don't know, is this actaully about BBI? I mean, it has Pride in it but it doens't really follow the story line. But anyway, hope you enjoy!
Equivalent Exchange
Prolouge
Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return. To obtain someting of equal value must be lost. That is alchemy's first law of equivalent exchange. In those days we belived that to be the world's one and only truth...
But the real world is incomplete. There is nothing that can describe the world...
Equivalent exchange is not the world's truth. Because if it was, they wouldn't have taken it. What Nii-san gave up wasn't equivalent. Nothing can replace what he gave up. That's why I have to get it back again. For his sake and mine...
Episode 1: The Circle Written in Blood Part 1
"Nii-san?"
A 14 year old boy stood up from the middle of a red circle. The boy's name ws Alphonse Elric, formally an empty suit of armor.
"Nii-san? Where are you? Answer me!"
Al couldn't see because of the smoke. He tried to walk, but his legs were wobbly and tripped.
"Nii-san! Please! If you can here me, please! Answer me!"
Al was scarred and worried. What if they took him? What if Nii-san was...dead? Al shook away the thought immediately. 'Nii-san can't die'
The smoke finally cleared and Al could see clearly again.
"NII-SAN!"
Al ran towards the body. He carefully put the blond boy's head on his lap.
"Nii-san! Wake up! Please! Wake up!"
Edward was stone cold. Al feared the worst but he knew better. Even thought it was very shallow, Ed was still breathing.
'I have to get him to a hospital!' Al thought. He placed ED on his back and rushed out of the room, only to bump into someone.
"Colonel!"
"...Alphonse?..."
"Yes! It's me! Please help Nii-san! He's freezing cold and he's hardly breathing at all!"
Roy snapped back to reality.
"Lieutenant Hawkeye! Take Fullmetal to the Central Hospital immediately!"
"Yes sir!" Riza said. She took Ed off of Al's back and carried him to the car. Al started to follow, but Ro stopped him.
"I want you to stay and explain what happened,"
"Oh, Ok. This way," Al said, leading Roy back into the room. "This is the place we did the transmutation,"
Roy surveyed the room. He walked towards the huge red transmutation circle. The same transmutation circle's were written on the ceiling and on the walls.
"Alphonse..these transmutation circles..they're written in blood,"
"What!"
"Yes, blood. It seems to be your brother's,"
"Nii-san's!"
"Did you not know?"
"No. Nii-san did the preperations. He wouldn't let me in. But when he opened the door again, he was plae and was panting a bit,"
"Probably because of the blood loos. By the looks of it, this alot of blood,"
"WIll Nii-san be alright?"
"I odn't know, but he's strong. He isn't the type to just die,"
Al nodded.
"Come one. Let's go to the hospital," Roy said. The two quickly left the room and ran towards the hospital.
End Episode 1
How was it?
Preview for the next chapter... Episode 2: The Circle Written In Blood Part 2 Taisa is like a fatherly figure to us...Don't you think so too Nii-san?