'Tis Rebecca. I edited your story for you! Here it is. I could have
done more
for it, but I didn't want to put my own specific style in it...
Nexus52 was walking along the path from Varrock to Lumbridge because he
was on a new quest which Jagex had released in the game, entitled
'Chicken Invasion'.
When he arrived at the farm where the chickens were, he saw an old man.
He
made his way over to the old man, in hopes that he could acquire more
information about this enigmatic quest.
"What are you doing here?" the old man asked, turning to face Nexus 52.
"I am searching for a mighty ice breathing chicken, do you know where
it could
be?" Nexus52 responded.
"Yes, I have encountered the fowl of which you speak, young traveler,"
the
old man responded, with a look of pain crossing his face. "You will
find it
down the road at the old abandoned chicken farm...but be careful. It
sounds
laughable, but it is a mighty chicken indeed..."
Nexus52 thanked the old man and set off towards the abandoned farm.
He walked along the path until he came to the chicken farm, just as the
mysterious old man had said. He pried open the rusty gate, and entered
the
building...After investigating the coops for a while, he finally saw,
in one of
the pens, an enormous chicken surrounded by several other, smaller
chickens. He
entered the coop, and went towards the bird. The chicken gazed up and
charged at
him; fortunately, he dodged out of the way just in time. The chicken
was level
350; and even though he was quite an accomplished citizen of Gielenor
at level
150 (an impossible level for real players to achieve), his strength
dwindled in
comparison to the fowl which was besieging him. He drew his dragon
sword from
his sheath, and attempted to slash the chicken.
Alas, didn't even do a sliver's worth of damage and the sword, his
trustworthy
dragon sword, broke on the chicken's impenetrable feathers. However,
having a
sword broken on its body angered the chicken, and it made use of its
Freezing
Peck attack, which froze poor Nexus52 for a tiny bit. As soon as he
had
defrosted, he charged the chicken and hit 60. Unfortunately, the
chicken
appeared to have healing powers. Nexus52 took out some food and ate it
to
regain the hitpoints that he had lost. Then he took out the only
weapon he had
left; a new sword that had just recently been added to the game; The
Lava Sword
of Volcantis. He assailed the fowl with it, over and over; slashing
and
hacking...yet not making a dent in the ice chicken's well-defended
stamina. He
then realized that, to end the bloodshed, he was required to use the
Shadow Orb
of Zenmar to combine the sword with a dark halberd. Upon this
revelation, he
produced his halberd and the Shadow Orb of Zenmar from his faded
satchel, and
hastily lay the Sword and his halberd on the blood-soaked ground in the
shape of
the letter 'X'. This caused the ice chicken to regard his activities
with
curiosity, and to cease its assault.
A flash of light; and a new weapon, the Sword of Shava, flew into his
hand (A/N:
'Shadow' plus 'Lava' makes 'Shava'). He took the Sword into his hands,
gripped
it tight, and began to circle around the chicken. In a rage, he
slashed and
hacked at the chicken; but to no avail...Suddenly the
Sword of Shava emitted a lucent twisting shaft of black and crimson
energy! The
beam hit the chicken, causing it to combust and leave naught but a
small,
gleaming medallion in its wake...Nexus52 cautiously stepped forward to
examine
the shining medallion; he realized that it was the Medallion of Arafis
that he
had sought! Now, all he had to do was to return it to the enigmatic
man who had
implored him to seek it. The man, he realized, was the old man, whose
face lit
up when he saw the medallion.
"I thank you, adventurer, with all my heart," he declared, his voice
trembling
with joy. "This priceless medallion had been handed down in my family
for
generations. That giant chicken had looted it from me. I had doubted
that you
would be able to reacquire it for me...Again, I thank you."
He rummaged around in his knapsack.
"As a reward I will happily give you this egg of an Ice Chicken, so
that you may
train such a beast of your own. I wish you luck in all of your
endeavors!"
"Thank you..." replied Nexus52, taking the frigid egg from the old
man's
leathery hands. As he took hold of it, he felt himself becoming
stronger; he
realised that he had gained experience in every stat, and that he had
gained 2
combat levels...
THE END
(A/N: I hope you like it; this is my revised version. There may be a
sequel, but
I don't know. I am going to dedicate this fanfic to Rebecca The
Eccentric
Crackpot. FLAMES NOT ACCEPTED! I own the words Shava, Volcantis, and
Zenmar.)