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Twice Forsaken
Chapter II: Spring

by Kochan

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The feeling of being within a maiden experiencing her first time is not merely limited to the physical sensations, but also involves the responsibility of ensuring she is ready for the act, that she will not shy from the pain and that the experience is a pleasant one.

But you would not allow any of this...

The night was unlike any other I'd passed in Spring. The air was still and the Cicadas were mute. Not even the owls dared to cry out.

I heard you upon the rear porch and eased the Shoji door apart. What little moonlight there was had been obscured by the withered clouds overhead. A familiar form, crouched in the darkness...there was no mistaking it was you.

No message this time. Only the pleading in your eyes.

Silence said all we needed to say. Your offer, my refusal. Even as I shut the screen door, your face continued to haunt me in the darkness.

How else could I have responded?

Hours passed before the dawn came, bringing no answers with the hazy glow on the horizon. My numb fingers slid the door aside once more.

You hadn't moved.

I turned my back, leaving the door open.

My first mistake...

There had been frost on the leaves, yet you didn't hesitate to shed your garments upon entering. As the last vestments of your modesty fell to the floor, my resolve weakened.

Your lily white arms snaked around my neck.

I pushed you away and yet I could not resist your lips as they pressed against mine.

My second mistake...

My body succumbed to your embrace, lust coursing through me like rampant venom. Fingers like talons peeled my Yukata down, and with a single knot bound my elbows together.

You knelt and coiled your purple headband tight around my ankles. As you devoured me, I closed my eyes.

Then I was forced back, a Shinobi Elite but powerless. You straddled my hips but despite my struggles, your bonds held firm.

As you destroyed your maidenhood upon me, a sharp chill ran through my body...like an icy dagger driven into my spine.

Your eyes were misted as you carried through the ordeal, impaling that fresh, bleeding wound...again and again.

I grunted as your bewitching form drained my essence.

My body shuddered in the pleasure you had forced upon me.

I felt you remove the binds at my legs and you returned the band to your forehead. For a moment, you hovered above before crawling away to clothe yourself.

Then you'd gone, just as you'd arrived: In silence and in stealth, like a Jezebel Butterfly after mating.

Not a word was exchanged between us and I was left spent and confused.

Author's Notes:

The world is fraught with lies. This story was unknowingly born a lie. Eighteen months ago it came into being with the intent of being a One-Shot and nothing more. Not everything is as we as think it to be. It has spawned a second chapter and perhaps more to come. It began to undergo metamorphosis after I lost a self-imposed challenge and may well be a full fledged story when it is finished. I cannot say how it will turn out for now as thay may end up being a lie as well. Nevertheless, I hope you enjoyed reading the second chapter. Both the first and second chapters (Written according to rules set by hers truly), and the story as a whole are for TigerEyes. And oh yes...before I forget...not all lies are bad ;) Till next...Ko-Chan

Replies:

TigerEyes: It's all here. Features Ayane and either Hayate or Ryu as requested :) If Chapter I was walking a hard road, Chapter II was crawling the same on my belly. And yes, I know it's taken a while but there have been so many changes since I began that the story hardly remsembles what it started of as (Like most of what I write). No doubt this chapter will be a little harder to take than the previous one, but you know me...I don't pull punches. And don't feel cheated on the length; I had to cut it down from 2500 words to 1700 words to less than 500. Less detail, far more impact. It wasn't written to cause anyone pain...but in a fashion to get a point across, one I believe is made quite well. I'm not sure if you'll enjoy this one but I can certainly hope that you do ;)

Kurmoi: And congratulations to TigerEyes for completing her first full Chapter Fic ( too . Thanks for the kind words :) As for who the male is (Once again), quite simply either Hayate or Ryu once again. And yes...it's no longer a one shot as you can see. Hope you enjoyed this one anyhows.

Unforgiven Gamer: Hey. Appreciate the time you took to read it. And the point about allowing the reader to decide who they want to be in the place of the male is delivberate in this chapter as it is in the previous one. That won't change in subsequent chapters.

Me: Reading my other works will prob give you a pretty good idea about my thoughts on the whole incest thing. And there won't be an answer to the identity of the male unfortunately - It's purely up to the reader :) Nevertheless, hope you enjoyed the chapter (if you did happen to read it).