Some of you read my profile and found a new shaman king story called Yoh and Zeke's baby-sitting service. You may also know I plan to make a manga one day Called Right Eye Dragon. Today we find out why it is called right eye dragon. I made pictures of my prototype for the main character. If you want to see these designs just tell me. I sent them to yoshiru not to long ago. And what the dragon of the story looks like. I plan to make more prototypes but my favorite has to be the one with black hair.

I don't own shaman king.

Ch.9 Right Eye Dragon.

"Come on Yoh unleash the beast within show me your true form" said Hao.

"NO NEVER" said Yoh.

"Oh come on I killed the one you loved" said Hao.

This caused Yoh to snap and the beast within started to take over.

"AHHHH NO I WON'T LOOSE CONTROL I CAN'T NNOOOOOOOOOO" yelled Yoh in pain.

"Come on Yoh just give up let it take control" said Hao.

Under Yoh's eyes began to appear wide purple lines one on each side. A purple triangle pointing down appeared on his forehead. And he grew a scar that went around his neck like a circle. Yoh's hair which was covering his right eye through out the entire story uncovered his eye. It wasn't a human eye it was a dragon's eye.

"Yes he's loosing control finally now I can finally fight the real Yoh." Said Hao.

Yoh's other eye became a dragon's eye both were blood red. Yoh's hands became like claws and Yoh started to grow giant wings made of fire. Yoh began to grow teeth like a dragons.

"Finally he's here the dragon of the four elements" said Hao.

"Yoh" said Anna just minutes from death.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH" yelled Yoh as his body became a blinding light.

After the light cleared he didn't look the same. He had black hair like my main character his outside changed a lot but now he was a blood thirsty beast in a humans body.

"So Hao this is what you wanted is it not" said Yoh.

"So you've come Doragon" said Hao.

"Well you called me out" said Doragon.

"Now I can finally see your true power" said Hao charging at him.

Doragon a.k.a. Yoh or Hikaru in my Manga he immediately shot fire out of his mouth except Hao dodged.

"Is that all you've got" asked Hao?

Doragon made the ground start to shake and made the ocean stir and the air to cause tornados and hurricanes and made lava come out of cracks in the floor.

"Well looks like I still have a trump card don't I" said Doragon.

"What the hell is this" said Hao.

"If you want to know then take a look at the environment around the castle" said Doragon.

Hao Noticed The Earth was out of whack it was like a freak of nature out side.

"What did you do" asked Hao?

"I'm just using my trump card" said Doragon.

The his arms got covered in fire and his legs were cover in water and his chest in rock and his wings became made of air.

"What are you doing" yelled Hao.

"Its time for you to die" said Doragon.

"NNNOOOOOO" cried out Hao as he was about to be killed.

"YOOOOH" cried out Anna with the last bit of her strength.

"Anna" said Doragon in Yoh's voice..

"Please Yoh Don't kill him please" said Anna fainting.

"Anna," said Yoh now in control of his body but still looking like a demon.

"What have I been doing I nearly killed someone what's become of me this is not who I am I'm not a killer" thought Yoh.

'You've been a killer all this time ' said a voice in his head.

"No I'm not a killer I am one who protects the weak" thought Yoh.

'You are a killer and by the time you realize it I'll be in control but for now I am going to curse you' said the voice.

Hao was so shocked he didn't notice he was about to fall backwards into a pit of lava.

"AAAAHHHHHHHH" yelled Hao falling into the pit.

"No Hao" said Yoh now in control of the body and grabbing his hand.

"Yoh you truly are to softhearted to even were you would save your enemies life" said Hao.

"Come on brothers don't let brothers die" said Yoh.

After that said Hao fell into the pit.

"HAO" yelled Yoh.

But then Hao came out of the pit on the spirit of fire. (in my manga will be a lava dragon.)

"Little bro you may have defeated me this time but I'll be back" said Hao throwing you an apple.

"What's this" said Yoh.

"If you give that to Anna she'll be just fine it a sacred apple ( check the legend of Zelda manga one will have this apple in it)

it can help any disease" said Hao leaving.

Yoh quickly rushed over to Anna and gave her a slice.

Anna was still asleep but Yoh could tell that she was feeling better.

The next day…

Anna awoke in her room at Yoh's hotel.

"What happened were am I what happened was it just a dream" said Anna. She looked to her right and noticed someone sleeping in a chair and had black hair.

"Yoh is that you" asked Anna?

"Please don't look at me" said Yoh with his head tilted down.

"Yoh come on you beat Hao you should be happy" she said trying to see his face and his big smile.

"I said don't look at me" yelled Yoh looking up!

Anna was shocked his face was like a demons.

"Yoh what happened to you" asked Anna in shock?

"This is my punishment" said Yoh.

"My punishment for not killing Hao when I had the chance" said Yoh.

"Yoh its okay you're still the same person on the inside" said Anna.

"No I'm not I nearly killed someone I don't kill I protect" yelled Yoh!

"It's okay Yoh you weren't you at the time" said Anna hugging him.

"Anna I don't you to die I can't let that happen" said Yoh.

"Yoh please just calm down I promise everything will turn out better in the end"

,000 years ago a dragon of four elements terrorized the world

until one day a brave swordsman defeated it.

The dragon swore that in the future he would return.

He returned as he said and reigned supreme once again.

The people fought this beast one more time but he was chased out.

The dragon took refuge in the baby he found first and cursed him.

Before he cursed the baby theses were his last words

"You may be able to defeat me but

one day this child will be under my control and do as I say

but until then I shall curse this baby with my very life

but don't get to comfortable because I'll be watching"

the dragon took refuge in the babies right eye .

Well what cha think. The legend about the dragon didn't come out as I planned I plan to put the legend in my profile so check it each day.

Please review. Remember I wrote another story.

AND TELL ME IF YOU WANT TO SEE WHAT DORAGON LOOKS LIKE.

CH.10 AN ANGELS GIFT.