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Disclaimer: Teen Titans do not belong to me, only Rain (my evil weird charcter is) but who needs her? (dumps her into the trash bin) I'm just a poor writer trying to improve my low skills!!!!
Chapter 6: Orange Lily, Hatred
Rain POV
I stared down the deep dark river looking right at my reflection as the flowers flowed swiftly across the river.
Their orange petals so smooth so delicate, so beautiful...just as mother.
My tears never seemed to dry out because after one problem or another those tears came back. I guess crying wasn't such a bad thing since it was sort of a stress reliever to get rid of all my thoughts.
When I last saw her she gave me her beautiful smiles as if nothing in the world was wrong. She was strong, caring and mature but I never found out why people hated her so much...she always kept smiling despite it all...
Why?
Thats one word that always use. I am so clueless and naive. Sometimes my curiousity gets the best out of me and I turn into a different person.
That side of me that always wants to break away.
She kept me happy, controlled, and focused. She always held my hand grasping it with her warm hands.
But...After she left I wanted to keep that warmth forever but slowly it was growing cold and soon enough my hands felt as cold as ice. Maybe it was because I started living on the streets. And the streets was anything but comferting.
I remember laying there like a maniac mumbling things even I don't remember and thats when a man came out of his car and took me in his wings. When I finally felt the warmth of someone I felt wonderful, little did I know that those warmth and wings were a demon's.
Mama, why is it so hard to make choices, but whenever I was with you everything seemed right?
This new person to me was the only thing I could lean my shoulder on. He was very into physical activities and because of that he started to teach me how to defend myself. He would always yell at me for being so careless and too soft, and the more he lectured me, the more I belived that innocence was ridiculous.
Before I knew it i totally changed. Cold, dark, and violent. Blood to me was like water to a person. It was something I couldn't live without and if I did not see it i went insane.
Mama, where are you?
My new father also told me when i fight, it should be like fighting with those who killed my mother. How did he know? Because he knew who did it. And he wouldnt tell me until my skills were correct.
Mama where is your voice calling from why is it so faint?
That was when he broke the news to me that the one who killed my beloved mother was Bruce. Bruce Wayne. Bruce Wayne was kept in heavy secruity so it was impossible to even look at him, but my father told me who his son was.
Robin. My childhood friend. My new rival.
Hello! everyone sorry for the short chappie once more i rushed. because i have terrible news! I might have no internet because my parents are angry with my sisters grades so they're gonna take out what they think is distracting her studies.which is the computor that is my life! Grrrrr...O well ill be able to still post up chappies so dont worry! next chapter will be when i send out my drawings so everyone give me your email address so i can send you the picture!
Did this chappie suck? Does this kinda make you feel sorry for Rain? Noone is pure evil. there like the color white. it starts out so innocent but can change into any color (i read that in one of my mangas lol) but its true! What do you think is going to happen next!? Whats Rains true plans?! so many questions even I dont know!
THANK YOU EVERY ONE WHO REVIEWED I APPRECIATE IT A BUNCH! keep it up! see ya later! (orry for grammer mistakes or confusion, if you have any questions, include it with the review! thank you again bye!)
PS, do i have a weird style of writting? Do i make it way too dramatic?