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I noticed that in my last chapter, there we're a few problems, so I'll triple-check this time.

STAR

WARS

EPISODE III

THE BEGGING OF THE END

CHAPTER 2

"R2! NOW!" Anakin yelled ad the little droid went hey wire as a distraction. Obi-wan and Anakin used their force powers to receive their light sabers from Grievous.

Grievous backed away and said "Kill them" to his guards.

Anakin immediately cut his enemy in half and went to kill the droids taking away the chancellor. He sliced up both and cut the chancellors bonds.

Obi-wan cut off the guard's head and started to walk away thinking it would crumple and die but instead it waved its staff around and acted lively. Obi went back and slashed it up, and it finally crumpled and died.

"Hurry!" Ari yelled, she was much faster than Ken and Kinkxe were. They ran down endless hallways until they got to the hanger. There was one ship left, the ship they came in. It was a republic LAAT. The republic LAAT is more of a carrier than a fighter.

"I'll pilot this." Ken said jumping into the pilot's seat.

"Are you sure Ken?" Ari asked worriedly.

"Yeah I'll be fine."

Grievous jumped over a control panel and picked up one of his fallen guards staff. Obi wan stopped him from going one was and Anakin the other way. Grievous looked at both Jedi and said, "You lose General Kenobi." and he threw the staff at the bridge window and the air was being sucked out. Grievous's magnetized feet kept him on top of the ship.

General Grievous jumped back into the ship and went to the life pod section of it. He got in one and said mockingly to no one, "Time to abandon ship" and launched all life pods that could launch so Obi-wan and Anakin couldn't leave.

The back up metal shields went up and the air stopped from being sucked out. Obi-wan looked at Anakin.

"Can you pilot this ship?"

"You mean land what's left of it," Anakin replied, "well I say what we can do is relevant, strap yourselves in."

The other three Jedi we're able to make it out before… BOOM. The ship broke in half.

"Will they be ok Master Kinkxe?" Ari asked.

"They'll be fine. Head for out capital ship, the men there could help us get back too Coruscant

BOOM.……

"We lost something" Anakin reported.

Obi-wan looked at the computer screen. "Don't worry we're still flying half a ship."

The ship was picking up speed. They had entered the atmosphere. The y kept getting closer to the city. The ship was on fire. Five ships came around them and started to pour water on the half-burning ship.

"Look a landing strip." Obi-wan said.

"We're coming in too hot." Anakin said. They started to get closer and closer to the ground. They suddenly met with the ground and scraped across the landing strip and hitting a tower. They finally came to a stop.

Obi-wan ran his fingers through his hair. "Another happy landing."

Ok I know this chapter was short, but I'm trying to figure out the next one. Ok so reviews would be nice and ideas. You'll see more of my characters in the next chapter.

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