Well guys this is a country song my friend sang at the talent show but I was surprised everyone liked it even the goths and punks like me and I thought I could write a story about it to so here it goes...it's also 3or more chapters


She walks to school with the lunch she packed
Nobody knows what she's holdin' back
Wearin' the same dress she wore yesterday
She hides the bruises with linen and lace

The teacher wonders but she doesn't ask
It's hard to see the pain behind the mask
Bearing the burden of a secret storm
Sometimes she wishes she was never born

Through the wind and the rain
She stands hard as a stone
In a world that she can't rise above
But her dreams give her wings
And she flies to a place where she's loved
Concrete angel

Somebody cries in the middle of the night
The neighbors hear, but they turn out the lights
A fragile soul caught in the hands of fate
When morning comes it'll be too late

Repeat Chorus

A statue stands in a shaded place
An angel girl with an upturned face
A name is written on a polished rock
A broken heart that the world forgot

Repeat Chorus


Yumi ran home to her uncles as fast as she could.When she entered the i-story house with only one small kitchen,a big living-room,2 bed-rooms,and 2 bath-rooms.

"Sorry I'm late I had to go to the library and return your book called 'Murders of the Night'?Is that correct?"Yumi said placing the late fee slip on the table with the beers and cig on it next to him.

"20.00...I don't have the money"he said taking a puff of his cig.

"What happened to my parents money?"Yumi said getting ticked off.

"I spent it..."He said putting his sig out in the full ashtray."Go get some money and don't come back until you have some...anyways it's spring break you have time now get out of here and get $500.00 ...now go!"

"It's only $20.00"Yumi said looking at the slip.

"I know I'll spend the rest on cig's,beer,and whatever I want now get out of here!"He said throwing a book at Yumi's shoulder hitting her.

Yumi ran to her room and started packing.Yumi took off her dress and stood there in her bra and underwear.All she could see were faided bruises.Yumi sighed and put on a long black sweater and long black pants hiding the bruises.Yumi ran out of the house with a suitcase and a diary in her hand.She turned the knob and left the house.

'Mabye I should never come back...'Yumi thought as she walked towards the school.

Yumi screamed when she thought about this...

The neighbors heard her evrynight but they turned out there lights like everything was alright.


"Odd I'm worried about Yumi..."I said as I heard a knock on the door."I'll get it..."

I went to open the door and accidently tripped over Kiwi.I finally made it to the door only to find...

"Yumi!"I said looking at her crying with only a suitcase and a diary in her hand.

Yumi looked down then dropped her stuff and hugged me crying on my shoulder.I hugged her back telling her it was okay...but she still cried.

"Ulrich..."She cried backing away from me."I need a place to stay..."

"Yumi...it's okay you can stay here...with me."I said picking her stuff up and setting it next to my bed.

"I need to change I'll be right back..."Yumi said wiping away her tears.

5 minutes later

Yumi walked in with a blacklong-sleeve shirtand black pants like her old outfit but it didn't show her stomach.

"Are you okay Yumi?"Odd asked looking at his friend.

"Yeah...I guess"Yumi mumbled taking a seat next to Ulrich.

"Yumi it's only 6:00 P.M. want to go somewhere?"Ulrich asked getting up offering Yumi a hand.

"Defintally(sp?)"Yumi said looking happier.

Ulrich turned to look at Odd only to see his friend smiling.Then ulrich felt his back pocket that held his wallet.Then he felt his front pocket that held a small box.

Ulrich put his hand into Yumi's as he left the school.

"So where'd you want to go Yumi?"Ulrich said hoping for the most romantic place.

"The beach to watch the sunset...and to dinner..."Yumi said smiling.

At the beach

Yumi stared at the sunset thinking about how her uncle did that to her he used to be nice.Then Ulrich interupted her thoughts by putting his arm around her shoulder making Yumi squint in pain because the bruise from earlier.

"Yumi are you okay?"Ulrich said looking at her.

"Yeah just fine"Yumi said falling asleep on Ulrichs shoulder.

Ulrich moved so that he wouldn't hurt her.

"Yumi do you want to go eat?"Ulrich said as he saw her wake up.

"Yeah lets go to Olive Garden(AN:Sry but thats my fav resturant that is fancy)."Yumi said still tired.

At Olive Garden

Yumi and Ulrich were about done until Ulrich took the small box out of his pocket.

"Yumi...I'll be right back hold on."Ulrich said walking over to a waiter.

5 minutes later

Ulrich walked back to the table with a empty hand.

"Yumi you almost ready to go?"Ulrich said smiling.

"Almost.."Yumi said taking another bite of her food.

Right after she said that a waiter walked over with the booklet(Don't remember what it's called) that held the amount due.

"Yumi may you open it please my hands are dirty."Ulrich lied and grinned.

"Sure..."Yumi said picking the booklet up with a strange look on her face.

Yumi open it not to find abill but a envelope with her name on it.Yumi opened the envelope taking quick glances at Ulrich every now and then.

Finally when it was open Yumi pulled out a gold ring with a not to big but not to small diamond on it.

"Ulrich?"Yumi said dazed.

Ulrich grinned and got on his knees.

"Yumi We've been dating for a while...When we were younger we were best friends and sometimes we thought more...But here we are today still going along this road...all I have to say is Yumi...will you make me the luckiest man on Earth?"Ulrich said bowing his head.

Yumi looked at him and then said the first thing in her mind "I would LOVE to."

Aftet Ulrich payed the bill they went to his dorm.When they got back Odd gasped as he looked at Yumis' hand.

"You-You guys are...(gulp) engaged?"Odd said surprised.

Ulrich looked down at Yumi as she smiled and nodded.

"This is wierd.."Odd said thinking about how Aileta and Jeremie were engaged as well.

Yumi came back two minutes later with a black belly tank-top and black pj shorts.

"You okay?"Odd asked as he looked at her once again.

Yumis' bruises were gone except for the one on her shoulder which wasn't big or faded.

"I'm fine I just hit my shoulder the other day."

When Odd went to sleep Yumi crawled in bed with Ulrich (nothing is going to happen)

They held hands and kissed eachother passiontly.

"Ulrich I love you."

"I love you too Yumi."

They fell asleep dreaming about the day that would come soon.

Well they thought it would.


Okay guys don't forget in this song the girl dies so that means the wedding can't hapen b/c thats the way it has to be...but I have a twist that no one can guess you can try but you won't get it right.