yumi and I were dating there still was one person trying to break us up to have me.

"Ulrich dear I'm here!"Sissi said coming next to me taking a seat in Yumis' seat.

"Uhm I'm sitting here"Yumi said tapping Sissi's shoulder.

"Who died today your uncle?"Sissi said scotting Yumi's hand off her shoulder and looking at her dress.

"Sissi we don't need your ...just go away."Aelita said coming over to the seat behind us...Also Aelita and Jeremie are engaged...he proposed to her at the Dance in front of usfive weeks agowith a golden ring that said Aelita with diamonds...ofcourse she said yes.Yes we're young but we were all going to the same college.

The teacher looked down at Sissi and told her to go to another seat.Everyone looked the same.The boys got taller and muscular.The girls hair got longer (Aelita's got as long as Yumi's old hair and Yumi cut her's a lot) and they were more mature looking.Jeremie wore contacts and longer baggyer tan jeans (his eyes are blue I think).

The teacher looked at Yumi and frowned a sad one.

Hey don't hate me but I'm still writing

Okay I had to fix some things sorry...